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【正文】 bears, dogs and etc. 例 5. To save money. He had instant noodles every day. ? To save money, he had instant noodles every day. 例 6. At that time, a car from north to west. ? At that time, a car was turning from north to west. （ 二 ） 謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞與非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞不分 謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞以具體的時(shí)態(tài) 、 人稱 、 數(shù)出現(xiàn) ， 在句中做謂語(yǔ) 。 如： He works as a doctor in the town hospital. 其中謂語(yǔ)works 呈現(xiàn)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí) 、 第三人稱 、 單數(shù) 。 非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞以不定式 、 ing形式 、 ed形式出現(xiàn) （ to do, doing, done） , 在句中作 “ 非謂語(yǔ) ” ,即除謂語(yǔ)以外的其他句子成分 ， 如：主語(yǔ) 、 表語(yǔ) 、 賓語(yǔ) 、 定語(yǔ) 、 狀語(yǔ) 、 補(bǔ)語(yǔ) 。 主語(yǔ)： 1. Being a president is not easy. 當(dāng)總統(tǒng)不容易 。 2. It is not easy to be a good parent. 當(dāng)好父母不容易 。 表語(yǔ) ： My plan is to go to college in Beijing, get a job there, and then settle down. 我的計(jì)劃是在北京上大學(xué) 、 在那兒找份工作 、 然后安頓下來(lái) 。 賓語(yǔ)： I love being a mother and wife. 我喜歡為人妻母 。 定語(yǔ)： United States is a developed country. It is also a country developed in tourism. 美國(guó)是一個(gè)發(fā)達(dá)國(guó)家也是旅游業(yè)發(fā)達(dá)的國(guó)家 。 2. He’s got an opportunity to study abroad. 他有了一次出國(guó)的機(jī)會(huì) 。 狀語(yǔ)： of plastic, the chair won’t last long. 2. The war lasted 8 years, killing thousands and thousands of people. 3. Being a student, we should study hard. eat to live, not live to eat. 補(bǔ)語(yǔ)： There is something wrong with the TV set. I must have it fixed soon. 電視壞了 ， 我得找人修理 。 This magazine really helps me to understand the women’s world. 這本雜志真正幫助我了解了女性世界 。 改錯(cuò)句： 例 1. We saw a river blocked our way. ?We saw a river blocking our way. 例 2. I saw an old man going out of City Park and was about to cross Park Road. ? I saw an old man going out of City Park and he was about to cross Park Road. 例 , a yellow car turned right from 3rd Street, arrived at Park Road. ? Suddenly, a yellow car turned right from 3rd Street to Park Road. 例 4. She drove the car leave the street. ? She drove the car leaving the street. / She left the street in the car. 例 5. She is always warning me, telling me don’t do this, don’t do that. ?She is always warning me, telling me not to do this or that. 例 6. We need talented young people make China strong. ?We need talented young people to make China strong. 例 7. I have wide interests such as reading novels, watching films, play tennis and so on. ? I have wide interests such as reading novels, watching films, playing tennis and so on. 例 we master the advanced knowledge and technology can we serve our country more efficiently. ? Only when we master the advanced knowledge and technology can we serve our country more efficiently. 例 9. Money can’t instead of everything in our life. ? Money can’t replace everything in our life. 例 10. I know that there are many students still live in poverty, and they wanted to go to school very much. ?I know that there are many students still living / who still lives in poverty, and they wanted to go to school very much. ?I know that many students still live in poverty, and they wanted to go to school very much. （ 三 ） 詞的用法與所用句型不配套 例 1. An Englishman teaches our English. ?An Englishman teaches us English. 注意： teach, give, pass, show, buy, sing, send, borrow, lend等有時(shí)跟一個(gè)賓語(yǔ) 、 有時(shí)須跟雙賓語(yǔ) 。 例 2. Just like bees produce honey teachers produce knowledge. ?Just as bees produce honey teachers produce knowledge. 注意： like 不是連詞 ， 不能引導(dǎo)主謂結(jié)構(gòu) 。 例 3. Because in our city there are a lot of factories and many vehicles, so the atmosphere is very dirty. ?Because in our city there are a lot of factories and many vehicles, the atmosphere is very dirty. ?In our city there are a lot of factories and many vehicles, so the atmosphere is very dirty. 注意： Because引導(dǎo)從句 ， 連接主從結(jié)構(gòu) ， 表示主從關(guān)系；而 so連接并列結(jié)構(gòu) , 表示并列關(guān)系 ， 所以不能同時(shí)出現(xiàn)在一個(gè)句子里 ， 和 although與 but的關(guān)系一樣 。 例 hope some chance to improve myself. ?I hope for some chance to improve myself. 注意：英語(yǔ)中只有 hope +賓語(yǔ)從句 或 hope for sth， 而沒(méi)有 hope sth的結(jié)構(gòu) 。 例 5. We changed selfish and hardhearted. ?We became / turned selfish and hardhearted. 注意： change 不是系動(dòng)詞 ， 不能直接跟形容詞 。 例 6. They praised me a sensible girl. ?They praised me and said I as a sensible girl. 注意： praise不能帶賓語(yǔ)補(bǔ)語(yǔ) 。 例 7. He decided to put his life to serve the people. ?He decided to devote his life to serve the people. 注意：英語(yǔ)中沒(méi)有 put one’s life to do sth的結(jié)構(gòu) 。 例 8. If we want to construct our motherland to be a developed country, we also need money. ?If we want to make our motherland a developed country, we also need money. 注意：英語(yǔ)中沒(méi)有 construct sth to be +形容詞的結(jié)構(gòu) 。 例 9. I will furnish it to be beautiful. ?I will furnish it and make it beautiful. 注意：英語(yǔ)中沒(méi)有 furnish something to be + 形容詞結(jié)構(gòu) 。 例 10. Studying history needs that you go over it every day. ?Studying history, you need to go over it every day. 注意： need不能跟 that從句 。 （ 四 ） 其他句子結(jié)構(gòu)錯(cuò)誤 例 1. We climbed a mountain, then swam across a river. ? We climbed a mountain, and then swam across a river. 例 2. We put our bags on a wooden plate, pushed it on. ? We put our bags on a wooden board and pushed them cross the river. 例 3. Tired as we were, but we were happy. ? Tired as we were, we were happy. 例 4. We swim in the river, and put our bags on a wood so that pushed it. ? We put our bags on a piece of wood so that we could push it as we swam cross the river. 例 5. As an airhostess can often stay in the sky. ? An airhostess can often stay in the sky. ? As an airhostess, she can often stay in the sky. 例 are many meaningful things that we can’t buy them with money. ?There are many meaningful things that we can’t buy with money. （ 五 ） 其他結(jié)構(gòu)方面的問(wèn)題 例 1. We swim in the river, and put our bags on a wood so that pushed it. ?We put our bags on a piece of wood so that we could push it as we swam cross the river.