【正文】 ess pressure makes better life. Thank you.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們針對現(xiàn)在同學們普遍感到壓力大這種現(xiàn)象，以Less Pressure Makes Life Better為題，談談自己的看法，和同學們分享一下自己的經(jīng)驗。文章應使用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，注意根據(jù)表達的需要使用正確的時態(tài)，并變化謂語動詞的正確形式?！军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，談了自己對同學們普遍感到壓力大這種現(xiàn)象的看法，并分享了自己的經(jīng)歷。也使用了并列句和復合句的結(jié)構(gòu)，如賓語從句、狀語從句等。自雙創(chuàng)以來，我們的生活環(huán)境得到了很大的改觀，人人積極參與雙創(chuàng)活動，讓人點贊的文明行為隨處可見。題目中并沒有規(guī)定具體的寫作內(nèi)容，而是用圖表的形式，列出了寫作的提綱。寫作時應注意：首先英語的表達習慣和漢語是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語，而應從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)考慮，使用恰當?shù)脑~匯、短語和句型，以常見的主謂賓或者主系表構(gòu)成的簡單句為主，穿插使用并列句或者復合句，改變文章節(jié)奏，提升文章檔次。文章條理清晰，有層次。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“Going Green”為主題的征文活動。高分亮點：短語：save energy；brush our teeth；put it into different bins；take action；make a big difference。10．現(xiàn)在智能手機（smartphone）越來越普及，很多中學生都有智能手機。首先認真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作。同時要注意語言的表述應該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。提示：在生活中你用智能手機做什么？智能手機對你的生活產(chǎn)生了怎樣的影響？你對中學生使用智能手機有什么看法？______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：The smartphone is being more and more popular nowadays .I also have a smartphone .I usually use it to send text messages, play games,watch videos, listen to music and learn English .It is very useful and convenient. In fact,the smartphone makes my life colorful. However ,every coin has two I spend too much time playing games on the smartphone and get bad results in exams. So I think we students should use our smartphones properly and don’t use them too much .We should pay more attention to our studies.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文，要求根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示，寫一篇英語短文，談一談你對智能手機的看法?！军c睛】首先認真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達，例如save energy；brush our teeth；put it into different bins；take action；make a big difference。提示詞語： pollution, protect, save, recycle, take action提示問題：● What are the main environmental problems we have?● What can we do in our daily life? ● What’s your wish?Now there are many environmental 【答案】例文Now there are many environmental problems. Such as air pollution, water pollution and so on.I believe that there are many things we can do in our daily life, we can save energy by go to school by bike or on foot. We can use less water by turning off the tap while we brush our teeth, and taking shorter showers. When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins. I hope everyone can take action. Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference. Let’s work together to make a better place to live.【解析】【詳解】題干解讀：該題目屬于說明文寫作，寫作時要把我們面臨的主要環(huán)境問題是什么，為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么，以及你的期望全部包括。短文中句子結(jié)構(gòu)以簡單句為主，也使用了并列句和復合句以及一些較復雜的高級句式，語句之間也使用了較好的連接成分，如We should be polite to others and try to behave well. 、It’s kind of you to help people in need. 、Meanwhile, We can help clean up our city in order to make it clearer and tidier.、We can’t spit anywhere and we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere. At the same time, we shouldn’t break traffic ?！军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，向中學生們發(fā)出號召，共同參與到城市“雙創(chuàng)”活動中來。根據(jù)這個內(nèi)容，寫作時，把短文分成兩個層次，這樣可以使文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰、條理。要求：，意思連貫，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范；，并做適當?shù)耐卣梗?. 行文中不得出現(xiàn)真實人名、校名或地名；4. 詞數(shù)80左右，（短文的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；Since the government created the civilized and healthy city, our living environment has improved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.As junior high students,________________________________________________________