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多樣化,更使短文很有條理,是本文的亮點(diǎn)?!敬鸢浮縄39。2. 短文中不能出現(xiàn)正式姓名,校名。(英語(yǔ))九年級(jí)下冊(cè)英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)易錯(cuò)剖析一、英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)1.“揚(yáng)帆起航新學(xué)期,學(xué)姐學(xué)長(zhǎng)提建議”。你馬上就要畢業(yè)了,在初中的學(xué)習(xí)和生活中你一定有很多收獲,請(qǐng)給學(xué)弟學(xué)妹們提幾點(diǎn)建議吧!要求:1. 內(nèi)容完整,語(yǔ)言流暢,書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范清晰。100 詞左右。m going to graduate from junior high school. As your senior, I have some suggestions to the young.As old saying goes, all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. To begin with, you should arrange both your study and life properly.Moreover, you should get along well with others. To have more friends, not enemies.Last but not least, you could be active in school team work. Ability is as important as your study, you can also enjoy your colorful school life as wellI hope these suggestions could make your junior schoollife more wonderful.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ),為文章增色不少,如be going to,graduate from,to begin with,both…and,get along well with others,be active in,as important as,as well等。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性,也更富有條理。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維,考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。2. 亞洲文明對(duì)話大會(huì)近期在北京召開(kāi),你的印度朋友Danny收看了大會(huì)相關(guān)報(bào)道,對(duì)華夏文明產(chǎn)生了濃厚的興趣,來(lái)信向你了解中國(guó)文化。要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容歷史文化歷史悠久,文化各異;傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日,多彩習(xí)俗(舉一例)文明行為相互尊重,以禮相待;互學(xué)共鑒,共同成長(zhǎng)(或自擬)身邊文明校園文明(自擬一點(diǎn))注意:1. 詞數(shù)90詞左右,開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫(xiě)好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。3. 文中不得提及真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息?!驹斀狻课恼滦枰榻B下中國(guó)的文化。平時(shí)注意多多積累句型、短語(yǔ)。以圖表展示的作文要以“讀”為主,首先要認(rèn)真讀懂圖表中的要求,對(duì)所給信息加以分析、推斷、篩選、概括,去粗取精;在寫(xiě)作時(shí)目的要明確,要注意內(nèi)容的準(zhǔn)確性和嚴(yán)肅性。如but, so, then等。本篇文章寫(xiě)的好的句子有:Chinese civilization is one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the world.中華文明是世界上最古老、最悠久的文明之一。3. 書(shū)面表達(dá)暑假即將來(lái)臨,對(duì)于如何安排孩子初中畢業(yè)后的第一個(gè)假期,家長(zhǎng)們和孩子自己有著各自的想法。Parents39。s opinionsHave a good rest. Do some sightseeing…Your opinion…注意](1)表格中的觀點(diǎn)僅供參考,允許適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。(3)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名等信息。How will you spend the ing summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】How will you spend the ing summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions.Some parents think kids should get ready for high school in the sum?mer so it39。s time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go sightseeing.In my opinion we can have a talk with our parents. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. We need to relax ourselves after working so hard at school. It39。s time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go 。內(nèi)容包括:;(包含冬令營(yíng)的時(shí)間,聽(tīng)Liz Payne的講座);。作文的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù),也不必抄寫(xiě)在答題卡上。文章內(nèi)容主要包括三個(gè)部分:首先是介紹自己的身份;然后寫(xiě)留言的目的,包括冬令營(yíng)的時(shí)間、想要去參觀London Canal Museum以及聽(tīng)Liz Payne的講座;最后簡(jiǎn)單介紹一下你的預(yù)期的收獲。通過(guò)分析可知,這篇短文應(yīng)使用第一人稱(chēng)I來(lái)敘述,時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)以一般將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。另外還應(yīng)注意語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分,使文意連貫。點(diǎn)睛:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。作者主要從三個(gè)方面敘述:首先介紹了自己的身份和寫(xiě)留言的目的;接下來(lái)詳細(xì)介紹了自己參加這次冬令營(yíng)的愿望;最后是一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單的結(jié)尾。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱(chēng),文章以第一人稱(chēng)、一般將來(lái)時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主,謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式準(zhǔn)發(fā),語(yǔ)法規(guī)范,符合英語(yǔ)句子的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。整篇文章語(yǔ)句通順、意思連貫、表達(dá)流暢。請(qǐng)以My Unforgettable Middle School Life為題,根據(jù)下面的思維導(dǎo)圖,寫(xiě)一篇短文介紹自己難忘的校園生活并描述對(duì)未來(lái)的期盼。短文的開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。語(yǔ)言連貫、通順。How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself.