【正文】 修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。構(gòu)思提綱。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如get good results, spend+時(shí)間+on sth, be strict with, however, care for, as well, once upon a time, help sb do, cheer up, be ready to, tell sb to do, try one’s best to do, be full of以及it is adj to do sth等，增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。 （3）. 詞數(shù)90個(gè)左右，郵件開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。（舉例說明，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮2—3句）…… （3）. 老師很樂意幫助你們。10．你是一位九年級(jí)的學(xué)生李明，你用英語(yǔ)寫一封郵件給你的筆友Amy，感謝她對(duì)你關(guān)心，并告訴她目前你在全力以赴為中考而學(xué)習(xí)，并與她交流一下目前的學(xué)習(xí)和生活情況。beeasily．Inhavethis文章首先說明不理解掃雪機(jī)式父母的原因，接下來說明自己的觀點(diǎn)，并闡述自己觀點(diǎn)的原因。s this case,they think children have a successful life ,Children have no freedom to do is the worst thing in their life.In my opinion,parents shouldn39。短文應(yīng)包括所選觀點(diǎn)中的要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。請(qǐng)從下表的兩種觀點(diǎn)中選擇一種觀點(diǎn)，并結(jié)合此觀點(diǎn)闡述自己的看法，用英文寫一篇短文投稿。高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：Firstly；Secondly；Finally；a good way to do sth；broaden our knowledge and horizon。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你寫一封倡議書，向全體同學(xué)發(fā)出號(hào)召。 efforts, our parents39。7．書面表達(dá)假設(shè)你將代表你校2009屆畢業(yè)生在學(xué)校畢業(yè)典禮上發(fā)言，請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫一篇發(fā)言稿，發(fā)言稿的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：回顧美麗的校園、生動(dòng)有趣的教學(xué)、三年來的收獲；感謝老師的培養(yǎng)、父母的支持、同學(xué)的幫助；祝愿（考生自擬，至少兩點(diǎn)）。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知本文會(huì)使用到一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用。6．寫作81. 春天，許多人都喜歡參加各種戶外活動(dòng)。s still important to remember the past/It tells that we should cherish the present ，豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。5．書面表達(dá)根據(jù)下列表格的提示，寫一篇題為Changes in Our Hometown的英語(yǔ)短文．（80詞左右）文章內(nèi)容必須包含所給的所有信息．開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：過去現(xiàn)在1舊房1高樓2河水骯臟2河水清澈（clean and clear）．3步行、騎自行車上班3乘公交車、小汽車上班4道路狹窄（narrow）．4街道寬闊（wide），干凈整潔5居住條件（living Learn to SmileI remember a song by Westlife, the first sentence of it is “Just a smile and the rain is gone.” Do you like smiling? I think you should learn to smile ._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Learn to SmileI remember a song by Westlife, the first sentence of it is “Just a smile and the rain is gone.”Do you like smiling? I think you should learn to smile .First, learn to smile at yourself when something unpleasant happens in your life. If you fail an exam or you are misunderstood by your friends, don’t be sad. Just smile at yourself . Smiling at yourself brings back your confidence . Sometimes the one who beats you is not others, but yourself. And smile can also keep you healthy. Second, learn to smile at others. It will make you municate better with people. Smiling at others makes yourself happy as well. In a word, smile is a kind of language belonging to everyone. It passes love and friendship and helps shorten the distance between you and other people. Living with a smile ,every day will be shiny.【解析】這是一篇表格式的作文，要點(diǎn)是一表格的形式出現(xiàn)，首先要研究表格，找出需要表達(dá)的要點(diǎn)，然后加以整合，也可以適當(dāng)增加使意思更連貫，但要點(diǎn)一定要全，不能漏掉。學(xué)會(huì)對(duì)他人微笑便于與他人之間的交流。4．Life is just like a mirror, you smile at it, and it smiles at you, too. 請(qǐng)你以“Learn to Smile”為題，根據(jù)下表所列的要點(diǎn)寫一篇100詞左右的文章（文章開頭已給出）。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。3．書面表達(dá)李華所在的國(guó)際學(xué)校正在開展“My Favourite Traditional Festival”交流活動(dòng)，假定你是李華，請(qǐng)你向來自不同國(guó)家的同學(xué)介紹中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日——端午節(jié)，內(nèi)容包括：1. 今年慶祝時(shí)間（6月18日）2. 節(jié)日由來：紀(jì)念（be in memory of）屈原3. 吃粽子，賽龍舟，掛菖蒲和艾草（calamus and Ay Tsao）……4. 歡迎大家一起體驗(yàn)這個(gè)傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日注意：1. 詞數(shù)80~100；，以使行文連貫；；，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。100 詞左右。寫作時(shí)，考生要緊密貼合表格中的三個(gè)要點(diǎn)：首先，闡述共享單車的優(yōu)點(diǎn)；其次，列舉共享單車帶來的問