【正文】 person to person.a. During the past thirty years, developing countries have been greatly developed in many aspects.b. During the past thirty years, developing countries have made great progress in many aspects.a. We may encounter some problems which need not only natural science but also social science.b. We may encounter some problems whose solution involves knowledge not only of natural science but also of social science.a. What on earth is the role money playing in our society?b. What on earth is the role money plays in our society?a. When I refresh, I will do something which I like.b. When I relax, I will do something (that) I like.C. 倒裝句a. Only in this way, you can get the true job of achieving your goals.b. Only in this way, can you get the true job of achieving your goals.D. 句子的連接與簡(jiǎn)練句子的連接a. Second, whoever breaks the regulation should be fined or punished. Then everyone will ply with this regulation.b. Second, whoever breaks the regulation should be fined or punished so that everyone will ply with this regulation.a. The result is that your brain is less and less efficient, your process is slower and slower.b. The result is that your brain is less and less efficient, and your process is slower and slower.a. Community services as well as mass media are both golden chances to practice our ability, through which we can learn to cooperate with people, to contribute our intelligence to the society.b. Community service is a golden chance to use our ability, through which we can learn to cooperate with people and contribute our intelligence to society.a. But in fact, there are also many people who think numbers have nothing to do with luck.b. But there are also many people who think that numbers, in fact, have nothing to do with luck.指代不明a. Sports and movies are means of relieving depression and violent emotions. This is why they are necessary in a society.b. Sports and movies are necessary in a society in order to relieve depression and violent emotions.a. Leaders of the Women’s Liberation movement have criticized American doctors severely. They are angry – and justifiably so.b. Leaders of the women’s liberation movement have criticized the medical profession severely. They are angry – and justifiably so.a. In the Royal Shakespeare production of Othello, Frank Finlay played Iago and was suited to it.b. In the Royal Shakespeare production of Othello, Frank Finlay played Iago and was well suited to the role. 簡(jiǎn)練的表達(dá)a. As I had nothing to do, I decided to take a morning walk. So I went to the park.b. As I had nothing to do, I decided to take a walk to the park.a. As far as my ideal job is concerned, I think I want to be an interpreter in the future.b. As far as my ideal job is concerned, I want to be an interpreter.a. Some want to be doctors, some want to be teachers, some want to be engineers, and so on.b. Some want to be doctors, some want to be teachers, and some want to be engineers.a. These fake modities’ quality is always very poor. They may cause a great loss to the consumers, or even the life.b. As the quality of the fake modities is always very poor, they may cause great damage to the consumers, or even endanger their lives.E. 斷裂句a. Some persons thought the law is no good. Because they think setting off firecrackers is a beneficial thing.b. Some persons think the law is no good because they regard setting off firecrackers as a beneficial thing.a. However there are still a number of people who enjoy seeing films. Because the visual and audio effects of films are much better.b. However there are still a number of people who enjoy seeing films, because the visual and audio effects of films are much better.a. Almost everyone of us has bought some fake modities. For instance, fake shoes, fake bags, and the worst thing——fake medicine.b. Almost everyone of us has had the experience of buying fake modities, for instance, fake shoes, fake bags and, worst of all, fake medicines.F. 標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤amp?？佳杏⒄Z(yǔ)寫作常見(jiàn)語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤A. Article 冠詞a. The machines could not run and people would have to fall back on their hands to produce what are essential for them to keep alive.b. Machines could not run and people would have to fall back on their hands to produce what are essential for them to keep alive.a. The housing problem in big cities is rather a headache to both government and people.b. The housing problem in big cities is rather a headache to both the government and people.a. On the contrary, the percentages of milk and meat are on a rise.b. On the contrary, the percentages of milk and meat are on the rise.a. We can’t avoid being beaten by the others.b. We can’t avoid being beaten by others.a. It provides us with natural scenes and the life of all kinds of wild animals, with the explanation by the narrator.b. It provides us with views of natural scenes and a look of the life style of all kinds of wild animals, with an explanation by the narrator.a. And also, they treat