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【正文】 and other things inside. of reunion, luck and fortune a symbol best wishes express have a family reunion 假設(shè)你想說服你爸爸給你購買最新的一款手機(jī) — iphone 4, 請你根據(jù)以下寫作內(nèi)容給他描述 iphone 4的情況。 ［寫作內(nèi)容］ 介紹 1. 觸摸屏 , 第五代 iphone 2. 獨(dú)創(chuàng)的 , 被認(rèn)為世界上最好的智能機(jī) 外型 與 iphone 3相似 , 黑白兩種顏色 功能 1. 電池功能強(qiáng)大 , 支持 200小時(shí)待機(jī)時(shí)間 (standly time), 8小時(shí) 3G通話時(shí)間 2. 照相系統(tǒng)提高 3. 用聲音指示手機(jī)發(fā)短信等 4. 它能理解你說的話 , 給你幫助 [參考范文 ] The iPhone 4, a touchscreen smart phone, which is the fifth generation of the iPhone, is considered groundbreaking and the best smart phone in the world. Coming in two colors, black and white, it retains(保留 )almost all of the same design features as its predecessor (前身 ), the iPhone 3. However, with more powerful battery, it has 200 hours standby time and 8 hours talk time on 3G. What is more, the camera inside it is greatly developed. What is most amazing is that not only can you order it to do things like sending messages with your voice but also it can understand what you say and offer you help. [精華點(diǎn)評 ] 這是對一個(gè)新的電子產(chǎn)品的描述 , 考生可以使用生動(dòng)的語言描述 , 避免文章枯燥無味。如表示“突破性的” , 考生可以使用形容詞 groundbreaking, 或者名詞 breakthrough。 表示外形與iphone 3相似的時(shí)候 , 很多考生可以考慮到 be similar to iphone 3 in appearance, 但范文中使用了 retain almost all of the same design features as這個(gè)短語，使文章的語言更加高級和生動(dòng)。 最后兩句是表現(xiàn) iphone 4改善了的和新的功能 , 因此范文中補(bǔ)充了兩個(gè)細(xì)節(jié) with more powerful battery(第四句 )和 What is most amazing is that...(第五句 ), 使整個(gè)描述更有吸引力。 最近 , 你的英國筆友 Jack的學(xué)校開展了選修課 , 他來信詢問你校選修課的開展情況。請你根據(jù)以下提示 , 寫一封回信介紹你校選修課情況。包括以下內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)： 開展時(shí)間 每周三下午 4： 005： 00，一個(gè)學(xué)期 科目 1. 20門課程可供選擇，包括中國文學(xué)簡介， 電影鑒賞，書法等課程 2. 每學(xué)生可以報(bào)兩門 作業(yè) 沒有作業(yè)，鼓勵(lì)學(xué)生大量閱讀相關(guān)書籍 考試 論文方式 體會(huì) 有趣，開拓眼界，有意義 參考詞匯：選修課 elective course書法 calligraphy [參考范文 ] Dear Bob， I am pleased to introduce to you the elective courses of our school. The elective courses are held from 4:00 to 5:00 in the afternoon every Wednesday, lasting a term. Every student can choose two subjects out of 20 according to their own interests, such as the Brief Introduction of Chinese Literature, the Appreciation of Movies, and Calligraphy. There is no homework for the elective courses, but students are encouraged to do a lot of related reading, which provides us with a platform for our de
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