【正文】 作也很普通。我在她的目光里一天天長高長大，她在我的世界里最高最大。兒時的記憶滿滿的都是她。驀然回首，采擷一朵朵歲月的浪花，也便生發(fā)出對許多人許多事的些許感喟。在本學(xué)期的“走進他（她），發(fā)現(xiàn)他（她）”的訪談寫作活動過程中，我們探尋到了長輩的很多經(jīng)歷和故事，我們學(xué)會了從中去體味他人的悲歡、感受他人的情感和情趣、理解他人的思緒和思想，甚至走進他人的性情和靈魂……請以你熟悉的一位長輩作為寫作對象，選取一個事件或幾段經(jīng)歷，以“那時，他（她）正年輕”為題，寫一篇文章，體裁不限，700字以上。如果我們再有凝練的語言和飛揚的文采，獲得高分是不困難的。這道文題的立意就應(yīng)該是積極向上的，雖然成長路上會有不如意，但我們也不能因此而悲觀失望，我們要對未來充滿信心，要做好與困難作斗爭的準備?？梢詫懗砷L的路上收獲的快樂，也可以寫失落的煩惱，但無論那種材料，都應(yīng)當寫出與眾不同的感悟，這就使自己的立意獨具匠心，別具一格。這表明寫作有很大的空間和靈活性。文題“走在成長的路上”可以寫成長路上，這是讓我們寫成長過程所遇之事。學(xué)習(xí)生涯，英雄多不勝數(shù)，有誰不知“頭懸梁錐刺股”之苦，但有氣節(jié)可將苦倦作甘霖雨露滋養(yǎng)身心，雖處苦境卻夢縈著成功的甘甜，竭力汲取書中營養(yǎng)，為達成功，不顧食寢，眾人亦云挫折苦，可誰知挫折過后使人斗志煥發(fā)；品味苦難，令人精神抖擻、步伐堅定，是向著成功演奏的天籟我堅信，在挫折之火的鍛煉下，我能如寶劍般鋒刃無比；我堅信，在挫折風雨抽打之下，我能架起七色之橋；我堅信，我可以演繹出成功的天籟；我堅信，黎明破曉，在第一縷陽光照耀下，我可以在挫折中奮起，長成參天大樹【解析】試題分析：“在_______中成長”是一篇半命題作文。當我有所突破后，我細細回味，風雨中苦澀蘊含彩虹的光芒，我是何等欣慰，昔日的挫折迎來了象征希望的彩虹，鳥兒為我高歌，花兒為我綻放，陽光照亮人生那條坎坷之路……我堅信，越挫越勇，風雨不大，彩虹不美。挫折是鑄劍的火，“寶劍鋒從磨礪出”經(jīng)歷了火的磨礪，寶劍方能鋒利無比，正因為我經(jīng)歷了火的冶煉，在它粗獷的燒灼下，我將傷口化為痂，感受它精心的實驗，考驗我是否堅強。這些都是挫折，正是這些挫折，使我們漸漸長大。（3）字數(shù)不少于800字。要求：（1）填上橫線上的詞語。阿拉丁神燈 主要人物：Aladin 阿拉丁 Jasmine 茉莉（公主）Spirit 精靈 Jafang 賈方（大臣）Magic mat 魔毯 Abu 阿布（猴子）Carrot 鸚鵡（大臣隨從） King 國王Aside 旁白第一幕： 介紹各個角色。Aside： once upon a time, there is a boy,named aladin. He is a poorGuy,but he has a good friend Abu.Aladin: I am aladin, this is my good friend – abu. We are living happily.Abu: we don’t have trouble. We are living happily.Aside：Jafang is a minister with evil heart. Carrot is his attendant . Jafang: I am jafang. I am a lamp is mine, hahahahha.Carrot: Get the lamp, get the lamp.Aside: There is a king. He has a beautiful daughter. King: I am the king of this country. I am rich. I have everything. But I have a difficult problem. I want to find a prince who can marry with my jasmine.Jasmine: All the prince is not the man I like. People is crazy. I want to get out of the castle, to see the world outside. Haha~~第二幕：沙漠Jafang: I know a lamp. It’s a magic lamp with spirit. He can make my dreams e ture.Carrot: make your dreams e ture. Where is it? Jafang: in that cave. But I can not go in. it is dangerous. Carrot: look, aladin. Why don’t you let him go inside and get it for you.Jafang: now you are talking! Aladin: what are we doing here. I think we get lost.Abu: e on. We can get out.Jafang: hello,. Aladin. What are you doing? Aladin: we get lost. Can you tell me the way to out here? Carrot: if you can do us a favor, I will tell the way.Abu: what kind of a favor? Jafang: go in there and get a lamp for me.Aladin: a piece of cake. Let’s go, Abu.