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? R. Draper, Target Practice ? The poem is shaped like a bull’s eye or target with a series of concentric circles. ? Each circle from the outside to the inside represents a progression in the degree of seriousness of injury. ? Uniqueness and originality She loves me She loves me not She loves She loves me She She loves She ——Emmett Willows ? The poem has a stripping effect like the stripping away of daisypetals. Each subsequent repetition of the two base lines of the poem is diminished by one word. ? So we see that our lover bees more and more at a loss for words and his mistress eventually prefers her own pany. Read diagonally from the bottom left upward to the right, the remaining isolated words will form a statement : She loves me not. 謝謝觀看 /歡迎下載 BY FAITH I MEAN A VISION OF GOOD ONE CHERISHES AND THE ENTHUSIASM THAT PUSHES ONE TO SEEK ITS FULFILLMENT REGARDLESS OF OBSTACLES. BY FAITH I BY FAITH 。其一, 詩中選的詞排成兩個(gè)豎列,宛如夫婦雙方, 中間隔了一張網(wǎng),正在一來一去的擊球; 其二,詩中選的詞基本都是單音節(jié)詞,讀 來機(jī)械單調(diào),很容易讓人聯(lián)想到這對夫婦 枯燥乏味,缺乏情趣的生活;其三,詩中 的兩個(gè)關(guān)鍵詞 tennis 和 between被拆開了, 分別置于兩個(gè)豎列中,隱喻兩人的感情世 界已被一張無形的網(wǎng)隔開,不再融為一體。 [冰山 譯 ] ? 艸 (一 ◇ 十 艸 洛)冖 卂 艸 冖 卂 ? ? 譯文:煢(一葉落)煢 — Think you’re in Heaven? Well — you’ll soon be in H E