【正文】 at is, to lay down more roads in spacious areas and to open up more bus lines in downtown areas.a. With the development of big cities, a problem has arisen before us: traffic in cities has bee more and more serious than before.b. With the development of big cities, a problem has arisen before us: traffic in cities has bee heavier and heavier than before.a. Such opinion leads to surprising waste of water.b. Such an opinion leads to a shocking waste of water.a. Once these fake modities enter the market, they will do unevaluated harm to the society.b. Once these fake modities enter the market, they will do immeasurable harm to the society.形容詞詞序a. This is no longer a childish unrealistic dream.b. This is no longer an unrealistic childish dream.a. This picture describes an American girl dressed in Chinese traditional costume.b. This picture describes an American girl dressed in traditional Chinese costume.D. Adverbs 副詞用詞不當(dāng)a. An early morning walk can help one to be lighthearted and to work effectively.b. An early morning walk can help one to be lighthearted and to work efficiently.a. In fact, fresh water is exactly inadequate.b. In fact, our fresh water supply is far from adequate.a. We should practice it from time to time, and thus we will slowly master it and do it perfectly.b. We should practice it from time to time, and thus we will gradually master it and do it perfectly.副詞短語a. The industrial and Agricultural Revolutions which began in 1650 contributed a bit to the growth of population.b. The industrial and Agricultural Revolutions which began in 1650 contributed a lot to the growth of population.E. Pronouns 代詞用法不當(dāng)a. Everyday I spent at least an hour on English in the past seven years.b. Each day I spent at least an hour on English in the past seven years.a. In order to make more profit, some manufacturers exaggerate their products’ functions in the advertisements. That is, the product does not live up to the standard advertised and the consumers will find themselves fooled.b. In order to make more profit, some manufacturers exaggerate their products’ functions in the advertisements. Very often, the product does not live up to the standard advertised and the consumers will find themselves fooled.a. To our Chinese, firecrackers are symbols of festivals and happiness.b. To us Chinese, firecrackers are symbols of festivals and happiness.指代不明a. For example, the need for jobs will make us develop our industries. It causes environmental problems.b. For example, the need for jobs will make us develop our industries which in turn will causes environmental problems.a. We always stick to the rules so that I never hurt others or be hurt.b. We always stick to the rules so that I never hurt myself or others.a. But when the customers are attracted by them and buy the goods finally they will find it of no quality and worth nothing.b. But when the customers are attracted by them and buy the goods finally they will find them of poor quality and worth nothing.人稱代詞一致a. First, we can’t deny that money is useful. You need money to buy food, to buy a house or to pay for your educational cost.b. First, we can’t deny that money is useful. We need money to buy food, to buy a house or to pay for our educational cost.F. Prepositions 介詞介詞錯(cuò)誤a. What we can conclude from the figures and the explanations is the people’s life is improving and the changes of people’s diet show that people’s interest is on the quality of food now and that our people’s health improving day by day.b. What we can conclude from the figures and the explanations is the people’s life is improving and the changes in people’s diet show that people’s interest is in the quality of food now and that our people’s health improving day by day.a. I have bought a tape recorder with which I can practise my ability of listening prehension.b. I bought a tape recorder with which I was able to improve my ability in listening prehension.a. Advertisements exist everywhere, on the newspaper, on TV, on the walls in the streets and even in the postboxes of our houses.b. Advertisements exist everywhere, in the newspaper, on TV, on the walls in the streets and even in the postboxes of our houses.a. People showed extraordinary enthusiasm in face of a great, speculative prosperity ahead.b. People showed extraordinary enthusiasm in anticipation of a great, speculative prosperity ahead.G. Verbs 動(dòng)詞一般動(dòng)詞用詞不當(dāng)a. If not controlled, the population of the world will amount to 7,000 million in 2000 as can be seen from the graph.b. If not controlled, the population of the world will reach 7,000 million in 2000 as can be seen from the graph.a. They can clean the air, beautify the city, develop a good climate and weaken noise.b. They can clean the air, beautify the city, develop a healthy climate and reduce noise.a. A road which can only hold two cars side by side can allow more than ten bicycles.b. A road which can only allow two cars