【正文】 oo many students at school, and our hallways are too narrow. So don’t crowd with each other especially when we go upstairs or downstairs. Or there may be an accident. Besides, we should be friendly and get on well with others, don’t quarrel or even fight. Last but not least , We should be careful to eat healthy food and keep away from junk food, which is harmful to our health.In a word, it39。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要求寫(xiě)一份發(fā)言稿，內(nèi)容包括：1. 普遍存在的壓力：同學(xué)關(guān)系；考試2. 我過(guò)去的壓力：父母的期望；學(xué)習(xí)3. 我成功緩解壓力的辦法及效果；……要求：1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和校名；2. 詞數(shù)80左右，短文的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。學(xué)生們可以從自身的經(jīng)歷和體會(huì)出發(fā)，選取生活中常見(jiàn)的場(chǎng)景進(jìn)行介紹。句式結(jié)構(gòu)以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，敘述清晰、簡(jiǎn)潔。......（適當(dāng)發(fā)揮一至兩點(diǎn)）現(xiàn)在環(huán)境：政府采取措施來(lái)改善污染，城市變得越來(lái)越整潔。審題可知，作文的基本框架和大概內(nèi)容都有了，需要注意的是在描寫(xiě)過(guò)去的時(shí)候，需要適當(dāng)發(fā)揮一到兩點(diǎn)；還有對(duì)將來(lái)的希望也需要學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮。最后對(duì)家鄉(xiāng)的未來(lái)表達(dá)了自己的愿望。參考詞匯：梅西 MessiDear classmates,I’m very excited to hear that China will build 20,000 footballthemed schools by 2020. Thank you for your attention.【答案】Dear classmates，I’m very excited to hear that China will build 20，000 footballthemed schools by 2020．Football has a very long history．It is liked by people all over the world．The World Cup takes place every four years．Playing football has lots of advantages．First，both boys and girls can take part in it．Second，it helps develop team spirit．What’s more，playing football is good for our health．I’m a football fan．Messi is my hero．He has a gift for playing football．My dream is to bee a famous football player like Messi．I hope China will hold the World Cup some day．Thank you for your attention．【解析】【詳解】試題分析：本題要求按提綱的提示，介紹足球運(yùn)動(dòng)并談?wù)勛约旱膲?mèng)想。請(qǐng)你在網(wǎng)上給What would you do?本期節(jié)目留言，內(nèi)容包括：1. 你對(duì)節(jié)目中挺身而出的顧客的看法；2. 說(shuō)說(shuō)你幫助別人或別人幫助你的一件事例；3. 呼吁大家互幫互助，彼此感恩，讓社會(huì)充滿正能量?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。2. 所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容必須包括表格中所有的信息，并作適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮?！究键c(diǎn)定位】 考查提綱類作文。3說(shuō)一說(shuō)網(wǎng)上購(gòu)書(shū)有什么好處。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如bought sth for sb, be grateful to, be going to do, share sth with sb, be fond of, as far as I am concerned, on the one hand...on the other hand, from to以及we had a reading party,which was held on Friday in our reading room中which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句。初寫(xiě)短文?！癏ow can a teenager have a successful life?”的討論，為此你采訪了一些同學(xué)（結(jié)果見(jiàn)下表）。考點(diǎn)：材料作文。因?yàn)槭菙⑹鐾瑢W(xué)的現(xiàn)在的觀點(diǎn)，所以句子應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，敘述同學(xué)的觀點(diǎn)用第三人稱，敘述自己的觀點(diǎn)用第一人稱。修改潤(rùn)色。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。4至少80詞。寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：1表達(dá)收到圖書(shū)后的喜悅與感激之情。要包含表格中所有的信息，并作適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫(xiě)作材料。In the program, a customer stood up when a blind woman was cheated badly in a cake shop. _______【答案】In the program, a customer stood up when a blind woman was cheated badly in a cake shop. I really admire her because she was brave enough to help the woman in need.The other day I saw a little girl crying at a street corner on my way home. I tried my best to make her stop crying. When I knew she was lost, I helped her make a call to her dad and stayed with her until he arrived. I found it pleasant to give others a hand.In my opinion, we are supposed to help each other and be thankful for others’ help. I strongly believe helping others will fill our society with positive energy. As the saying goes, “The rose’s in her hand, the flavor in mine.”（113w）【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，描述對(duì)節(jié)目中挺身而出的顧客的看法、發(fā)生在你身上正能量的事件以及鼓勵(lì)大家相互幫助，并讓世界充滿正能量。寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：本文語(yǔ)言精煉，像第二自然段的Football has a very long history. It is liked by people all over the world. The World Cup takes place every four