【正文】 考點(diǎn)：材料作文。因?yàn)槭菙⑹鐾瑢W(xué)的現(xiàn)在的觀點(diǎn)，所以句子應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時，敘述同學(xué)的觀點(diǎn)用第三人稱，敘述自己的觀點(diǎn)用第一人稱?！癏ow can a teenager have a successful life?”的討論，為此你采訪了一些同學(xué)（結(jié)果見下表）。修改潤色。初寫短文。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如bought sth for sb, be grateful to, be going to do, share sth with sb, be fond of, as far as I am concerned, on the one hand...on the other hand, from to以及we had a reading party,which was held on Friday in our reading room中which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句。4至少80詞。3說一說網(wǎng)上購書有什么好處。寫作要點(diǎn)：1表達(dá)收到圖書后的喜悅與感激之情?！究键c(diǎn)定位】 考查提綱類作文。要包含表格中所有的信息，并作適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。2. 所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表格中所有的信息，并作適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。In the program, a customer stood up when a blind woman was cheated badly in a cake shop. _______【答案】In the program, a customer stood up when a blind woman was cheated badly in a cake shop. I really admire her because she was brave enough to help the woman in need.The other day I saw a little girl crying at a street corner on my way home. I tried my best to make her stop crying. When I knew she was lost, I helped her make a call to her dad and stayed with her until he arrived. I found it pleasant to give others a hand.In my opinion, we are supposed to help each other and be thankful for others’ help. I strongly believe helping others will fill our society with positive energy. As the saying goes, “The rose’s in her hand, the flavor in mine.”（113w）【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，描述對節(jié)目中挺身而出的顧客的看法、發(fā)生在你身上正能量的事件以及鼓勵大家相互幫助，并讓世界充滿正能量。請你在網(wǎng)上給What would you do?本期節(jié)目留言，內(nèi)容包括：1. 你對節(jié)目中挺身而出的顧客的看法；2. 說說你幫助別人或別人幫助你的一件事例；3. 呼吁大家互幫互助，彼此感恩，讓社會充滿正能量。寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文語言精煉，像第二自然段的Football has a very long history. It is liked by people all over the world. The World Cup takes place every four years. it helps develop team spirit. What’s more, playing football is good for our health. 等等句子，簡潔，但是句意表達(dá)清楚；同時，本文用了被動語態(tài)、動名詞作主語、不定式作表語等等語法形式，使表達(dá)生動；用了first, second等使得短文層次清楚。參考詞匯：梅西 MessiDear classmates,I’m very excited to hear that China will build 20,000 footballthemed schools by 2020. Thank you for your attention.【答案】Dear classmates，I’m very excited to hear that China will build 20，000 footballthemed schools by 2020．Football has a very long history．It is liked by people all over the world．The World Cup takes place every four years．Playing football has lots of advantages．First，both boys and girls can take part in it．Second，it helps develop team spirit．What’s more，playing football is good for our health．I’m a football fan．Messi is my hero．He has a gift for playing football．My dream is to bee a famous football player like Messi．I hope China will hold the World Cup some day．Thank you for your attention．【解析】【詳解】試題分析：本題要求按提綱的提示，介紹足球運(yùn)動并談?wù)勛约旱膲粝搿?．書面表達(dá)為了配合“足球進(jìn)校園”活動，你們班開展了一次主題班會。最后對家鄉(xiāng)的未來表達(dá)了自己的愿望。語句之間注意使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫。審題可知，作文的基本框架和大概內(nèi)容都有了，需要注意的是在描寫過去的時候，需要適當(dāng)發(fā)揮一到兩點(diǎn)；還有對將來的希望也需要學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮。be in use（投入使用）；旅游：每年有成千上萬來自各地的游客。......（適當(dāng)發(fā)揮一至兩點(diǎn)）現(xiàn)在環(huán)境：政府采取措施來改善污染，城市變得越來越整潔。5．書面表達(dá)某英文報舉辦“家鄉(xiāng)的變化”主題征文活動。句式結(jié)構(gòu)以簡單句為主，敘述清晰、簡潔。語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫。學(xué)生們可以從自身的經(jīng)歷和體會出發(fā)，選取生活中常見的場景進(jìn)行介紹。 I had a talk with my parents and told them I had done my best. Finally, they understood me. In this way, I feel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies.請根據(jù)以下要求寫一份發(fā)言稿，內(nèi)容包括：1. 普遍存在的壓