【正文】 rs and plants there. We are going to have a piic in the open air. If you like to join us, prepare some food to take with you. Don’t forget to take a bottle of water. I hope you can e and we’ll e back at five in the afternoon. I’m looking forward to your early reply.【解析】試題分析：書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。請你向他發(fā)出邀請，告訴他去哪兒，做什么以及你的建議。北京中考模擬）（題文）假如你是李華，本周六與好友相約去北京植物園。you’ll have a wonderful time here. 是賓語從句。句子if you like natural 。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性。寫作時，避免使用漢語式的英語，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為第三人稱。s the season in China now? ●What39。ll have a wonderful time here.Yours sincerely,Li Ming【答案】Dear Thomas,I’m really happy to tell you something interesting about China. China is a country with along history.It is winter now and Spring Festival is the most popular at this time of year. Family members get together and then have a big dinner, After that, they watch lion dances and fireworks.“East or west, Gulin landscape is best.” Guilin is worth a visit if you like natural views. You can take a boat trip along the Lijiang Rive or ride around the countryside. It is great fun.Guilin is a special city with strong local colour. You can choose many excellent gifts there, such as Chinese paintings, paper fans and colorful clothes. I’m sure you’ll have a wonderful time here.Yours sincerely.Li Hua【解析】【詳解】這是一篇書信作文，根據(jù)電子郵件中的相關(guān)信息向澳大利亞筆友David介紹一下中國。m really happy to tell you something interesting about China. China is a country with a long history. I39。、校名等相關(guān)信息。s the most popular festival at this time of the year and what do you do during thefestival?●Which city in China is worth a visit and what can I do there?●What gifts can I choose for my Australian friends and relatives?I look forward to hearing from you soon.Best wishesDavid注意事項:，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，要求語句通順、意思連貫。m making a trip plan to China these days. Would youplease tell me more about China?●What39。s very hot in Australia nowand I39。To: Li Ming 163. From: David bigpond. Dear Li Ming,How are you? Is everything going smoothly? It39。假定你是李明，你最近認(rèn)識的澳大利亞筆友David給你發(fā)了一封電子郵件，想更多地了解中國。10．（亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如be kind to, each other, be in trouble, give a hand, try one’s best to do, take care of, get on well with, help sb with等。s our duty to show kindness to others around us. _________________________________________________【答案】It’s our duty to show kindness to others around us. I think everyone should be kind to each other. When someone is in trouble, we’ll give a hand politely. In our munity, I try my best to help the neighbors and take care of the old people at weekends as a volunteer. At school, I get on well with my classmates and help them with their lessons. I also send my books and clothes to the children who live in poor areas. I’m very proud I have made many friends by helping others in need.I believe our society will bee better and better if everyone shows kindness to each other.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，談?wù)勆钪心銓λ颂峁┥埔鈳椭慕?jīng)歷。主要內(nèi)容包括:你對友善行為的認(rèn)識和理解，你平時做哪些友善的事情，以及你這樣做的美好愿望。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“友善待人、快樂生活”為主題的征文活動。北京中考模擬）“友善”是一種美德，它猶如陽光和雨露照耀并滋潤著美德的形成。短文中還使用了豐富的句型，如Xiao Lin’s mom bought him a telephone and Xiao Gang’s dad bought a laptop for him.、But I think it is not proper to pare with each other.、Of course their parents can buy some gifts for the holiday, but I think the gift must be suitable for their children, such as books, school things, dictionaries and so on., which are good for them.、Things like cell phones and laptops are of little use to primary school students, just distracting 。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，文章以一般過去時和一般現(xiàn)在時、第三人稱來敘述，正確使用了謂語動詞的形式，注意了過去式，尤其是不規(guī)則動詞過去式的變化，語法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確。文章內(nèi)容完整、充實，敘述清晰、有層次?！军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求以及圖片信息，介紹了圖片中發(fā)生的事情，并對這件事發(fā)表了自己的看法。為提升作文水平，應(yīng)注意應(yīng)用高級詞匯和復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)。用從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，寫完整的句子。寫作時應(yīng)注意：首先短文內(nèi)容應(yīng)符合圖片表達(dá)的意思，不能會錯意，寫偏、寫錯；可以根據(jù)圖片信息適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使文章更加充實、完整。審題可知，這篇短文的內(nèi)容應(yīng)主要包括兩個部分：首先要描述圖片中發(fā)生的事情；其次對該事情闡述自己的觀點和看法。 提示詞： 手提電腦 laptop【答案】Yesterday afternoon, Xiao Lin and Xiao Gang from Class 3 Grade 4 had a talk. They showed off the Children’s Day gift. Xiao Lin’s mom bought him a telephone and Xiao Gang’s dad bought a laptop for him. They were very proud. Other students envied them very much. But I think it is not proper to pare with each other. The main task of students is studying. So their attention should be focused on study. Of course their parents can buy some gifts for the holiday, but I think the gift must be suitable for their children, such as books, school things, dictionaries and so on., which are good for them. Things like cell phones and laptops are of little use to primary school students, just distracting them.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文要求我們觀察圖片，將圖片中發(fā)生的場景用英語表達(dá)出來，是一篇看圖作文。內(nèi)容包括：1. 完整描述圖片內(nèi)容； 2. 簡要闡述你的觀點和看法。山東中考模擬）書面表達(dá)下面的圖片描述了昨天下午發(fā)生在四年級三班教室里的情景。：高分短語： so much ； all over the world； run along； take action to； keep ……clean .高分句型： enjoy running so much because it makes me keep fit and have an excellent figure. is the act of cleaning up trash while running . Sunday I wear plastic gloves and carry a garbage bag when I run along the river； protect the earth is to protect ourselves.【點睛】本篇材料作文書寫前要認(rèn)真審題，確定人稱（第一人稱）和時態(tài)（一般現(xiàn)在時）；關(guān)注題材的格式（記敘文），注意文章的篇章結(jié)構(gòu)；書寫時要緊扣主題，做到中心突出，內(nèi)容完整、連貫；成文后要檢查人稱、時態(tài)是否一致、單詞的拼寫是否正確、短語和句式的使用是否得當(dāng)。開篇緊扣主題，介紹自己最喜歡的運動是跑步；正文部分順理成章的介紹plogging這種運動方式以及自己如何身體力行地做到鍛煉、環(huán)保兩不誤；結(jié)尾以. Everyone should be an environmental protection guard and take action to keep our home clean . To protect the earth is to protect ，總結(jié)全文。書寫時要注意題干所給的提示材料，成文時要文句通順，內(nèi)容完整。