【正文】 。本篇文章內(nèi)容完整，符合材料要求，Elephants are the largest mammals …,及First, we should plant more trees 也使用到了比較級和最高級；Firstly,…. Secondly,…等詞的使用使文章具有層次性，條理清晰。提出倡議時可以使用We can/ We should/ Let’s/We’d better的表示建議的句子。文章共分為三個方面的內(nèi)容，首先描述大象想在所處的現(xiàn)狀，然后說明出現(xiàn)這種狀況的原因，最后為了保護的大象我們應該如何去做。s contribution （貢獻） can make a big difference. Yours,Lihua【答案】Dear classmates,Elephants are the largest mammals on the land and they can live up to be eighty years. But now the number of the elephants is decreasing because of the following reasons. Firstly, people cut down trees in the forest, so elephants are losing their homes. Secondly, people also kill elephants for their ivory.As a result, we need to do something to help them. First, we should plant more trees to build the homes for elephants. Second, we can put up post on the street to tell people that it is against the law to kill elephants. Or we can also hold some activities in some public places to spread the idea of protecting the elephants. I believe everyone39。參考詞匯：哺乳動物mammal。要求：1）恰當運用比較級和最高級；2）80詞左右。目前數(shù)量在減少，因為：1）人們砍伐森林，大象漸漸失去家園；2）人們捕殺大象，獲取象牙。10．假如你是李華，請你根據(jù)以下提示用英語寫一封保護大象的倡議書。troublebecase在這樣的情況下；這句話意為：在這樣的情況下，他們認為孩子會更加輕松擁有成功的人生。easily．Insuccessfulhavethinkthiss lives，in this case，in this way，in trouble。文章首先說明不理解掃雪機式父母的原因，接下來說明自己的觀點，并闡述自己觀點的原因。在解答寫作這類試題時，要根據(jù)短文的中心思想考慮如何開頭、展開和結尾，將主要句型、關鍵詞語草草記下，形成提綱，然后再動筆寫作。s this case,they think children have a successful life ,Children have no freedom to do is the worst thing in their life.In my opinion,parents shouldn39。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文I really can39。短文應包括所選觀點中的要點，可適當發(fā)揮。父母控制一切，孩子沒有自由。請從下表的兩種觀點中選擇一種觀點，并結合此觀點闡述自己的看法，用英文寫一篇短文投稿。9．近期某英文報紙就“Snowplow Parents（掃雪機式父母）”這一話題展開討論。Because they said it was convenient for them and it could take them less time to go to school. They also said in the morningthe traffic was busy and the students couldn’t ride electric bicycles ，理由也很充分。時態(tài)運用正確，書寫工整規(guī)范。并且要圍繞主題適當發(fā)揮。觀點分明，談及理由按照要求至少要各寫兩點。根據(jù)所給要點可知，本文主要以一般過去時態(tài)書寫?！敬鸢浮縇ast week， our class had a discussion about whether junior students could ride electric bicycles to go to students of our class agreed with it， because they said it was convenient for them and it could takethem less time to go to school. But the other 35 students didn’t agree with them. They said it was not safe forthe junior students to get to school by electric bicycles， for they were too young. They also said in the morningthe traffic was busy and the students couldn’t ride electric bicycles quickly.【解析】試題分析：本題要求以初中生能否騎電動自行車上學進行了一次討論。生詞提示：electric 討論結果25人表示同意35人不同意理由；?，F(xiàn)在，請你根據(jù)下表用英語寫一篇介紹討論情況的短文。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結構是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。修改潤色。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。初寫短文。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關的寫作材料。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求。【點睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認真審題。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如be supposed to, be kind to, keep your words, what’s more, in one’s opinion, develop bad habits, be rude to, be strict with, make a difference to以及it is a good habit to be honest中it作形式主語。Dear Sam,Haven’t written to you for a long time! As you know, family rules are an important part of our Chinese traditional culture. Today I’m writing to tell you something about my family rules.There are many rules that we have to follow.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________