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to manage efficiently and retrieve quickly the image information has beening the research hot pot at home and oversea. This paper analyse the development of the CBIE (contentbased image retrieval) technology at present. After having studyed and mastered the research achievement, we launch our research on …. 一些例子( 10) Studied(reviewed) 加 s X ? Adj. 25 評論 ? 盡量少用第一人稱 ? 一般都用現在時 ?用過去時或現在完成時就要有時間副詞 26 Fasle sharing is one of the most important factors impacting the performance of DSM(distributed shared memory) system, singlewriter approach is simple, but it cannot avaid the pingpong effect of the data page thrashing, while multiplewriter appraoch is effective for false sharing but the cost is high. 一些例子( 11) the . But s . W . The on. False? 27 Evaluation results show that for some applications such as SOR, LU, FFT, and IS, LMW provides a significant reduction in execution time (11%, 16%, 33%, and 46%) pared with the traditional multiplewriter approach on the platform. 一些例子( 12) 主語? respectively? 縮寫? 28 評論 ? 縮寫決不能亂用。 29 結論 ? 多看多學別抄 ? 盡量用簡單句 ?每一個簡單句必須有一個,而且只有一個謂語動詞。 ? 論文結論要體現新東西、實驗結果或新思路。 ? 可讀性