【正文】 使文章表達更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。同時For one thing, / For another,/ However,等使短文的敘述很有條理，而It is no doubt electronic books bring many benefits./ they are so convenient that we can read them anywhere and anytime. / And there are more radiation which is harmful to people39。s body.In my opinion, Ebook cannot take the place of traditional book, but it39。要求內容合理,信的開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。江蘇中考模擬）書面表達假設你是某英文報紙“Teenagers”欄目的編輯Betty，日前收到了Lucy的來信。短文中較好的句型有：In the past, I was busy learning my subjects and worked hard at them、But now I am interested in history, because it is very interesting、In this way, I’ve got more knowledge and improved my life.、I’ll make it more and more beautiful. Believing myself is the key to success等等。語法規(guī)范，用詞準確，注意了名詞、動詞、形容詞等的正確形式。層次清晰，結構合理。短文有以下幾個優(yōu)點：首先文章內容充實、完整，符合題目要求。語句之間使用恰當?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫、自然。句子的結構要完整，可以簡單句結構為主，如主謂賓或主系表結構。寫作時應注意：首先要展開合理想象，補充文章細節(jié)內容，注意各部分內容之間的層次，內容要完整、充實，結構要清晰。審題可知，這篇短文應以一般過去時、第一人稱為主來敘述。My Unforgettable Junior High School LifeHow time flies! 【答案】How time flies! My colorful junior high school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think of about myself.In the past, I was busy learning my subjects and worked hard at them. I got on well with my classmates. I was good at English. I liked playing basketball / football / volleyball. But now I am interested in history, because it is very interesting. I have many interests such as reading books, playing sports and so on. In this way, I’ve got more knowledge and improved my life.In the future, I’ll try my best to do better. I’ll learn to enjoy my school life. I’ll make it more and more beautiful. Believing myself is the key to success.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文要求我們以My Unforgettable Junior High School Life為題，回想一下自己即將過去的初中，講述難忘的初中生活。注意：. ，句子連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；2. 短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名或能夠透露你個人身份的相關信息。根據上述提示，請以“My Unforgettable Junior High School Life”為題寫一篇文章，記錄你難忘的校園生活。9．（修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。同時還要注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。一切都準備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內容要求學生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關鍵。構思提綱。審好題是寫好書面表達的關鍵。增強邏輯關系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。根據要表達的內容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內容。要求：1. 思路清晰，觀點明確，語法正確，有說服力；2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱；3. 80詞左右。因此，人們常說“幫助別人就是幫助自己”。8．（通過這件事意識到，只要肯努力，沒有什么是做不成的。請你用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談談你個人的一次經歷：你付出了什么努力？取得了什么收獲？有何感悟？提示詞語：weak，spend，progress，keep trying提示問題：— What did you do?—What did you achieve?—What did you learn from the experience? 【答案】例文It is believed that hard work can lead to success. Two years ago, I was very weak in English, so I decided to work hard at it. I started to take an active part in English class. I spent half an hour listening and reading English every day. I also tried to watch some English movies. Several months later, I did much better in English. I felt proud of my progress and I realized nothing is impossible if you keep trying hard.【解析】【分析】本篇短文關于“付出與收獲”，學生可以通過自己的日常經歷，來寫付出了什么，中間是怎么努力的，以及最后從這段經歷中學到了什么。北京初三）題目2：常言道，“一分耕耘，一分收獲”這告訴我們凡事只有付出努力，才能取得成功。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結構是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。修改潤色。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。初寫短文。有了提綱，我們就可以根據提綱和主題確定相關的寫作材料。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求?！军c睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認真審題。根據要表達的內容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內容。Hello!Dear Amy, thank you for caring.Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Li Ming【答案】例文Hello!Dear Amy, thank you for caring.Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination. I have got good results in most of my subjects, but I am not happy with myself. I think I must spend more time on my studies.My parents are really strict with me. However, they care for me as well. Once upon a time, I failed in my physics exam and felt stressed and sad. They had a close munication with me and helped me solve my problems and cheer up again.My teachers are also ready to help us. They hope that we can realize our dreams. They tell us to try our best and not to give up. Life is always full of ups and downs. It39。 （2）. 第2要點和第3要點要用2—3句話作適當發(fā)揮。他們希望你們實現(xiàn)自己的理想。 （2）. 你的父母對你嚴格要求，但是也很關心你。要點如下： （1）. 雖然你大部分功課你都學得比較好，但是你對自己不滿意。6．（注意過渡性語言的使用。It is very important for us to have a lifelong learning 。They also believe that用短語、句型：all kinds of ，Some 寫完后反復閱讀修改推敲潤色，人稱、時態(tài)、單復數(shù)一致等。、短語、句型。第四段要表述作者自己的觀點。第二段要寫中學生利用周末和節(jié)假日上課外補習班贊同者的觀點。Nowadays, many middle school students are taking all kinds of afterschool classes at weekends or on holidays. There are two different opinions about it.Some people think that________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Nowadays, many middle school students are taking all kinds of afterschool classes at weekends or on holidays. There are two different opinions about it. Some people think that students can