【正文】 get better exam results and go to better senior high schools by taking extra classes. They also believe that students can avoid watching too much TV or playing puter games in this way. But others have a different opinion. They think that students need more time to rest. If they take too many classes, they might feel too stressed. That’s not good for their health. As for me, I don’t think taking extra classes is necessary. Learning hard in class is enough. We just need to go over our lessons after class. We can also teach ourselves as it is very important for us to have a lifelong learning ability.【解析】【分析】整體分析：這是一篇提綱話題作文。反對(duì)者的觀點(diǎn)1. 學(xué)生需要時(shí)間休息；2. 壓力過(guò)大不利于身體健康。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面內(nèi)容寫一篇短文。5．（【點(diǎn)睛】首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫作，在寫作過(guò)程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；同時(shí)注意語(yǔ)句要通順，詞匯書寫無(wú)誤，不要出現(xiàn)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。在寫作時(shí)，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。首先考生需要把題目補(bǔ)充完整，然后根據(jù)所給出的材料提示，動(dòng)筆寫作。m a member of the Singing and Dancing Club. I have been in this club for 2 years. I’m an actor in the club. Many students in our school have joined the club, so I also have made a lot of have many activities on week,we have two times of training. I sing and dance with my classmates on weekends. Though I am very tired, but I am always happy when I the members in the club are just brothers and sisters. I like this club very much.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文。 提示：你可以作為任意興趣小組或社團(tuán)的一員，或者作為家庭、班級(jí)、社區(qū)的一員，寫出你的經(jīng)歷、感受等。4．（【高分句型二】I remember when I was six years old, I would never go to bed without it. 我記得當(dāng)我六歲的時(shí)候，沒(méi)有它我永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)去睡覺(jué)。s special to me because I used to play with it almost every day until I was ten years old. 這對(duì)我來(lái)說(shuō)很特別，因?yàn)槲規(guī)缀趺刻於荚谕?，直到十歲。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性。寫作時(shí)，避免使用漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語(yǔ)。時(shí)態(tài)為一般過(guò)去在時(shí)，人稱為第一人稱。m getting older!【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話題作文，根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下你的心愛(ài)禮物。s special to me because I used to play with it almost every day until I was ten years old. I thought it was one of my best friends.The toy bear has left me so many memories. I remember when I was six years old, I would never go to bed without it. Now, I don39。要求：行文連貫、條理清楚、語(yǔ)句通順、語(yǔ)法正確、書寫規(guī)范；依據(jù)提示可適度發(fā)揮，文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名。湖北初三） 童年是人生最美好的時(shí)光。：注意書寫工整美觀整潔。合理使用連詞。：要點(diǎn)是否齊全，適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充。注意檢查：?jiǎn)卧~拼寫、語(yǔ)法、動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)序、主謂一致等。語(yǔ)言要規(guī)范，時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用要正確，敘述清楚條里，學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用。我們采取行動(dòng)吧。我相信如果我們能做這些事情，我們的生活會(huì)越來(lái)越好。通過(guò)這樣做，我們可以拯救許多樹(shù)木。第三，我使用紙張的兩面。其次，當(dāng)我不需要的時(shí)候，我會(huì)及時(shí)關(guān)掉水龍頭、風(fēng)扇、電視機(jī)和電燈，以節(jié)約用水和用電。保護(hù)我們的環(huán)境很重要。本文提綱：我的低碳生活低碳生活是一種生活方式。認(rèn)真閱讀所給提示要點(diǎn)，確定主題，根據(jù)要點(diǎn)列出提綱，所寫內(nèi)容必須包括所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范。本文時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。s take actions.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話題作文。t need them. What39。