【正文】 當(dāng)主語是第三人稱單數(shù)時(shí)，注意主謂一致關(guān)系。用“wear + 某種衣服”來介紹某人的穿戴。時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)?！军c(diǎn)睛】人物介紹是記敘文中常見的一種寫作類型。介紹發(fā)生的一件難忘的事情，要用到一般過去時(shí)態(tài)。時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)。題目給出了標(biāo)題及寫作要點(diǎn)。1. 簡要介紹你最好的朋友的外貌和性格。10． 朋友是我們生活的組成部分，他們總是在我們最需要幫助的時(shí)候陪伴我們。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。構(gòu)思提綱。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。 導(dǎo)致 cause注意：，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；；：100詞左右，文章開頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總數(shù)。優(yōu)點(diǎn)（advantage）；節(jié)約時(shí)間；避免擁擠、勞累，品種多缺點(diǎn)（disadvantage）， 看不到商品本身， 造成浪費(fèi)你的觀點(diǎn)……提示詞匯：網(wǎng)購shopping online?！熬W(wǎng)購”已成為一種時(shí)尚，越來越多的學(xué)生也加入到網(wǎng)購群體中。文章中也出現(xiàn)了一些語法上的小錯(cuò)誤，總的來說，不影響整篇文章的質(zhì)量。s no doubt that not only does it bring people happiness, but also send blessings to people in a special form.、If people can39。文章以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主，特別注意了謂語動(dòng)詞的正確形式，語法規(guī)范、準(zhǔn)確。第二段中作者表述了支持和反對玩這個(gè)游戲的人們各自的理由；第三段中作者發(fā)表了自己的看法。首先短文內(nèi)容完整、結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文章整體意思連貫、表達(dá)流暢。寫作時(shí)，應(yīng)注意英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語的不同，不要逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)從句子整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，以簡單句為主，穿插并列句和復(fù)合句。最后還要加上自己的看法。s worse, it may lead to the crime.【解析】這篇作文要求我們對學(xué)校進(jìn)行的關(guān)于春節(jié)搶紅包這件事的調(diào)查結(jié)果進(jìn)行總結(jié)，并談?wù)勛约簩@件事情的看法。s obvious that it is more convenient. However, as a saying goes, each coin has two sides. It is not an exception, it also has some bad effects. If people can39。As we all know, grabbing red packets on line won popularity with the people during the Spring Festival in 2016. From then on, more and more people have been crazy about it. So we did the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” among students.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】As we all know, grabbing red packets on line won popularity with the people during the Spring Festival in 2016. From then on, more and more people have been crazy about it. So we did the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” among students.About 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment, bring them more fun. It can bring people closer , they can make more friends .Grabbing red packets has been part of people’s lives. About 25% of them say some people spend too much time grabbing red packets. They don’t have enough munication with their family members .They may feel a little lonelyPersonally, there39。學(xué)校英語?？队⒄Z天地》對此進(jìn)行調(diào)查，假如你是一名?？∮浾?，請你就此次調(diào)查的結(jié)果進(jìn)行總結(jié)，并談?wù)勀阕约旱挠^點(diǎn)。t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much.、My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class、In this way, I feel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies等等。也使用了并列句和復(fù)合句的結(jié)構(gòu)，如賓語從句、狀語從句等。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，文章主要使用了一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)，謂語動(dòng)詞形式準(zhǔn)確?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，談了自己對同學(xué)們普遍感到壓力大這種現(xiàn)象的看法，并分享了自己的經(jīng)歷。但為提升作文檔次，應(yīng)穿插使用并列句和復(fù)合句，或使用一些復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)，如非謂語動(dòng)詞、被動(dòng)語態(tài)等。文章應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)，注意根據(jù)表達(dá)的需要使用正確的時(shí)態(tài)，并變化謂語動(dòng)詞的正確形式。題目中只給出了大概的提綱，其中具體的內(nèi)容應(yīng)由學(xué)生們自己發(fā)揮想象力來補(bǔ)充，并用正確的英語表達(dá)出來。Less pressure makes better life. Thank you.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們針對現(xiàn)在同學(xué)們普遍感到壓力大這種現(xiàn)象，以Less Pressure Makes Life Better為題，談?wù)勛约旱目捶?，和同學(xué)們分享一下自己的經(jīng)驗(yàn)。t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much.I was always under pressure, too. My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class. They always sent me to all kinds of afterclasses on weekends.Less Pressure Makes Better LifeHello, everyone!Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Most students in our class are under too much pressure. _________________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________