第三幕：山洞里Aladin: Wow, so many gold. Don’t touch it. Abu! Abu: okey. Follow what you said.Aladin: there, there is the lamp. Abu: let’s get it. Aladin: oh , nonono.. the door.. Abu: the door is closing. The door.. closed.Aladin: what can we do with these gold and lamp.Magic mat: take it easy. Take it easy.Abu: who is there. Who is talking? Aladin: where are you. Magic mat: I am here. Check the lamp. Aladin: what can I do with this old lamp? Abu: there are some words on it. But not very clear.Aladin: wowowowowoo .. who are you.Spirit: hahahahah.. finally, I came out. Who are you? Boy? And you, monkey? don’t you know I am the spirit. Just tell me your dreams, I will help you to make it e ture.Abu: e on. We don’t have time for joking.Spirit: you must be a monkey! Let me show you my power! Aladin: but we are in this cave. Magic mat: e here. I will get you out of here! Spirit: yeah, my master. Come here. Come ..Aladin: yeah., we are out. We are home! Yeah~ Abu: I am so tired, I need some sleep.Aladin: go ahead. Monkey. I wil go to the market.第四幕： 偷燈Jafang: I need that lamp. Go and steal it. Carrot: steal it. Steal it.Aside: Jafang gets the lamp and brings it back home.Spirit: what do you want? My masterJafang: I want to be a wizard. Spirit: okey.. blah balh balh blah,… now you are.Jafang: I must try my magic. Jajajajjajjhyhahahhah ..Aside: at the same time, the king is looking for his lovely daughter, what will happen?King: where is jasmine. Where is jasmine.? My girl, where are you?Jafang: I am the king of the world! Ahahahahha .. I have to replace of the kingJafang: Your highness, my noble princess, I have something important to tell you. It’s about your marrage.Jasmine: what do you know from my father?Jafang : (evil laugh) malimalihon, fall asleep like the sleeping beauty. Hahhahaha ,let me take you to your father.King: ah..a..h. my daughter, what happened. Wake up dear? Jafang, what happened with my daughter, who did this, I will kill himJafang: Me, my majestyKing: what?Jafang: coz from now on, I will be the king and replace you. If you don’t leave , then say goodbye to your daughter.King:No….No…Aladin: what are you doing,Jafang?Jafang: you must die! Ajhahhah .Aladin. Ah..a..hh..ahh.. Jafang: I am the strongest. Aladin: no. you are not. But the spirit is. Jafang: no, I am the strongest.Aside: Abu is approaching the lamp, suddenly he gets itAbu: e on, aladin.. Here you are.Spirit: what do you want? My masterAladin: make Jafang fall asleep. Forever ..Spirit: any more, my boss? Aladin: ah,the princess,let the sleeping girl wake up, pls,spiritSpirit: okey ,my masterKing: thank you. Aladin. 作文：以“在 中成長”，寫一篇記敘文。（2）運用細節(jié)描寫和場面描寫?！敬鸢浮吭诖煺壑谐砷L孩提時，蹣跚學(xué)步；爛漫天真時，也會有“急走追黃蝶”的惋惜。故成長離不開挫折。正因它，我提高了我的認事水平，一個個痂提醒吾汲取昔日教訓(xùn)，無形中鞭策著我前進，像劍一樣，披荊斬棘，殺出一片我的天地挫折是彩虹前的風雨，沒有風雨，我亦如何殺出我的天地，綻放屬于我的彩虹，“生命不息，奮斗不止”風雨兼程，我以信念作舟，勤奮作槳，將“張海迪，貝多芬”的故事化作風帆，在人生激流之中涌進。挫折是成功的必經(jīng)路，彩虹是橋，抵達彼岸之橋。也可以說是與“成長”話題有關(guān)的作文。因此，我們可以通過敘述成長過程中所遇到的某件事或某幾件事及感受，來展現(xiàn)成長路上要經(jīng)受挫折、磨難或苦難，才能成長的主題。首先，在選材方面，以圍繞著自己