【正文】 。語法規(guī)范、準(zhǔn)確。文章最后的兩句話也點(diǎn)明了文章的主題。作者在短文中敘述了林濤和梅梅兩人在公園里給小樹澆水、并掛牌子告訴人們注意保護(hù)樹木。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。在文章中點(diǎn)綴幾個(gè)并列句、復(fù)合句或復(fù)雜句式，調(diào)整文章節(jié)奏，提升文章檔次。寫作時(shí)要注意按照事情發(fā)展的先后順序，這樣可以使文章條理清楚。因此寫作前，要仔細(xì)看圖片，了解圖片中所發(fā)生的事情，并提煉出要點(diǎn)，列出所要用到的詞匯、短語等，或者列出大概的寫作提綱。請用英語寫一篇約100詞的短文。短文中較好的句式有More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze、People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. 、The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway、In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the 。短文中語言得體，句式表達(dá)符合英語的習(xí)慣。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目中要求的所有信息，沒有遺漏要點(diǎn)；且文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，分成了三段，每一段的中心明確，意思表達(dá)清楚、明了。為提升文章檔次，可以穿插使用并列句和復(fù)合句；語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫，表達(dá)流暢。文章內(nèi)容中敘述的情況不一，時(shí)態(tài)不能統(tǒng)一，根據(jù)表達(dá)的需要使用正確的時(shí)態(tài)，注意謂語動(dòng)詞的正確形式。首先介紹去年家鄉(xiāng)的霧霾情況嚴(yán)重；然后介紹為減少霧霾人們采取了一些措施；最后介紹一下你自己在日常生活中應(yīng)該怎么做。Dear Jack,I’m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I’d like to tell you something about the haze. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours,Li Ming【答案】Dear Jack,I’m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I’d like to tell you something about the haze.The hazy weather has occurred a lot of times in my hometown since last year. It was bad for our daily life. More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze. A great number of people have to stay at home .People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway.As for me, I will go to school by bike or on foot. In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the environment. Would you like to tell me some good ideas? I’m looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Ming【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以李明的身份給自己的英國筆友寫信，告訴他關(guān)于家鄉(xiāng)霧霾的情況。內(nèi)容如下：1. 由于大氣污染程度十分嚴(yán)重，去年已發(fā)生數(shù)次霧霾天氣；2. 人們已經(jīng)意識到霧霾天氣的危害，正在采取各種措施減少其發(fā)生；3. 你在日常生活中打算為此做些什么。9．書面表達(dá)假如你是李明，你的英國筆友Jack來信詢問你的家鄉(xiāng)是否有霧霾天氣，情況如何。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。The Changes in ClassThanks for giving us students a chance to express ourselves about how we study in 【答案】 The Changes in ClassThanks for giving us students a chance to express ourselves about how we study in class. I like the class like think it is very interesting and lively. We can tell stories, play games and listen to music.I think it is open and free. We can study and think by ourselves .We can discuss in groups and show ourselves. We can get more knowledge in this class. The changes in Class are good for us.【解析】【詳解】假如你是李華，你們學(xué)校正在進(jìn)行課堂教學(xué)改革，經(jīng)過一段時(shí)間的適應(yīng)，同學(xué)們發(fā)現(xiàn)現(xiàn)在的課堂跟以前比較發(fā)生了一些變化，請你根據(jù)所給提示以“The Changes in Class”為題目，用英語寫一篇100詞左右的文章，談?wù)勀愕母惺芎拖敕ǎ_頭和結(jié)尾已給出（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。8．書面表達(dá)假如你是李華，你們學(xué)校正在進(jìn)行課堂教學(xué)改革，經(jīng)過一段時(shí)間的適應(yīng)，同學(xué)們發(fā)現(xiàn)現(xiàn)在的課堂跟以前比較發(fā)生了一些變化，請你根據(jù)所給提示以“The Changes in Class”為題目，用英語寫一篇100詞左右的文章，談?wù)勀愕母惺芎拖敕?，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。t be afraid of the difficulties in my life and I39。文章中句式變化豐富，有簡單句、并列句、復(fù)合句，長短句結(jié)合，增強(qiáng)了文章的表現(xiàn)力。短文主要分成三段，每一段主題都很明確，敘述詳細(xì)、清楚。文章有以下幾個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn)：首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包括了題目中要求的所有內(nèi)容，沒有遺漏要點(diǎn)。為提升文章檔次，應(yīng)注意銜接詞以及高級句式或復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)的使用。應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，選擇適當(dāng)句型、短語、詞匯進(jìn)行表達(dá)。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意：首先要保證發(fā)言稿中包括了所有提示的內(nèi)容，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，可以根據(jù)表達(dá)需要適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但要與上下文意銜接起來。寫作時(shí)學(xué)生們應(yīng)根據(jù)這幾個(gè)內(nèi)容提要，發(fā)揮自己的想象力，將這些內(nèi)容補(bǔ)充完整，用正確的英語表達(dá)出來。m sure that nothing can beat me and I will win! Believe myself, a beautiful future is waiting for me.Thank you for your listening.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以Believe Myself and I will win為題，寫一篇演講稿。Believe Myself, and I Will WinHello, everyone!___________________________________________________________________________Thank you for your listening.【答案】Believe Myself, and I wi