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【正文】 表格中的觀點(diǎn)僅供參考,允許適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。Parents39。6． 書(shū)面表達(dá)暑假即將來(lái)臨,對(duì)于如何安排孩子初中畢業(yè)后的第一個(gè)假期,家長(zhǎng)們和孩子自己有著各自的想法。寫(xiě)作中注意語(yǔ)義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。結(jié)合要點(diǎn)提示，可知本文主要從三個(gè)方面進(jìn)行敘述，注意圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。Safety has bee the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is especially important to us _____________________________________________【答案】Safety has bee the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is especially important to us students. First, we should take care not to get ourselves injured while we are having sports. Second, There are too many students at school, and our hallways are too narrow. So don’t crowd with each other especially when we go upstairs or downstairs. Or there may be an accident. Besides, we should be friendly and get on well with others, don’t quarrel or even fight. Last but not least , We should be careful to eat healthy food and keep away from junk food, which is harmful to our health.In a word, it39。3．詞數(shù)：80—100詞。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下信息內(nèi)容提示，寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于校園安全的英語(yǔ)小短文。此處because of， in one’s opinion, give up, know about, last but not least, set up, all in all, call on等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。Your opinionnecessary or unnecessaryYour reasonsthe root （根） of Chinese culture, know more about,spread, developYour suggestion…Dear editor,As we all know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the rapid development if international technology nowadays. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours,Mike【答案】Dear editor, As we know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the rapid development of international technology nowadays. In my opinion, it’s necessary for schools to set up traditional culture classes. First, traditional culture is the root of Chinese. As Chinese, we shouldn’t give up our traditional culture and run after Western culture. Second, traditional culture classes can give students chances to know more about our nation. They can raise their sense of national pride. Last but not least, setting up traditional culture classes can spread and develop our Chinese culture.All in all, it is of great importance to set up traditional culture classes in schools. Let’s call on more schools to set up traditional culture classes!Yours,Mike【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，談?wù)勎覍?duì)開(kāi)設(shè)傳統(tǒng)文化課的看法。有人認(rèn)為學(xué)校應(yīng)當(dāng)開(kāi)設(shè)傳統(tǒng)文化課（set up traditional culture classes），但也有人認(rèn)為沒(méi)有必要。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。【點(diǎn)睛】書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。而To begin with,/ Moreover,/ Last but not least,等短語(yǔ)的運(yùn)用，既豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，更使短文很有條理，是本文的亮點(diǎn)?！敬鸢浮縄39。2. 短文中不能出現(xiàn)正式姓名，校名。3．“揚(yáng)帆起航新學(xué)期，學(xué)姐學(xué)長(zhǎng)提建議”。開(kāi)頭為你想要成為一名志愿者而感到高興，接下來(lái)介紹我們可以從事的志愿者工作以及志愿者工作帶來(lái)的一些問(wèn)題，最后我希望你喜歡志愿者工作。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。m glad……，we can……，It’s OK to……，If your parents don’t allow you to…….，you should……，I hope……等句式的應(yīng)用。m glad you would like to be a volunteer. Now let me answer yourquestions.I volunteer because I enjoy helping others and can learn a lot from others. As students, we can take part in some interesting activities, such as looking after animals and working for sports matches. Also, we can join charity organizations to help protect the environment and so on.It’s OK to have problems, because volunteering takes much time and energy. Sometimes I can’t balance my study and work. If your parents don’t allow you to volunteer, you should have a good talk with them. Try to let them understand you.I hope you love volunteering and do well in it. Looking forward to your good news.Best wishesDavid【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，給好友Li Ming回信，介紹暑假做志愿者的情況。Dear Li Ming,Thanks for your letter. I39?；貜?fù)信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾
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