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”為題的報告,談?wù)勀愕淖龇?,與同學(xué)分享經(jīng)驗。題目中只給出了大概的提綱,其中具體的內(nèi)容應(yīng)由學(xué)生們自己發(fā)揮想象力來補充,并用正確的英語表達出來。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱,文章主要使用了一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時,謂語動詞形式準(zhǔn)確。污染嚴(yán)重,垃圾遍地。題目中用表格的形式,給我們對比的家鄉(xiāng)的過去和現(xiàn)在,我們應(yīng)用正確的英語將這些內(nèi)容表達出來,并對將來提出兩點希望。然后是家鄉(xiāng)現(xiàn)在的樣子,這里主要以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)為主。短文的開頭已為你寫好,不計入總詞數(shù);,不要逐詞翻譯,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使短文連貫、通順;、校名等相關(guān)信息。生活中,我們需要他人的幫助,也要學(xué)會幫助他人。增強邏輯關(guān)系,增加上下文意思連貫,用詞準(zhǔn)確,句子通順,行文連貫。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒,就可以動筆寫作了,在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。你的煩惱你的做法個頭不高,相貌平常不必在意,相信自己父母不理解,朋友少學(xué)會溝通,友善待人學(xué)習(xí)壓力大,課外活動少……(自主發(fā)揮,至少兩點)要求:1. 詞數(shù)100左右,開頭及結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。文中的不定式作賓補、作定語、作賓語用得準(zhǔn)確恰當(dāng);and連接的并列句、并列謂語等等都使短文顯得簡捷生動。(3)同學(xué)們將在下個月網(wǎng)購其他的英文書。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài),上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯,可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的,而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮,因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀觥⒚鞔_的關(guān)鍵。10.書面表達。用了賓語從句,如:Most students believe it’s necessary to study hard. What’s more, they think each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for ,如:Also, we must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it’s important to a successful ,也是提分的經(jīng)典句子。注意不要遺漏要點,所寫的句子應(yīng)該符合英語語法,不能是漢語式的句子,要使用一些高級詞匯及句式。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。構(gòu)思提綱。Dear Angel,How are you doing? Best wishes!Yours,Cathy【答案】Dear Angel,How are you doing? I’m writing to tell you that we received the books that you bought for us. We are grateful to you and all of us are very happy。2介紹活動的情況:(l)上周五,俱樂部成員們一起讀英文書。短文用第一人稱形式,一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。8.中學(xué)生在成長過程中經(jīng)常會碰到一些煩惱。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的,而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮,因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài),上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯,可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。7.書面表達(本題15分)根據(jù)要求完成短文寫作,請將作文寫在答題卡指定的位置上。請你以足球迷的身份,根據(jù)下列表格中的要點提示,用英語向同學(xué)們介紹足球這項運動并談?wù)勛约旱膲粝??!军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,短文作者按照題目要求,介紹了自己的家鄉(xiāng)這些年來的變化。將來希望……(兩點)要求:1. 短文的開頭已為你寫好,不計入總詞數(shù);2. 短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點,并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使短文連貫通順;3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。請根據(jù)下表提示,以“The Changes in My Hometown”為題,用英語寫一篇100詞左右的短文,不必逐字逐句翻譯。【點睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,短文作者根據(jù)題目要求,談了自己對同學(xué)們普遍感到壓力大這種現(xiàn)象的看法,并分享了自己的經(jīng)歷。Less pressure makes better life. Thank you.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們針對現(xiàn)在同學(xué)們普遍感到壓力大這種現(xiàn)象,以Less Pressure Makes Life Better為題,談?wù)勛约旱目捶?,和同學(xué)們分享一下自己的經(jīng)驗。上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。提示:1. 體育鍛煉2. 上下樓梯3. 交朋結(jié)友4. 食品衛(wèi)生要求: 1. 語句通順,表達準(zhǔn)確,內(nèi)容連貫;2.短文可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;但要包含以上要點。m going to graduate from junior high school. As your senior, I have some suggestions to the young.As old saying goes, all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. To begin with, you should arrange both your study and life properly.Moreover, you should get along well with others. To have more friends, not enemies.Last but not least, you could be active in school team work. Ability is as important as your study, you can also enjoy your colorful school life as wellI hope these suggestions could make your junior schoollife more wonderful.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語,為文章增色不少,如be going to,graduate from,to begin with,both…and,get along well with others,be active in,as important as,as well等。【點睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語言簡練。提示:(校園干凈而美麗,活動非富多彩);老師(傳授知識,教會做人,經(jīng)常鼓勵);同學(xué)(和睦相處,互相學(xué)習(xí),共同進步)。 。2.“揚帆起航新學(xué)期,學(xué)姐學(xué)長提建議”。【點睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。Safety has bee the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is especially important to us _____________________________________________【答案】Safety has bee the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is especially important to us students. First, we should take care not to get ourselves injured while we are having sports. Second, There are t