【正文】 mates, who helped me in time./I always wanted to visit America because it always seemed to me a very beautiful and friendly country./I think my English will make great progress ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的最大亮點。s you, my classmates, who helped me in time. So I began to take English learning seriously.Over the past two years, I think my English has improved a lot. I dreamed to study in an Englishspeaking country and I always wanted to visit America because it always seemed to me a very beautiful and friendly country. I think my English will make great progress there.Thank you.【解析】【分析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如be glad to do，talk about，used to be，be interested in，as a result，at the party，give up，dream to do等。（一兩點）注意：詞數(shù)60—80，文章的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。，自己開始認(rèn)真對待英語學(xué)習(xí)。要點如下：，對英語沒什么興趣，上課很少舉手發(fā)言。李浩也講述了自己英語學(xué)習(xí)的經(jīng)歷。11．（它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。Growing up with Good booksMy dear friend,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My Dear Friends,Reading is very important. We can get knowledge through reading. It can not only open our minds, but also make us cleverer and happier. Our study can be improved if we read more good books. The more we read, the more we will learn and the brighter our future will bee.However, some students spend much time in listening to music, watching TV or going online to play games. It takes much of their spare time. So I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books, especially read classics so that we can spread our Chinese traditional culture to the world.Let’s start reading now. And let it bee a part of our life!Thank you!【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如not only…but also，the more …the more，spend much time in doing，listen to music，watch TV，go online，play games，much of，like to do，so that，a part of等。讓讀書成為我們生活的一部分。請你根據(jù)活動主題并結(jié)合表格信息，以“Growing up with Good books”為題，用英語寫一篇約80個單詞的倡議書，向全校同學(xué)發(fā)出倡議。10．（：短語：full of；in public；again and again；all the time；encourage sb to do sth；do one’s best；with the support of。結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷，談?wù)勀惝?dāng)時的經(jīng)歷以及現(xiàn)在的感受。）The following is for reference only（以下表達(dá)僅供參考）used to be.../make sb do sth/in my heart/have a deep influence/remind sb of sth【答案】例文Yesterday once moreIt goes without saying that our life is full of a variety of memories. Among all the persons I have met, the most unforgettable person is my father.I used to be such a shy and silent girl that I couldn’t say any words in public. Whenever teachers asked me to answer questions, my heart would beat again and again and say nothing but to look down. Once, I tried talking with my father frightenedly. He listened to me all the time with bright smile and encouraged me to be brave. He told me, “ you don’t have to be perfect but when you do your best, you make your parent proud.” With the support of my father, I gained so much encouragement that I determined to be a more confident person. In one word, Father’s love like water, deep and soft, which makes great differences in my life.【解析】【詳解】：該題目屬于記敘文寫作。請選取一個方面，結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷，談?wù)勀惝?dāng)時的經(jīng)歷以及現(xiàn)在的感受。）當(dāng)昨日重現(xiàn)之時，在腦海里的都是回憶。9．（第三部分：總結(jié)全文?！驹斀狻坑⒄Z作文一般分為三個部分：第一部分：交代寫作目的：即將畢業(yè)，想和大家分享這三年的經(jīng)歷。3. 注意時態(tài)的正確使用，80100詞。要求：。請你給大家講一個最值得你回憶的故事。8．（最后短文中句式結(jié)構(gòu)文章，符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣，簡單句、并列句、復(fù)合句交替應(yīng)用，文章富有節(jié)奏的變化。作者觀點明確，理由充分。短文有以下幾個優(yōu)點：首先短文內(nèi)容符合題目要求，作者通過觀察圖片，正確了解了圖片傳達(dá)的信息，確定了文章的中心。同時語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)你暯映煞?，使文意連貫、自然。句式結(jié)構(gòu)可以簡單句為基礎(chǔ)，穿插并列句或復(fù)合句結(jié)構(gòu)。其次要注意英語句式表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的，不能根據(jù)漢語思維逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語。短文應(yīng)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，第三人稱來敘述，注意謂語動詞的正確形式。首先學(xué)生們應(yīng)仔細(xì)觀察圖片，了解圖片中發(fā)生的場景，弄清楚它主要想傳達(dá)的意思，然后用英語將這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。 寫作要求：1. 可以根據(jù)圖片信息，進(jìn)行適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮；2. 短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。小林和小剛之間的對話，讓你 想到了什么？請根據(jù)你對圖片的理解，用英語寫一篇 100 詞左右的短文。7．（通過這件事意識到，只要肯努力，沒有什么是做不成的。請你用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勀銈€人的一次經(jīng)歷：你付出了什么努力？取得了什么收獲？有何感悟？提示詞語：weak，spend，progress，keep trying提示問題：— What did you do?—What did you achieve?—What did you learn from the experience? 【答案】例文It is believed that hard work can lead to success. Two years ago, I was very weak in English, so I decided to work hard at it. I started to take an active part in English class. I spent half an hour listening and reading English every day. I also tried to watch some English movies. Several months later, I did much better in English. I felt proud of my progress and I realized nothing is impossible if you keep trying hard.【解析】【分析】本篇短文關(guān)于“付出與收獲”，學(xué)生可以通過自己的日常經(jīng)歷，來寫付出了什么，中間是怎么努力的，以及最后從這段經(jīng)歷中學(xué)到了什么。北京初三）題目2：常言道，“一分耕耘，一分收獲”這告訴我們凡事只有付出努力，才能取得成功。China is a nation of etiquette（禮儀），中國是一個禮儀之邦?？梢赃m當(dāng)使用高分句子。【點睛】寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系，上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。細(xì)心檢查避免疏漏。表格中列舉了三個要點，寫作時注意不要漏寫。 參考詞匯: civilized 文明的Dear Danny,I’m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization（文明） of China, I would like to share something with you. I hope you can e to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hear from you soon.All the best,Li Hua