My lowcarbon lifeLowcarbon life is a kind of lifestyle. It’s a habit to save all the sources of energy around us. It’s important to protect our environment. ________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My lowcarbon lifeLowcarbon life is a kind of lifestyle. It’s a habit to save all the sources of energy around us. It’s important to protect our environment. First, I always go to school on foot and tell my parents to walk to work instead of driving the car. Second, I save water and electricity by turning off the taps , fans。廣州市天河中學(xué)中考模擬）書面表達(dá)請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，以My lowcarbon life為題寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文，談?wù)勀愕摹暗吞忌睢?，以及你?duì)“低碳生活”的認(rèn)識(shí)?？傮w來(lái)說(shuō)這篇文章分為三大段，條理清晰，敘述完整，完成了既定的寫作任務(wù)。 寫作要求：1. 短文結(jié)構(gòu)完整，意思連貫，語(yǔ)言流暢，語(yǔ)法準(zhǔn)確，符合邏輯；2. 卷面干凈整潔；3. 詞數(shù) 80 左右；4. 開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。內(nèi)容包括以下方面：1. 你認(rèn)為幸福是什么？2. 描述一件令你感到幸福的事（需交代時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、過(guò)程與感受）。幸福就圍繞在我們身邊，簡(jiǎn)單得觸手可得，平凡得召之即來(lái)。（英語(yǔ)）九年級(jí)上冊(cè)英語(yǔ)英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)匯編易錯(cuò)剖析一、中考英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)匯編1．（陜西西北工業(yè)大學(xué)附屬中學(xué)中考模擬）當(dāng)代雷鋒郭明義，在《幸福就這么簡(jiǎn)單》一書中，用自己的點(diǎn)滴平凡小事詮釋出幸福的 真諦。那你的幸福觀又是什么 呢？請(qǐng)以 My Happiness 為題寫一篇短文。3. 以自己的感悟揭示：應(yīng)該如何創(chuàng)造幸福。My Happiness After reading Guo Mingyi’s “Happiness Is So Simple”, I am deeply moved by his view on happiness. As for me,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Happiness is important in our life. In fact, happiness is always around you if you put your heart into it.I will never forget one thing. Once, I had a bad mark at a math test. I was shy and afraid to meet my parents. But when I got back home late, my parents knew what happened, they said to me: “It doesn’t matter, my child. Remember we’ll be always beside you when you need help. We believe you can be better next time. Never give up!” I was moved and made up my mind to work harder and harder.I feel happy. Whenever I am in trouble, I can feel my parents’ love. I want to be a good child for my parents.【解析】【詳解】幸福就圍繞在我們身邊，簡(jiǎn)單得觸手可得，平凡得召之即來(lái)，這篇作文要求寫一寫自己的幸福觀，描述自己對(duì)于幸福的定義，描述一件到幸福的事，最后談?wù)剳?yīng)該如何創(chuàng)造幸福，要注意敘述流暢，在描述過(guò)去的幸福往事的時(shí)候要注意正確使用時(shí)態(tài)，可以使用到的短語(yǔ)表達(dá)有：happiness is always around you 幸福總在你身邊；put your heart into it 把你的心投入其中；had a bad mark at a math test 數(shù)學(xué)考試成績(jī)很差；afraid to meet my parents 害怕見(jiàn)家長(zhǎng)；got back home late 回家晚；be always beside you一直在你身旁；need help需要幫助；Never give up永不放棄；made up my mind to下定決心去做…；in trouble有困難。2．（提示：1. 出行方式2. 不浪費(fèi)紙、水、電等3. 其他低碳生活的方式（補(bǔ)充一點(diǎn)）4. 低碳生活的作用注意：1．詞數(shù)80左右，開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2．回復(fù)須包括所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使全文連貫、通順；3．文中不得提及真實(shí)的人名等相關(guān)信息。 TV sets and lights in time when I don39。s more, water is reused by us in my family all the time. Third, I use the both sides of the paper. I think it is good to make full use of paper. By doing this, we can save many trees. At last, I would go shopping with basket rather than plastic bags. I believe our life will bee better and better if we can do these things. Lower carbon, happier life. Let39。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，以My lowcarbon life為題寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文，談?wù)勀愕摹暗吞忌睢?，以及你?duì)“低碳生活”的認(rèn)識(shí)。人稱主要為第一人稱。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無(wú)單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤（時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致等）。節(jié)約