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【正文】 erful birdeye(bird’seye) view of the whole village. Just phone me before you set off. There is no need for you to take anything. I’ll prepare everything for you. I am looking forward to seeing you soon. 評(píng)析： 14分 優(yōu)點(diǎn) ： 內(nèi)容切題，提綱要求的三個(gè)方面都寫(xiě)到了，文字簡(jiǎn)潔 流暢，連貫性較好，其文體亦是個(gè)人書(shū)信常用的口語(yǔ)體。 該考生語(yǔ)法概念清楚，句子結(jié)構(gòu)正確，詞語(yǔ)搭配基本符 合英美人的習(xí)慣。 不足之處： 1. touring 應(yīng)為 climbing. 2. Birdeye view 應(yīng)為 bird’seye view. 3 第 2段第 4句和第 5句之間的連接需加一個(gè)轉(zhuǎn)折詞。如： besides,in addition, in the meantime. 分析樣卷 4 A Letter to a Schoolmate I have know you will e to Shanghai. Three years ago, you went to the England. From then, we haven’t meet with each other. I wele that you can return your country. From your letter, I have known you have a weeklong holiday. There is a great change in Shanghai. I think you must be feel suprised with what you see. So I advise you vist some place,that we often went ago. And you can visit some oldclassmates. They also mise you very much. If you don’t want to hotel, you can live in my ’d better buy a map. I’m afraid you will be at a lost. But even if you can’t find bus stop, you still can go to anywhere by taxi. I hope you will have an unfetable holiday. 分析樣卷 4 A Letter to a Schoolmate I have know you will e to Shanghai. Three years ago, you went to the England. From then, we haven’t meet with each other. I wele that you can return your country. From your letter, I have known you have a weeklong holiday. There is a great change in Shanghai. I think you must be feel suprised with what you see. So I advise you vist some place,that we often went ago. And you can visit some oldclassmates. They also mise you very much. If you don’t want to hotel, you can live in my ’d better buy a map. I’m afraid you will be at a lost. But even if you can’t find bus stop, you still can go to anywhere by taxi. I hope you will have an unfetable holiday. 評(píng)析： 5分 內(nèi)容基本切題，但由于語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤很多，且多為嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。 使得作者無(wú)法把思想表達(dá)清楚。文章的連貫性自然也很差， 只能得 5分。象這樣的考生，在寫(xiě)的能力上與大綱要求還有 相當(dāng)大的距離，須花大力氣迎頭趕上。
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