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【正文】 presents and that her daughter would send her a present. Looking up at the sky, he saw a bird flying round the tree. ? 九 . 修飾語錯(cuò)誤 ? The old woman was so disappointed after reading the letter with trembling fingers that she tore it into bits. ? 十 . 中國(guó)式英語 ? 1. 現(xiàn)在人們的生活離不開塑料。 ? The old woman was so disappointed after reading the letter that she tore it into bits with trembling fingers. Now people’s life can’t leave plastics away. 實(shí)際意思是人們?cè)谏钪须x不開塑料。應(yīng)改為： Now people cannot do without plastics in their lives. Plastics are indispensable to people’s lives. ? 2. 他說他于 1993年在上海結(jié)的婚。 ? 3. 計(jì)算機(jī)正在改變?nèi)藗兊纳詈凸ぷ鞣绞健? He said he married in 1993 in Shanghai. He said he got married in Shanghai in 1993. Computers are changing people’s live way and work way. 英漢詞序不同，英語定語可后置，而漢語一般是把定語 放在被限定詞的前面。應(yīng)改為： Computers are changing the way people live and work. Computers are changing people’s ways of life and work. ? 4. 他回來已有兩個(gè)星期了，但我一直沒空去看望他。 He has e back / returned for two weeks. But I have not time to see him. 英漢有些動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)與時(shí)間關(guān)系表示不同。此處 “ e back / returned ”為瞬間動(dòng)作，不能帶 “ for +時(shí)間段 ” 短語。應(yīng)改為： He has been back for two weeks. But I have no time to see him / pay him a visit. 5. 外面刮起了大風(fēng)。 The outside blew the wind. 完全對(duì)應(yīng)中文進(jìn)行的逐詞翻譯。應(yīng)改為： The wind had risen (風(fēng)力增強(qiáng) ) outside. 6. 若一起風(fēng)，人在外面眼睛都睜不開。 If wind blows, the eyes can not open outside. 對(duì)應(yīng)中文進(jìn)行的逐詞翻譯。應(yīng)改為： When winds blow, you can hardly open your eyes outside. ? 十一 . 綜合錯(cuò)誤 ? ? 1. The world’s population is being expanded. And the environment is crowded. 首先，此句存在 選詞不當(dāng) 的問題。 expand 意為“使膨脹、 擴(kuò)展、延伸” ,不與 population搭配； environment 也不 與 crowded 搭配。另外， 因不會(huì)使用因果關(guān)系結(jié)構(gòu)， 語言不夠簡(jiǎn)練 。應(yīng)改為： The world population is rising so quickly that the world is being more and more crowed. ? 2. Advertisements are very popular in this days. You can see it everywhere. Advertisements benefit the producers very much. They can let more people know of their products by advertisements. They can earn more money. 短短幾句話存在 限定詞誤用 、 介詞搭配不當(dāng) 、 指代不一致 、 結(jié)構(gòu)錯(cuò)誤 ，同時(shí)， 句式簡(jiǎn)單，句子缺乏多樣化 。應(yīng)改為： Nowadays, advertisements are so popular that you can see them everywhere. Advertisements benefit the producers so much that they can earn more money by making more people know about their products through advertising. ? 3. Every person should go to work when they grow up. There are two reasons why people work. The first reason is that jobs and work provide us the material in life. We get salary from work, then we can buy what we want with the money. In this way we can make a living. 這幾個(gè)句子有 指代不一致 、 語言不夠簡(jiǎn)練 等問題，還可清楚 地看出寫作人 用漢語思維 的痕跡。應(yīng)改為： People should go to work when they grow up. There are two reasons why people work. The first （ reason） is that （ jobs and ） work provides us the material in life. We get salary from work, and then we can buy what we want with the money, so we can make a living.
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