【正文】 不少于800字。也許你長大成熟了，不再懵懂幼稚，但你想更上一層樓；也許你正在走向成熟，不想渾渾噩噩，決心重塑自我。經(jīng)過中考的洗禮，你成了一名高中生。此題注意抓住材料中的限定“青春”，圍繞“青春”闡釋“最幸?！薄！窘馕觥吭囶}分析：這是一道命題作文，注意題目是“最幸福的人”，但注意材料中的提示“青春”“把青春保持到老年”，實際是意境限定是“擁有或保持青春”是最幸福的人，然后具體的分析原因。當你取得成功時，朋友會為你感到無比的幸福。擁有自己的個性是幸福的！有自己的伙伴是一種幸福。你獨特的個性是唯一的。我們還要開創(chuàng)自己的世界。但是我們擁有青春。沒關(guān)系，請你一定要珍惜現(xiàn)在的，用心體會幸福，總會感悟到只屬于你一個人的甜蜜。幸福就像蜜，因為它甜蜜。文體不限（詩歌除外）【答案】 最幸福的人曾經(jīng)我不明白什么是幸福，幸福這個詞在我腦海中就像白紙，潔白而平整。誰能把青春保持到老年,不讓自己的心靈冷卻變硬僵化,誰就是幸福的人。** Learn to love, not by finding a perfect person, but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly. someone **They have been married for two years. He loves literature, and often posts his work on the net, but nobody ever reads them. He is also into photography, and he handle their wedding photos.He loves her very much. Likewise with her. She has a quick temper, and always bullies him. He is a gentleman, and always gives in to her. Today, she’s being wilful again.Her : Why can’t you be the photographer for my friend’s wedding? She promised she’d pay.Him : I don’t have time that day.Her :Humph!Him : Huh?Her : Don’t have time? Write less of those novels,and you will have all the time you need.Him : I...someone will definitely recognize my work some day.Her : Humph! I don’t care, you’ll have to do it for her.! Him : No.Her : Just this once?Him : No.Negotiation’s broken. So, she gave the final warning: Give me a Yes within three days, or else...First day. She withheld the kitchen, bathroom, puter, refrigerator, television, hifi...Except the doublebed, to show her benevolence. Of course, she has to sleep on it too. He didn’t mind, as he still has some cash in his pockets.Second day. She conducted a raid and removed everything from his pockets and warned, Seek any external help, and you bear the consequences. He’s nervous now. Night. On the bed. He begs for mercy, hoping that she’ll end this state.She doesn’t give a damn. No way am I giving in, whatever he says. Until he agrees.Third day. Night. On the Bed. He’s lying on the bed, looking to one side. She’s lying on the bed, looking to the other side.Him : We need to talk.Her : Unless it’s about ! the wedding, forget it.Him : It’s something very important.She remains silent.Him :Let’s get a divorce.She did not believe her ears.Him : I got to know a girl.She’s totally angry, and wanted to hit him. But she held it down, wanting to let him finish. But her eyes already felt wet. He took a photo out from his chest. Probably from his undershirt pocket, that’s the only place she didn’t go through yesterday. How careless!Him : She’s a nice girl.Her tears fell.Him : She has a good personality too.She’s heartbroken, because he puts a photo of some other girl close to his heart.Him : She says that she’ll support me fully in my pursue for literature after we got married.She’s very jealous, because she said the same thing in the past.Him : She loves me truly. She wishes to sit up and scream at him: Don’t I?Him : ! So, I think she won’t force me to do something that I don’t want to do.She’s