【正文】 后順序敘述，條理清晰。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，符合圖片所傳達(dá)的信息，表述準(zhǔn)確。語(yǔ)句之間注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫。還需注意的是英語(yǔ)表達(dá)和漢語(yǔ)的習(xí)慣不同，不能逐詞去翻譯，應(yīng)從句子整體考慮，使用簡(jiǎn)單句的基本句型，如主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu)或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)。通過(guò)分析可知，這篇短文講述的是過(guò)去發(fā)生的事情，應(yīng)用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式的變化，尤其是不規(guī)則動(dòng)詞的過(guò)去式形式?！敬鸢浮縊ne day Lin Tao and Meimei were playing in the garden. They found that a young tree needed watering and it was going to die. So they decided to do something for the young tree. First, Meimei kept the tree straight and pushed the earth hard down with her foot. Then Lin Tao knocked a board into the earth. It said, “Please take care of trees.” After that, they quickly got water and watered it carefully. Both of them were working hard. Their teacher, Miss Li, spoke highly of them.Trees are good for the environment. We should protect them.【解析】這是一篇看圖作文，要求我們仔細(xì)觀察圖片，弄清楚里面發(fā)生的事情，用英語(yǔ)將這些內(nèi)容完整地?cái)⑹龀鰜?lái)，并簡(jiǎn)單陳述自己從中學(xué)到的東西。要求：。6．書(shū)面表達(dá)以下圖畫(huà)呈現(xiàn)了林濤和梅梅在公園里發(fā)生的事情。t grab the red packets, people may feel sad or illtempered ,even break their cell 。短文中使用了較豐富的句型，如About 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment, bring them more fun.、Grabbing red packets has been part of people’s lives、About 25% of them say some people spend too much time grabbing red packets、Personally, there39。其次短文中語(yǔ)言得體，句式準(zhǔn)確，符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。文章分為三段，第一段是題目中已經(jīng)給出的，因此了文章的話題。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。為提升文章檔次，還應(yīng)注意使用高級(jí)句型和較復(fù)雜的句式。因此文章的內(nèi)容應(yīng)主要包括三部分：支持的人們的理由；反對(duì)者們的理由；自己的看法，可以分成兩段或者三段來(lái)敘述，這樣可以使文章結(jié)構(gòu)清楚，有層次。題目中給出了一個(gè)表格，里面包括了支持搶紅包這個(gè)游戲的人們的觀點(diǎn)以及反對(duì)這個(gè)游戲的人們的觀點(diǎn)和理由，只給了一些短語(yǔ)，我們需要組織語(yǔ)言，將這些要點(diǎn)用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)，并使文章內(nèi)容更加豐富、完整。t grab the red packets, people may feel sad or illtempered ,even break their cell phones. What39。s no doubt that not only does it bring people happiness, but also send blessings to people in a special form. Also, it39。Grabbing red packets on lineAgreement（75%） popular form of entertainment, bring more fun people closer, make more friendsDisagreement（25%）spend too much time.not have enough munication with family members, feel lonelyYour opinion1.2.提示詞：We chat 微信Grabbing red packets on line搶紅包注意：（1）詞數(shù)80左右，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；（2）文章應(yīng)包括題中所提的所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫；（3）文中請(qǐng)勿提及你的真實(shí)姓名、校名和其他真實(shí)信息。5．書(shū)面表達(dá)（原創(chuàng)）今年春節(jié)，很多人加入了搶紅包的游戲，但也有人表示擔(dān)憂。寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，要點(diǎn)齊全，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知本文會(huì)用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用。、校名等相關(guān)信息。，并補(bǔ)充相關(guān)信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。注意:。4．書(shū)面表達(dá)難忘的初中三年學(xué)習(xí)生活已經(jīng)接近尾聲，你一定既有收獲又有不足，也有許多對(duì)自己未來(lái)的期待。短文以簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主，也使用了一些復(fù)合句和較高級(jí)的句型，如I’m writing to tell you that our city will have a Winter Camp during this winter ；From , I know you will have a report “An Update on the Cotswold Canals” February 6th, which will happen during the same period of our Winter ；And I also hope to listen to your talk so that I can know more about the Stroudwater Canal, the Thames and Severn 。如果分段敘述效果則會(huì)更好，那樣會(huì)使文章的層次更加清晰。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目要求的所有信息，沒(méi)有遺漏要點(diǎn)。穿插一些高級(jí)詞匯和復(fù)雜句式，提升文章檔次和水平，使表達(dá)更加流暢。注意英語(yǔ)句子的表達(dá)和漢語(yǔ)習(xí)慣是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯，而應(yīng)從句子的整體考慮，使用正確的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以及適當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯、短語(yǔ)和句型，保證句子的準(zhǔn)確性和語(yǔ)言的地道。寫(xiě)作時(shí)，應(yīng)根據(jù)題目的這些要求，組織語(yǔ)言，串聯(lián)成一篇短文。Dear Liz Payne,I’m Li Hua,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Liz Payne,I’m Li Hua, a middle school student learning in Grade 3 in China. I’m writing to tell you that our city will have a Winter Camp during this winter vacation. I hope to have a chance to visit London Canal Museum. From , I know you will have a report “An Update on the Cotswold Canals”February 6th, which will happen during the same period of our Winter Camp. And I also hope to listen to your talk so that I can know more about the Stroudwater Canal, the Thames and Severn Canal. What’s more, I hope to learn more about London Canal Museum and even more about the UK.I’m looking forward to your reply!Yours,Li Hua【解析】這篇作文要求我們以中學(xué)生李華的身份，給Liz Payne寫(xiě)一個(gè)留言。作文要求：；不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校真實(shí)的名稱和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名；,詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右。3．假設(shè)你是來(lái)自中國(guó)的中學(xué)生李華,打算參加當(dāng)?shù)亟M織的國(guó)外冬令營(yíng),看完了這個(gè)網(wǎng)頁(yè)后,你打算給Liz Payne留言,表達(dá)你在冬令營(yíng)期間想去London Canal Museum參觀的愿望。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。s a good idea to join in some charity activities because we should be kind to someone in ，既使短文層次清晰