【正文】 h day of the fifth month according to the Chinese calendar. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.【答案】Dear fellows, The Dragon Boat Festival, also called the Duanwu Festival, is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese celebrate the holiday on June18 this year . People hold the dragonboat races in memory of Qu Yuan,one of the greatest poets in China. We can watch the dragonboat races and eat a kind of Chinese food named Zongzi during the Dragon boat Festival. People always hang Calamus and Moxa on the wele to experience this traditional festival with friends from all over the world.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，向來自不同國家的同學(xué)介紹中國傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日——端午節(jié)。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)?！军c睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。clock./ Some think that students should leave school at 4:45, because they can have more time to do what they want to do, such as listening to ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化；同時Most students think…/ Some think…/ A few think…使敘述條理，層次分明，是本文的亮點。clock. Besides having time to play tennis, I can also draw some pictures I like.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如hold a class meeting，talk about，the result of，keep healthy，after school，have more time to do，want to do，such as，listen to music，in favor of，clean the room，play tennis等。clock. They can exercise to keep healthy and read more interesting books after school.Some think that students should leave school at 4:45, because they can have more time to do what they want to do, such as listening to music.A few think 5 o 39。...注意：（1）短文必須包括表格中所有要點，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和校名；（3）詞數(shù)：80100；（4）短文開頭僅供參考，不計入總詞數(shù)。do what we want, such as listening to music...at 4:45Time to leave schoolActivities to do after school大部分同學(xué)認(rèn)為初中生應(yīng)該在5點左右放學(xué)，下表所列里大家的發(fā)言記錄。這里Protecting the environment 做主語，用的是動詞的ing形式。這里had better表示最好，后面跟動詞原形，take a bus表示乘公共汽車。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性。寫作時，避免使用漢語式的英語，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時。s more, we had better walk or take a bus. Protecting the environment is our duty. Everyone should play a part in saving the earth.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料作文，根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下整個國家的空氣污染狀況。s activities are also the sources of air pollution such as throwing the rubbish and smoking. What39。（2） 文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱。（至少寫2點）（3）減少空氣污染的措施。要點提示：（1）我國空氣污染的現(xiàn)象。九年級上冊英語書面表達(dá)易錯剖析含解析一、英語書面表達(dá)1．近年來，各大城市霧霾（haze）情況越來越嚴(yán)重，整個國家的空氣污染狀況令人擔(dān)憂。請分析空氣污染的現(xiàn)象，原因，應(yīng)對措施，寫一份英文的倡議書，呼吁大家保護(hù)環(huán)境，減少對空氣的污染。（至少寫2點）（2） 空氣污染產(chǎn)生的原因。（至少寫2點）要求：（1） 80詞左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear students , As we all know , hazy days have been influencing our lives a lot in recent years . That warns us of the serious airpollution____________________________________________________________________________　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　【答案】Dear students,As we all know, hazy days have been influencing our lives a lot in recent years. That warns us of the serious air pollution. Big factories, power plants and cars all can cause air pollution. For example, chemicals in the smoke from power stations cause a lot of damage. Besides, the people39。s more, the more trees are cut down, the less polluted air can absorb. Air pollution is being more and more serious, so we should take some measures such as planting more trees and stop factories from sending out waste air, what39。所提供的材料中列舉了近年來，各大城市霧霾（haze）情況越來越嚴(yán)重，主要從空氣污染的現(xiàn)象，原因，應(yīng)對措施三個方面去介紹。注意作文中必須包含材料上的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。語法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣，注意時態(tài)、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題?！靖叻志湫鸵弧縒e had better walk or take a bus. 我們最好步行或乘公共汽車?！靖叻志湫投縋rotecting the environment is our duty. 保護(hù)環(huán)境是我們的職責(zé)。2．書面表達(dá)在本周班會課上，同學(xué)們對“初中生什么時候放學(xué)比較合適？”這一問題進(jìn)行了熱烈的討論。請你寫一篇短文介紹大家的想法并闡述你的觀點。at 5 o’clockat 5 o’clockexercise to keep healthy and read bookstake a parttime job短文開頭：“What time should junior high school students leave school?” This week we have held a class meeting to talk about it. Here is the result of th