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【正文】 munity? Have you ever organized a group of students to serve meals at a homeless shelter? Were you a member of a sports team where you led and motivated your teammates? These can all be great examples of leadership skills. 7. Work or volunteer experiences. Do you have any work or volunteer experience related to the type of career you want to pursue? What did these experiences teach you about yourself? Did the experiences lead to classes or other activities that helped you refine your career choice? Perhaps you helped a teacher when he or she organized a series of evening programs for lowine parents. This experience showed you that you enjoy teaching and interacting with people from diverse cultures. Your current interest in counseling, with an emphasis in reaching undeserved populations, reflects your involvement with this program. Or perhaps you pleted a science fair project on AIDS and this motivated you to volunteer with an AIDS outreach group at your local munity clinic. From this work, you learned about the high rates of HIV infection among homeless youth. You now hope to take college classes on infectious diseases and social problems to help you decide if you are interested in a career in social work. 8. Vision. Do you have a sense of what you抎 like to do in the future? What is your vision regarding your further academic training or your career goal? Explaining your goals in your essay can be a way for you to convince an admissions mittee why their school is the right place for you. For example, if you want to major in science and eventually bee a doctor, you should mention that you are interested in a college that has a strong science department and munity clinical opportunities. Knowing what a school has to offer can be a way to show that you are a serious candidate who has done your homework. Your vision may be relatively general, which is fine. For example, you may know that you want to bee a doctor, but it is unlikely that you would know your specialty. Just remember to explain how past experiences influenced your interests and goals. 9. Influential people. 在談及個(gè)人目標(biāo)時(shí)，談?wù)剬?duì)你有影響的When you write about your career goals, you might want to mention a pivotal person or experience that influenced your interest in higher education or a particular career. Perhaps you worked at a local pharmacy and the pharmacist learned that you will be the first in your family to attend college. He or she became your mentor and advised you about classes to take and how to apply for local scholarships. A person who was influential in your goals for higher education does not necessarily have to be someone who is close to you or with whom you had a lot of contact. For example, when I was young, I helped my dad at his night job as a janitor. We cleaned a county building where there were law offices. One night a judge, whose desk I always polished, took me aside and talked to me about higher education. The influence from a man of his stature was significant. He made me realize that the world of ideas was accessible to me and motivated me to take college preparatory classes while in high school. 10. Interest in a specific college and your potential contributions. Finally, you may want to conclude your essay with a statement or two that reflect your knowledge of the college where you are applying, and potential contributions you may make to the college. If you selected a college because of its strong emphasis on the sciences and its volunteer opportunities with local underserved munities you might write, I am particularly interested in your school because.... and believe I will be an asset because.... This statement shows that you are familiar with the strengths of the college and explains how you might make a difference at the college if admitted. Again, you want these statements to flow from your previous thoughts. 9 /
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