【正文】 。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。同時還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。構(gòu)思提綱。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。Dear Angel,How are you doing? Best wishes!Yours,Cathy【答案】Dear Angel,How are you doing? I’m writing to tell you that we received the books that you bought for us. We are grateful to you and all of us are very happy。3字跡工整、語言精練、表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確、條理清晰。寫作要求：1不得使用真實的姓名和學(xué)校名。（3）同學(xué)們將在下個月網(wǎng)購其他的英文書。2介紹活動的情況：（l）上周五，俱樂部成員們一起讀英文書。請你根據(jù)以下信息, 給Angel寫一封電子郵件，告訴她俱樂部的活動情況，并說說網(wǎng)購圖書的好處。10．書面表達(dá)假如你是英語俱樂部的Cathy,上周五你們收到了外教Angel為同學(xué)們網(wǎng)購的英文書籍。用be good at doing ，用like sth./doing “My/His/her favorite + 名詞+ is …”來介紹某人的最愛。在介紹長相時用“be+形容詞”來描述人物的身高、體重、身材等；用“have/has + （straight/curly） hair / （big/small） eyes/nose/mouth”來描述頭發(fā)或五官。內(nèi)容可以是介紹自己也可以介紹他人，包括姓名、年齡、外貌特征、興趣愛好，有時也可以包括日常活動。另外在寫作時可以適當(dāng)使用一些連詞，使之上下連貫，合乎邏輯。我們要做的就是用正確的英語句子來組織這些材料，在描寫外貌和性格時，會用到系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意主謂一致關(guān)系。根據(jù)題目要求可知，人稱以第三人稱為主。2. 介紹和你朋友之間發(fā)生的一件令人難忘的事；3. 你是怎樣看待你們之間的友誼的要求：1. 語句連貫通順，文章銜接緊密2. 詞數(shù)801003. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實校名及姓名Friends are very important in our life. They always help us when we are in need.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My best friendFriends are very important in our life. They always help us when we are in need. Everyone needs friends to talk with and get confidence from.My best friend is Jenny. She is a quiet girl. She is always friendly and helpful. She is a tall girl with long hair. She does well in all the subjects and gets on well with others at school.I was weak in maths. One day, I failed in maths exam. I was so sad that I couldn’t help crying. Jenny encouraged me a lot. From then on, she helped me with my maths, With her help, I got an A in the next maths exam. I was really thankful to her.I think friendship is a necessary part of our lives. I want to keep our friendship forever.【解析】【詳解】試題分析：這是一個提綱作文。你最好的朋友是誰？你是怎么看待你們的友誼的？請以“My Best Friend ”為題，根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇英語短文。句型：By doing so, our world will bee more and more beautiful；we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on。例文點評：例文采用的是一段式，人稱用的是第一人稱復(fù)數(shù)形式，時態(tài)主要用的是一般現(xiàn)在時，描述具體怎么做時，描寫細(xì)致，條理清晰。假如你是李華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勆钪心阍撛趺醋?，以及這樣做的意義。時代楷模充分體現(xiàn)“愛國、敬業(yè)、誠信、友善”的價值準(zhǔn)則。句型：被動句型，現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語，主語從句。文章條理分明，三個要點提示都已表達(dá)清楚，并進(jìn)行了適當(dāng)拓展，所給單詞也都全部用上。：該題要求寫作體裁為書信格式，所以例文用第一人稱I進(jìn)行寫作，在文章結(jié)尾也按照標(biāo)準(zhǔn)書信格式進(jìn)行了收尾。提示詞語： Chinese classes, learn, attend, culture, prepare提示問題： ● When and where will the Chinese Summer Camp be held?● What activities will be held at the Chinese Summer Camp?● What is your advice for Jack?Dear Jack,I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in ourschool this summer holiday . .Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jack,I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in our school this summer holiday.The Chinese Summer Camp will be held in our school from July 10th to July 30th this summer. The activities of this Chinese Summer Camp are as follows:First, you will attend Chinese classes, learning the meaning of Chinese characters.