【正文】 useums提示問題： ? Why didn’t you reply to Jim’s in time?? Where do you plan to travel?? What are your other plans for the summer holiday?To: JimFrom: Li HuaSubject: A planDear Jim,I39。北京中考模擬）（題文）假如你是中學(xué)生李華，你的美國筆友 Jim 一周前給你發(fā)了電子郵件，詢問你暑假里的旅游計(jì)劃及其他安排， 但由于某種原因你沒有及時(shí)回復(fù)。在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤。點(diǎn)睛：首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，抓住重點(diǎn)，理順要點(diǎn)。參考詞：stress （ 壓力） , nervous，sleep , time , healthy , smile , sports， help可以用到的短語有： take part in 參加； municate with sb. 和某人交流； try one39。在寫作的時(shí)候，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性。本文給出了一些要點(diǎn)，并給出了作文的開頭。 And we should also learn to face our grades bravely. Finally, if we often have too much stress, we had better see a doctor.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文。要求：內(nèi)容完整；書寫規(guī)范；語法準(zhǔn)確；語句通順連貫。請(qǐng)以＂How to solve our stress＂為題寫一篇90詞左右的短文，談?wù)勀阍谏?、學(xué)習(xí)方面的煩惱和壓力，以及要如何面對(duì)困難，解決問題的方法。福建中考模擬）親愛的初三同學(xué)，考試來臨，畢業(yè)在即，你遇到了人生路上的轉(zhuǎn)折點(diǎn)，你的生活、學(xué)習(xí)平添了一些煩惱和壓力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)?！军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。而To begin with,/ Moreover,/ Last but not least,等短語的運(yùn)用，既豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，更使短文很有條理，是本文的亮點(diǎn)?！敬鸢浮縄39。2. 短文中不能出現(xiàn)正式姓名，校名。山東中考模擬）“揚(yáng)帆起航新學(xué)期，學(xué)姐學(xué)長提建議”。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。修改潤色。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。初寫短文。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。【點(diǎn)睛】寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。（3）要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮How Can We Get RelaxedThese days, many students study too long every day and suffer from great pressure. Last week, my class had a discussion on how to get relaxed and reduce the pressure. 【答案】These days, many students study too long every day and suffer from great pressure. Last week, my class had a discussion on how to get relaxed and reduce the pressure。詞匯：壓力pressure要求：（1）詞數(shù)：80~100個(gè)。大家提出了許多種減壓、放松的方法。天津中考模擬）書面表達(dá)86. 如今，中學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)間長，壓力大。最后一句In a word, only when you develop interest in studying English can you learn it ，結(jié)束全文。后來在老師的幫助下，克服了困難。分別列出，行文流暢?！敬鸢浮縈y English StudyHow time flies! My threeyear middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my English study.When I entered the middle school, I had so many difficulties with my English. I was not able to understand the teacher in class, and I couldn’t master the words and phrases. For a time I wanted to give it up. Later, with the help of the teacher and my classmates, I listened to the teacher carefully in class, kept on reading English every day and spoke as much as possible. Step by step I made great progress in English.In a word, only when you develop interest in studying English can you learn it well.【解析】【詳解】短文第一句Looking back, I have many memories of my English 。要求：、解決的方法以及學(xué)習(xí)感悟。8．（分條逐一闡明理由并提出合理的相關(guān)建議。解讀“煩惱墻”內(nèi)容并陳述自己的觀點(diǎn)——青少年應(yīng)該被允許獨(dú)自旅行。Can Teenagers Take a Trip Alone?Nowadays, there is a message on the Trouble Wall attracting most of the students’ attention.______________________________________________________________________________【答案】Can Teenagers Take a Trip Alone?Nowadays, there is a message on the Trouble Wall attracting most of the students’ attention. The summer vacation is ing, and we hope to take a trip alone, but our parents don’t allowed us to do that, what should we do then? I like to travel to different places with my friends, so in my opinion, teenagers should be allowed to travel by ourselves. Here are my reasons.Firstly, we can see the beautiful scenery and get to know the different cultures. Secondly, our parents are too busy, so it’s difficult for them to acpany us all the time, we have to learn to look after ourselves. Traveling is a good way to train our selfcare capacity. But we need to get ready to deal with something unusual that may happen during the trip. But considering the safety, we must make plans in advance. Take notes of some important selfhelp knowledge. All in all, traveling alone is good.【解析】【分析】這是一篇話題議論文。參考要點(diǎn)：1. 解讀“煩惱墻”內(nèi)容； 2. 陳述你的觀點(diǎn)及理由；3. 提出合理的相關(guān)建議。我們，可以獨(dú)自出游么？”這是本月我校英語“煩惱墻”上最令人關(guān)注的內(nèi)容，并引發(fā)了大家的熱烈討論。重慶一中中考模擬）書面表達(dá)。No matter how hard the life is為讓步狀語從句。who has a serious illness為定語從句。注意語法正確，善用連詞，使各個(gè)要點(diǎn)連貫。人物身份為同學(xué)白楊，介紹分四個(gè)要點(diǎn)：她家境貧寒；她精心照顧患病母親；她學(xué)習(xí)刻苦，成績優(yōu)異；她關(guān)心同學(xué)，樂于助人；她經(jīng)常利用空閑時(shí)間做志愿者工作。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容介紹白楊，并談一談她對(duì)你及同學(xué)們的影響。白楊是我的同學(xué)。6．（修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。構(gòu)思提綱。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如get good results, spend+時(shí)間+on sth, be strict with, however, care for, as well, once upon a time, help sb do, cheer up, be ready to, tell sb to do, try one’s best to do, be full of以及it is adj to do sth等，增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。s important not to be afraid of any kind of difficulty. How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Li Ming【解析】【詳解】本文屬于材料作文，告訴艾米目前你在全力以赴為中考而學(xué)習(xí)，并與她交流一下目前的學(xué)習(xí)和生活情況。 （3）. 詞數(shù)90個(gè)左右，郵件開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。他們說（適當(dāng)發(fā)揮2—3句）……注意： （1）. 要求語句通順，意思連貫。（舉例說明，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮2—3句）…… （3）. 老師很樂意幫助你們。你認(rèn)為自己學(xué)習(xí)上還要多花工夫。江陰初級(jí)中學(xué)中考模擬）你是一位九年級(jí)的學(xué)生李明，你用英語寫一封郵件給你的筆友Amy，感謝她對(duì)你關(guān)心，并告訴她目前你在全力以赴為中考而學(xué)習(xí)，并與她交流一下目前的學(xué)習(xí)和生活情況。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系?！驹斀狻窟@是一篇給材料作文，介紹畢業(yè)典禮活動(dòng)計(jì)劃。Dear editor,I am very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation party.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes,Yours Lihua【答案】Dear editor,I39。 ，開頭結(jié)尾己給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)?；顒?dòng)畢業(yè)晚會(huì)時(shí)間6月28日晚上七點(diǎn)地點(diǎn)學(xué)校禮堂school hall參與者全體初三學(xué)生和老師活動(dòng)內(nèi)容1.邀請(qǐng)校長作演講；2.互贈(zèng)禮物送祝福；3.各班表演精彩節(jié)目4. 要求：，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使句子通順，連貫。廣州市第十六中學(xué)中考模擬）書面表達(dá)初中就要畢業(yè)了，校報(bào)“英語角”欄目向同學(xué)們征集畢業(yè)晚會(huì)的計(jì)劃。s more, I bought my good friends many lovely presents which is relate