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d meaningful but also help to broaden my horizons. Yours, Li Hua [精華點評 ] 這篇文章的寫作內(nèi)容是以表格形式呈現(xiàn) , 表格的內(nèi)容都是片段而不是完整的句子 , 因此往往省略主語 , 考生在寫作時候要注意避免句子不完整。 表示外形與iphone 3相似的時候 , 很多考生可以考慮到 be similar to iphone 3 in appearance, 但范文中使用了 retain almost all of the same design features as這個短語,使文章的語言更加高級和生動?!笨瓷先ニ坪跤腥齻€分句 , 但其實通過邏輯分析,這個句子用一個簡單句就可以表示出來 (“奧運會從只用三項射擊項目穩(wěn)步發(fā)展到現(xiàn)今的 17項” ), 也就是學生只需要使用 develop steadily from...to...這個詞組就可以把這個句子表述清楚了。 (3)1928:中斷 (23) Shooting was suspended in 1904 and 1928. (4) 1932:重回奧運會 (4) It returned to the Games in 1932. 合并: Shooting became an Olympic event officially in 1896, but it was suspended in 1904 and 1928. It didn’ t return to the Games until 1932. /Shooting became an Olympic event officially in 1896. Then, it was suspended in 1904 and 1928 but finally returned to the Games in 1932. [參考范文 ] Shooting, originated as a means of survival, developed into a sport only in the late 19th century. The sport first appeared in 1896, but none were contested during the 1904 and 1928 Games. The sport returned to the Olympics in 1932. Women were first allowed to pete in the Olympic shooting in 1968. The sport has grown steadily from just three shooting events at the 1896 Olympic Games to 17 today. 4. 連句成文。 句 1: (1) 射擊 ________ (2) 生存工具 _____________________ (3)直到 …… 才 …… __________ means of survival/means of making a living shooting not...until... 句 2~句 3: (4) (運動 )項目 ____________ (5) 中斷 ______________________ (6) 重回奧運會 ________________________ The sport returned to the Olympics / The Olympics were restarted. sports event be suspended/be paused 句 4: (7)允許婦女參加奧運射擊比賽 ______________________________________ ______________________________________ ______________________________________ _________ 句 5 (8)穩(wěn)步發(fā)展 ______________ allow/permit women to take part in/join in/pete in / participate in the Olympics或 women are admitted as petitors in the Olympics develop steadily 3. 難句翻譯 翻譯下列每組句子并合并成一句。射擊的背景和現(xiàn)狀分別是第一句和第五句 , 射擊的發(fā)展中 18961932年的變化可以用兩句話表述 , 1968年婦女第一次獲得參加奧運會的權(quán)利可以放在第四句描述。 你很榮幸地成為 2023北京奧運會的一名志愿者 , 負責編寫奧運比賽項目的英語介紹。 5. Students are