【正文】 。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)，主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如get together，enjoy the full moon， share our stories等。m glad to hear from you. Now let me introduce the MidAutumn Festival to you. The MidAutumn Festival falls on the 15th of the 8th lunar month. It’s a big day for us Chinese people. All the family members get together to celebrate the festival. In the evening, we usually have a big dinner. And then we go outside and enjoy the full moon. The moon that night looks the brightest. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together to eat mooncakes, and share our stories.For me, the best part is to enjoy the moon and eat mooncakes. Mooncakes taste very delicious. They look like the moon, big and round.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本篇寫作是以書信的方式向筆友介紹中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日中秋節(jié)，要用一般現(xiàn)在時來寫。Dear Jessica, I39。內(nèi)容須包含以下所有要點：1. 中秋節(jié)的時間；2. 中秋節(jié)的傳統(tǒng)習俗及慶祝方式：全家人一起吃飯, 賞月, 吃月餅等；3, 我最期待的活動。10．李華的英國筆友Jessica來信說, 她想了解中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日中秋節(jié)。Because they said it was convenient for them and it could take them less time to go to school. They also said in the morningthe traffic was busy and the students couldn’t ride electric bicycles ，理由也很充分。時態(tài)運用正確，書寫工整規(guī)范。并且要圍繞主題適當發(fā)揮。觀點分明，談及理由按照要求至少要各寫兩點。根據(jù)所給要點可知，本文主要以一般過去時態(tài)書寫?！敬鸢浮縇ast week， our class had a discussion about whether junior students could ride electric bicycles to go to students of our class agreed with it， because they said it was convenient for them and it could takethem less time to go to school. But the other 35 students didn’t agree with them. They said it was not safe forthe junior students to get to school by electric bicycles， for they were too young. They also said in the morningthe traffic was busy and the students couldn’t ride electric bicycles quickly.【解析】試題分析：本題要求以初中生能否騎電動自行車上學進行了一次討論。生詞提示：electric 討論結(jié)果25人表示同意35人不同意理由；。現(xiàn)在，請你根據(jù)下表用英語寫一篇介紹討論情況的短文。最后要細心復核檢查，確保正確無誤。在寫作過程中，要將圖表內(nèi)提示信息用英語正確的表達出來，要涵蓋圖表中提到的所有要點，注意理順要點，防止漏寫。根據(jù)所給出的材料提示可知文章時態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱主要為第一、第三人稱。學校開展“夢想少年”的主題演講活動，假如你是張明，要求根據(jù)圖表提示內(nèi)容，以“I39。In a word， I believe that the man who holds his dream will be able to achieve his dream one day． That39。d like to help people． For example， I volunteer to visit sick children in the hospital and cheer them up． Good morning， dear teachers and friends， I am Zhang Ming． It39。提示詞語： good at ..with ...rules up popular with... to do something【答案】I39。m a Dream Teenager”為題，寫一篇80－100詞的短文，向大家推介自己。8．近年來，習近平主席提出了實現(xiàn)中華民族偉大復興的“中國夢”。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。同時還要注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。一切都準備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。構(gòu)思提綱。審好題是寫好書面表達的關(guān)鍵。增強邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內(nèi)容。 作文的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不必抄寫在試卷上，也不計入總詞數(shù)。作文要求：1．不得照抄原文；不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學校的真實名稱和學生的真實姓名。生活中，我們需要他人的幫助，也要學會幫助他人。7．書面表達（本題15分）根據(jù)要求完成短文寫作，請將作文寫在答題卡指定的位置上。開頭介紹了我想要邀請你去老舍茶館，接下來介紹我們?nèi)ツ抢镒鍪裁?，最后指出我們要在何時何地見面。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。結(jié)合所給材