啟明中學(xué)徐明芳-資料下載頁
2025-07-18 15:57本頁面
【正文】 to has a great influence on our life. ① No one can live withhout in every people’s eyes water isn’t ’s only a mon there are many unhealthy tendencise in our life. ? Some people don’t screw taps up。some are used to taking a shower for a long time,and others throw bottles with much water. ② But I can’t stand these kinds of wasting things. In fact ,it’s bad for us to have a happy life, And I have two suggestions for this problerm. ③ On the one hand,we must cultivate the saving counseiousness,and on the other hand we should try to recycle waste water. ? I believe we could solve the water problem as long as we obey these two suggestions. ? 本文是一篇優(yōu)秀的中考臨場作文，具體表現(xiàn)在：考生在理解題目的要求上能夠準(zhǔn)確、細(xì)致；在組織材料上能夠做到具體全面；在語言表達(dá)上能夠做到清晰、規(guī)范、嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)、多變。特別是一些能體現(xiàn)文章特色的短語，如 have a great influence on和 cultivate the saving consciousness,以及一些鏗鏘有力的排比句，提升了文章的檔次。另外，作者對水資源短缺的原因分析的有理有據(jù)，提出的建議得當(dāng)，內(nèi)容有獨(dú)特個(gè)性之美，引人深思。最后一句表面作者決心及態(tài)度，水到渠成。全文如行云流水，值得廣大中學(xué)生借鑒。 滿分揭秘： 標(biāo)準(zhǔn)范文 ? Water is very important to us and a must for all living things. ? Water is the fundamental to all living beings can’t live without water. ? But people often fet to turn off the taps after washing hands. Some people spend too much time having a some people throw away bottles without drinking the water off . ? In order to save water,I have some ,we should turn off the tap after washing , we should make good use of every drop of water is saving ’s do all we can do to save water.
規(guī)章制度相關(guān)推薦
鄂ICP備17016276號-1