【正文】 用，比如：I39。m glad……，We Chinese people are……，you can…….，It39。s not necessary to do sth, I suggest……，I hope……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭告訴他不必?fù)?dān)心，接下來(lái)回答他的問(wèn)題以及建議他如何做，最后希望他在中國(guó)玩得高興。此處need to do sth, worry about, the symbol of, help with, such as, be grateful for, in addition, play a role, what’s more等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。15．（江蘇中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)假設(shè)你是第一中學(xué)的一名學(xué)生，5月21日是學(xué)校開(kāi)放日，學(xué)校邀請(qǐng)家長(zhǎng)來(lái)校聽(tīng)課參觀(guān)。你作為志愿者參與了開(kāi)放日活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你以“The School Open Day”為題，寫(xiě)一篇90詞左右的英文報(bào)道。內(nèi)容提示如下：1．家長(zhǎng)們聽(tīng)了很多堂課，高度評(píng)價(jià)老師精湛的教學(xué)技能；2．王芳老師的音樂(lè)課有趣而活躍，成功地融合了傳統(tǒng)和現(xiàn)代音樂(lè)；3．張陽(yáng)老師的歷史課把抗日戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)栩栩如生地呈現(xiàn)到課堂上，講述了八十年前中華兒女如何與日本鬼子勇敢戰(zhàn)斗；4．家長(zhǎng)們都感到……并希望……（參考詞匯：抗日戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)the AntiJapanese War）注意事項(xiàng)：1．文章須包括所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語(yǔ)句通順、意思連貫；2．第4個(gè)要點(diǎn)須用2至3句話(huà)展開(kāi)合理想象，作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3．詞數(shù)90左右．倡議書(shū)的開(kāi)頭已在答題卡上給出。不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；4．文章內(nèi)容必須寫(xiě)在答題卡指定的位置上。The School Open DayNo. 1 Middle School had a school open day on May 21st．Many parents were invited to your school．I showed them around our beautiful school and watched the raising of the national flag together．___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】The School Open DayNo. 1 Middle School had a school open day on May 21st．Many parents were invited to our school．I showed them around our beautiful school and watched the raising of the national flag together．Parents listened to many lessons．They spoke very highly of teachers39。 excellent teaching skills．The music lesson given by Wang Fang was lively and interesting．She successfully brought traditional music and modern music together．The history lesson given by Zhang Yang brought the AntiJapanese War alive in class．He told us how Chinese people fought against Japanese bravely 80 years ago．Parents all felt fantastic and were moved by the teachers39。 hard work and personal charm．They hope that they can have more chances to join in different school activities．【解析】這篇作文以學(xué)校開(kāi)放日為題，邀請(qǐng)家長(zhǎng)來(lái)校聽(tīng)課參觀(guān)，你作為志愿者參與了學(xué)校開(kāi)放日活動(dòng)。根據(jù)材料寫(xiě)一篇短文。內(nèi)容包括：1. 你帶領(lǐng)家長(zhǎng)參觀(guān)美麗的校園，并一同觀(guān)看了升國(guó)旗儀式。2. 家長(zhǎng)們聽(tīng)了很多堂課，高度評(píng)價(jià)老師精湛的教學(xué)技能。3. 王芳老師的音樂(lè)課有趣而活躍，成功地融合了傳統(tǒng)和現(xiàn)代音樂(lè)。4. 張陽(yáng)老師的歷史課把抗日戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)栩栩如生呈現(xiàn)到課堂上，講述了七十年前中華兒女如何與日本鬼子勇敢戰(zhàn)斗。5. 家長(zhǎng)們都感到……并希望……最后要點(diǎn)的內(nèi)容須用2到3句話(huà)展開(kāi)合理想象，作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫(xiě)作時(shí)，我們可以根據(jù)需要將這些信息進(jìn)行合理的整理與安排，使文章的意思銜接更自然。當(dāng)然要盡量使用一些好的句型和連詞，使文章上下文連貫自然合理。16．（全國(guó)中考模擬）三年的初中生活接近尾聲，回首過(guò)去你充滿(mǎn)依戀，展望未來(lái)你豪情滿(mǎn)懷。請(qǐng)以The happy life為題寫(xiě)一篇90詞左右的短文。要點(diǎn)如下：1. 校園生活豐富多彩，在寬敞明亮的教室里學(xué)習(xí)，老師和同學(xué)們都很友好，相處融洽，同學(xué)們互相幫助，互相學(xué)習(xí)，雖然作業(yè)多，但一起學(xué)習(xí)很快樂(lè)。課余還經(jīng)常一起打球唱歌。2. 希望將來(lái)從事一份喜歡的工作，和父母分享成功，也為社會(huì)（society）多做有意義的事情。3. 現(xiàn)在必須努力學(xué)習(xí)，使夢(mèng)想成真。 【答案】The happy lifeMy school life is rich and colourful. We have a lot of fun studying in the classroom with our lovely classmates. All my teachers and classmates are friendly and helpful. We get on well with each other. We often help each other and learn from each other. Though sometimes there is too much homework, with their help, we always finish it happily. During our free time, We play ball games and sing songs together. I wish to have a job I like and I will share my success with my parents. I also hope that I can do a lot of meaningful work for the society in the future. At present, I must study hard to make my dream e true. 