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【正文】 erful birdeye(bird’seye) view of the whole village. Just phone me before you set off. There is no need for you to take anything. I’ll prepare everything for you. I am looking forward to seeing you soon. 評析： 14分 優(yōu)點 ： 內容切題，提綱要求的三個方面都寫到了，文字簡潔 流暢，連貫性較好，其文體亦是個人書信常用的口語體。 該考生語法概念清楚，句子結構正確，詞語搭配基本符 合英美人的習慣。 不足之處： 1. touring 應為 climbing. 2. Birdeye view 應為 bird’seye view. 3 第 2段第 4句和第 5句之間的連接需加一個轉折詞。如： besides,in addition, in the meantime. 分析樣卷 4 A Letter to a Schoolmate I have know you will e to Shanghai. Three years ago, you went to the England. From then, we haven’t meet with each other. I wele that you can return your country. From your letter, I have known you have a weeklong holiday. There is a great change in Shanghai. I think you must be feel suprised with what you see. So I advise you vist some place,that we often went ago. And you can visit some oldclassmates. They also mise you very much. If you don’t want to hotel, you can live in my ’d better buy a map. I’m afraid you will be at a lost. But even if you can’t find bus stop, you still can go to anywhere by taxi. I hope you will have an unfetable holiday. 分析樣卷 4 A Letter to a Schoolmate I have know you will e to Shanghai. Three years ago, you went to the England. From then, we haven’t meet with each other. I wele that you can return your country. From your letter, I have known you have a weeklong holiday. There is a great change in Shanghai. I think you must be feel suprised with what you see. So I advise you vist some place,that we often went ago. And you can visit some oldclassmates. They also mise you very much. If you don’t want to hotel, you can live in my ’d better buy a map. I’m afraid you will be at a lost. But even if you can’t find bus stop, you still can go to anywhere by taxi. I hope you will have an unfetable holiday. 評析： 5分 內容基本切題，但由于語言錯誤很多，且多為嚴重錯誤。 使得作者無法把思想表達清楚。文章的連貫性自然也很差， 只能得 5分。象這樣的考生，在寫的能力上與大綱要求還有 相當大的距離，須花大力氣迎頭趕上。
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