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,to repay the society. ? our best , keep the environment clean. ? 第三步:擴(kuò)展成句 ? students don’t respect their teachers or parents. ? don’t take their studies seriously and cheat in exams. ? throw wastes everywhere and pollute the environment . ? is honorable to obey the law and rules , care much about our class and study hard. ? is shameful to break school rules, to be selfish or to make little effort to achieve success. ? should respect others and think more of them than of ourselves. ? should work hard and make much more progress to repay the society. ? should try our best to keep the environment clean. ? 第四步:連句成篇 ? 搜索有關(guān)過(guò)渡句及過(guò)渡詞匯 ? To be frank , Still ,on the one hand, on the other hand ? It is really a pity to see all this in our school. ? To improve the present situation, what shall we do in future? ? Firstly, Secondly, In addition, ? 潤(rùn)飾某些句子 ,加上過(guò)渡詞或過(guò)渡句組合成篇 ? To be frank, Some students don’t respect their teachers or parents. Some don’t take their studies seriously and cheat in exams. Still some throw wastes everywhere and pollute the environment . ? It is really a pity to see all this in our the one hand, we think it is honorable to obey the law and rules , care much about our class and study the other hand, it is shameful to break school rules, to be selfish or to make little effort to achieve success. ? To improve the present situation, what shall we do in future? Firstly, we should respect others and think more of them than of , we should work hard and make much more progress to repay the addition, we should try our best to keep the environment clean. ? 參考答案 ? Recently we have held a class meeting to discuss what is considered to be honorable behavior and what is shameful. To be frank , some students don’t respect their teachers or parents. Some don’t take their studies seriously and cheat in exams. Still some litter around, making the school dirty. ? It is really a pity to see all this in our school. We think it honorable to obey the law and rules and care much about our class. It is also worthy of praise to study hard. On the hand, it is shameful to break school rules, to be selfish or to make little effort to achieve success. ? To improve the present situation, what shall we do in future? Firstly, set ourselves a goal and work hard to achieve our ambitions. Secondly, respect others and think more of them than of ourselves. In addition, we should try hard to keep the environment clean. ?以圖畫形式提供要點(diǎn)的書面表達(dá) ? 看圖進(jìn)行書面表達(dá)的基本要求是:認(rèn)真審圖,確立主題,提煉要點(diǎn),展開聯(lián)想,變點(diǎn)為句,連句成篇。 要達(dá)到這些要求,我們就必須認(rèn)真審圖,善于利用圖中人物間的關(guān)系、人物的對(duì)話、人物的活動(dòng)及所處場(chǎng)所,以及圖(表)中的文字說(shuō)明和標(biāo)識(shí)來(lái)提煉要點(diǎn);要圍繞主題展開合理的想象,切忌游離于主題展開不著邊際的聯(lián)想。 ? 下列四幅圖描述了李華一家某一天的經(jīng)歷。請(qǐng)根據(jù)畫面及圖中的有關(guān)提示,用第三人稱的口吻寫一篇 120字左右的短文。 ? 注意:可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),并展開合理的想象,使故事完整連貫。 ? 認(rèn)真看圖,確立主題 ? 結(jié)合文字和圖畫,確立所要表達(dá)的主題是什么。 ? 根據(jù)“四幅圖描述了李華一家某一天的經(jīng)歷”一段文字提示 ,結(jié)合第一幅圖中的日歷上所表示的時(shí)間( 3月 8日),我們可以確立本篇書面表達(dá)的主題是:李華要做些家務(wù)事來(lái)為他的媽媽慶?!?”