【解析】英語(yǔ)作文寫(xiě)出的句子要達(dá)意，完整，語(yǔ)法正確，合乎習(xí)慣，特別是句式，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式要有根有據(jù)，選用比較有把握的詞匯，用恰當(dāng)?shù)木湫蛯?xiě)出確切反映內(nèi)容要求的句子。英語(yǔ)作文要注意人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)，注意提供的觀(guān)點(diǎn)、材料，要注意句子的完整性，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式，句子之間的銜接和過(guò)渡。英語(yǔ)作文，要忠實(shí)于材料，不必?cái)U(kuò)展，注意用好連詞，多用非謂語(yǔ)，慎用較難的句型，一定不能寫(xiě)錯(cuò)句。get on well with相處融洽；help each other and learn from each other互相幫助，互相學(xué)習(xí)；with one’s help在某人的幫助下；in the future. 在未來(lái)；e true.（夢(mèng)想）成真17．（天津中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá) 假設(shè)你叫李明，曾榮幸成為天津國(guó)際馬拉松賽的一名志愿者。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，用英文寫(xiě)一篇演講稿，談?wù)勥@一段美好的經(jīng)歷。（1）年4月國(guó)際馬拉松賽在天津舉行；（2）作為志愿者，賽前接受了培訓(xùn)；（3）在閑暇時(shí)間里，和運(yùn)動(dòng)員用英語(yǔ)交談，為他們提供幫助；（4）和許多運(yùn)動(dòng)員成為了朋友，也了解了許多不同的文化；（5）你認(rèn)為……參考詞匯：志愿者 volunteer要求：（1）詞數(shù)：80～100個(gè)。（2）演講稿的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。（3）要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。Ladies and gentlemen,My name is Li Ming. I’m very glad to talk about my wonderful experience. Tianjin International Marathon________________________________________________________【答案】Ladies and gentlemen,My name is Li Ming. I’m very glad to talk about my wonderful experience. Tianjin International Marathon was held on April 4,.Before the game, volunteers were given a training. In our spare time, we talked to the athletes in English to help we are friends with many the same time,we also learn about many different cultures.I think the experience is good for me.【解析】亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿(mǎn)，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)，例如be glad to do，talk about，Tianjin International Marathon，hold on，in spare time，talk to，in English，at the same time，learn about，different cultures，be good for等。而Tianjin International Marathon was held on April 4,./Before the game, volunteers were given a think the experience is good for ，使本文內(nèi)容豐富，語(yǔ)態(tài)多樣，表達(dá)流暢，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。點(diǎn)睛：書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。18．（四川中考模擬）（題文） 書(shū)面表達(dá)在中學(xué)生機(jī)器人大賽上，出現(xiàn)了一種專(zhuān)門(mén)照顧老人的新型家用智能機(jī)器人，它的主要功能有：1. 定時(shí)做飯、洗衣服； 2. 陪老人聊天、下棋、做運(yùn)動(dòng)；3. 處理緊急情況（如：撥打120）假如你是該機(jī)器人的發(fā)明者，請(qǐng)你介紹這個(gè)產(chǎn)品，并談?wù)勀愕奈磥?lái)設(shè)想。要求：1. 意思連貫，語(yǔ)句通順；2. 詞數(shù)80詞左右；短文的開(kāi)頭已給出（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)） 3. 參考詞匯： at a fixed time 定時(shí)emergency 緊急情況 cpany sb. 陪伴某人Ladies and gentlemen,Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I’d like to introduce my new invention to all of you. 【答案】Ladies and gentlemen,Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I’d like to introduce my new invention to all of you.I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. It can cook meals and do some washing at a fixed time. When old people feel alone, it can also acpany them by having a chat, playing chess or doing exercise. What’s more, it can deal with some emergencies. For example, if an old man falls ill suddenly, the robot will call doctors immediately for help.I’m sure my new invention will be a great help to the elderly. I think in the future people will live a more fortable life with the help of new robots.【解析】亮