thinking, but the rage won’t subside.Him : Want to take a look at the photo I took for her?Her : .....!He brings the photo before her eyes.She’s in a total rage, hits his hand away and leaves a burning mark of a slap on his sighs. She cries. He puts the photo back to his pocket. She pulls her hand back under the blanket. He turns off the light,and sleeps. She turns on the light, and sits up. He’s asleep. She lost sleep. She regrets treating him the way she treated him. She cried again, and thought about a lot of things. She wants to wake him up. She wants to have a intimate talk with him. She doesn’t want to push him anymore. She stares at his chest. She wants to see how the girl looks. She slips the photo out. She wanted to cry, and she wanted to ’s a nicely taken photo of herself. A photo he took for her. She bends down, and kissed him on his cheek. He smiled. He was just pretending to be asleep. 閱讀下面的材料，按要求作文。別林斯基有這樣一段話：青春在人的一生中只有一次,青年時代要比其他任何時代更能接受高尚和美好的東西。要求：以“最幸福的人”為題，寫一篇800字左右的文章。光陰似水，輾轉(zhuǎn)現(xiàn)在的我，已經(jīng)在那張白紙上留下一串串幸福的足跡?！懊糠昙压?jié)倍思親”擁有一個美滿的家庭是幸福的，這種幸福是獨一無二的，也許你的家庭不如別人的家美麗、完整。有家是幸福的！ “人生自古誰無死”世間生靈沒有誰能夠逃脫由生到死的輪回。少年時期，正是意氣風發(fā)的時候，正如蘇軾所說：“老夫聊發(fā)少年狂，左牽黃，右擎蒼”就連他老人家也要找回年輕時的感覺，何況我們正當少年，我們對生命的理解只是皮毛，欣慰的是我們年輕。年輕就是幸福！擁有自己的個性是幸福的，因為你會有不同的朋友。而我有一個溫和的個性，作為一個性情溫和的人，我很少會大發(fā)脾氣，總會心平氣和的解決問題，因此，我會收到貼滿微笑的“信件”。自古以來，贊頌友誼的詩就很多“海內(nèi)存知己，天涯若比鄰”“莫愁前路無知己，天人誰人不識君”等。有自己知己是幸福的！其實最幸福的人是自己，只要用心尋找，就會發(fā)現(xiàn)幸福是無處不在的，也正是這無處不在的幸福在你的腦海里留下一串串幸福的足跡。點睛：“明確重心法”是命題作文常見的立意方式，“重心”是指命題作文題目中最能體現(xiàn)題旨的關(guān)鍵字詞，也就是寫作的重點。閱讀下面的材料，根據(jù)要求寫一篇不少于800字的文章。你有自己的優(yōu)點和特長，也有缺點和不足。開學以來，學過的課文，親歷的活動，無不給你的思想、生活甚至是生命帶來沖擊，而催你清醒促你奮進崛起的唯一辦法，就是改變你自己！請以“改變自己”為標題，寫一篇文章。寫出你的真情實感。注意卷面整潔?！敬鸢浮繀⒖挤段模焊淖冏约好乐搡棡榱诉m應(yīng)狹小的巖洞，讓自己的身軀柔軟堅強；蛹為了蛻變成蝶而擠壓自己臃腫的身軀，才換來明朝的輕盈展翅；蝌蚪為了躲避天敵在水中的襲擊，化作青蛙得以到岸上一睹世間芳容……改變自己，是生命生生不息的最本質(zhì)原因。剩下的，只等我們自己驗證。我們總是在改變，我們每天都在去適應(yīng)一個新的自己。那么，這三者你想成為哪一個呢？想必胡蘿卜不會有人選了，它屈服在了逆境之下。但現(xiàn)在如果重新做出選擇，也許我會有不同的答案。我倔強不屈地同命運做著斗爭，摔得頭破血流損羽折翼也毫不放棄，可隨著年齡的增長，我發(fā)現(xiàn)許多社會現(xiàn)象不是我用微薄的力量就可以改變的，改變不了世界，就得改變自己，若想改變世界，自己首先要變強——這時成為雞蛋也許是不錯的選擇——它戰(zhàn)勝了逆境，并與其相安無事。他們面對人生的失意、官場的被貶、命運的玩笑不能正視困難，而是對酒當歌，流連在山水之間，仿佛真正擺脫了世俗的羈絆，遠離了人間的喧囂。一味躲避只會失去人生的意義與價值，理應(yīng)遭到時代的拋棄。我們或許應(yīng)當學習魯迅先生，國難當頭，毅然棄醫(yī)從文，一支筆喚醒了多少麻木的靈魂！洋務(wù)運動、戊戌變法、新文化運動、辛亥革命……從古到今，多少仁人志士為尋找與時俱進的改變獻出了一生的精力。韶華已然向東去。自卑變?yōu)樽孕?，散漫變?yōu)槠床?，夢想變?yōu)橐?guī)劃。只是，很多人把這樣的改變，喚作成長。本題是一篇借助材料導語引出的“命題作文”，首先要根據(jù)對原材料的理解，尋找寫作的方向。那么怎么進行行文寫作呢？接下來借鑒的角度有學過的課文、親身經(jīng)歷都可以作為寫作行文的主要內(nèi)容。參考立意：改變自己的缺點和不足；改變自己的懵懂和幼稚；改變自己的渾渾噩噩。曾經(jīng)，她不過是一個徒有美貌毫無才學的才人，失寵卻讓她懂得了“以才侍君者長，以色侍君者短”這個道理，她努力地改變自己，從一個平凡女子變成一位學者，從一位學者變成一代君王。3. 東漢末年名將呂蒙身材高大，作戰(zhàn)勇猛，親自帶頭沖鋒砍人，憑著一股狠勁得到了領(lǐng)導的賞識。但在孫權(quán)的指點下呂蒙開始讀書，一改過去的作風，并且進步神速，得到了孫權(quán)和魯肅這些讀書人的稱贊，魯肅還與之結(jié)為好友。結(jié)構(gòu)：本題既可以采用議論文文體，也可以采用記敘文文體。議論文的基本框架有如下五部分。一看標題就能知道作者的寫作中心。能標新立異并能表明觀點就更加理想了。（二）引述材料+表態(tài)+觀點。（三）分點分層闡述理由。參考范文由卡夫卡的名言，到胡蘿卜等放入水中的故事，再聯(lián)想到隱士、歷史事件，每一段都觀點明確，層層深入。（五）點題，再次明確觀點。記敘文的結(jié)構(gòu)與議論文不同，它沒有嚴密的結(jié)構(gòu)安排，但也有幾種類型的寫作模式，如時序順進式、平列展開式和對比映照式等，注意采用多種描寫方法使記敘文更生動，感情表現(xiàn)更真摯。)從而達到縮小外延、化大為小、化虛為實，明確范圍、方便入題旨的目的