婦女節(jié) ? 圍繞主題,提煉要點(diǎn) ? 圍繞確立的主題,仔細(xì)看圖,初步列出每幅圖的要點(diǎn)。 ? 第一幅圖: 李華把他的主意告訴父親 ? 第二幅圖: 李華掃地、父親洗衣服 ? 第三幅圖: 李華和父親下廚房做菜 ? 第四幅圖: 餐桌上有花瓶、飲料、魚、肉等等 ? 合理想象,補(bǔ)出要點(diǎn) ? 將四幅圖連起來(lái)并結(jié)合考慮每幅圖中的各個(gè)細(xì)節(jié)進(jìn)行想象,將隱藏的要點(diǎn)補(bǔ)出來(lái) ,使故事連貫。 ? 第一幅圖: 李華為什么要把他的主意告訴父親: 求得父親的幫助或配合 ? 第二幅圖: 李華和父親為什么要選擇做家務(wù): 這些家務(wù)平時(shí)都是由母親做的 ? 第三幅圖: 可以想象他們做了除圖畫中表現(xiàn)出的 :fish, pork外,還可能做了其它菜。比如: chicken, soup and other delicious dishes. ? 第四幅圖: 這幅圖中沒(méi)有一個(gè)人出現(xiàn),連母親的影子也沒(méi)有。為什么,留給考生進(jìn)行合理的想象: 李華和父親是不是藏起來(lái)了?其目的是什么: 可能是等母親回家時(shí)以給她一個(gè)驚喜 。 ? 確定時(shí)態(tài),譯出要點(diǎn) ? 確定表達(dá)時(shí)所用的正確時(shí)態(tài),將圍繞主題初選出的要點(diǎn)和經(jīng)過(guò)合理想象補(bǔ)出的要點(diǎn)翻譯出來(lái)。 ? 本篇敘述的是李華一家過(guò)去某一天(“ ”婦女節(jié))所發(fā)生的事,應(yīng)該用過(guò)去時(shí)來(lái)進(jìn)行表達(dá)。 ? 第一幅圖: On March the eighth,Women’s Day, Li Hua had a good idea and told his father that he was going to do something to celebrate asked his father to help him. ? 第二幅圖: They decided to do some housework,which was always done by his Hua cleaned the house father did some washing. ? 第三幅圖: They made a good meal,cooking fish,pork,chicken,soup and some other delicious dishes. ? 第四幅圖: Li Hua laid the table and set a vase full of flowers in the middle of the hid themselves behind the door,waiting for wanted to give her a happy his mother came back and saw delicious dishes and drinks on the table,she felt very curious and happy. ? 連句成篇,過(guò)渡自然 ? 對(duì)譯出的要點(diǎn)通過(guò)合理的組合,加上必要的連接詞或詞語(yǔ)以及照顧到文章的首尾呼應(yīng), ? 再加上必要的結(jié)束語(yǔ)。 ? It was March the eighth that day,Women’s Hua had a good idea and told his father that he was going to do something to celebrate asked his father to help they decided to do some housework,which was always done by his Hua cleaned the house pletely while his father did some they made a good meal,cooking fish,pork,chicken,soup and some other delicious dishes. Li Hua laid the table and set a vase full of flowers in the middle of the that they hid themselves behind the door,waiting for Mother so as to give her a happy his mother came back and saw delicious dishes and drinks on the table,she felt very curious and family had a pleasant festival. ? ? 圖表式書面表達(dá)分三步 ? 第一步:開門見(jiàn)山點(diǎn)明圖表所反映的主題。 ? 常用的詞匯有: table,chart,figure,graph,describe,tell,show等等。 ? 第二步:觀察數(shù)據(jù)間變化及總趨勢(shì),并說(shuō)明原因或由此產(chǎn)生的結(jié)果 /后果等。 ? 在描寫數(shù)據(jù)間變化及總趨勢(shì)特征時(shí),可采用分類式對(duì)比以表明主題,并闡述必要的理由,要注意表述層次的清楚。 ? 常用的詞匯有:rise,drop,reduce,increase,decrease,fall,while,but,on the contrary, ? however, pare…to, as…as, the same as, similar to,different from,difference between,among,more than,less than等等。 ? 第三步:歸納總結(jié)或談?wù)勛约旱目捶?。有時(shí)這一步也可以不要,看具體情況而定。 ? 常用的詞匯有: in a word,in short,generally speaking,It’s claear from the chart ? that…,We can draw the conclusion that…,We can learn…,We can know… ? 請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的圖表以及中文提示所提供的信息,寫一篇報(bào)道,簡(jiǎn)要描述我國(guó)近年私人轎車的增長(zhǎng)情況以及可能會(huì)帶來(lái)的影響: ? ●出行方便快捷 ●有助于汽車工業(yè)發(fā)展 ●污染空氣 ●交通事故增多 ? 注意:詞數(shù) 100左右。 ? ? 第一步:點(diǎn)明主題 ? In recent years the number of private cars has been increasing rapidly in our