【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 n lead to more serious mental health problems. So how should we stop school bullying?If I see somebody being bullied or I am bullied, I will tell the teachers or my parents at once. It is not a good idea to do any bad things to the bullies on my own.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，談?wù)勀銓π@欺凌的看法。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如make sb do, be afraid of, lead to, mental health problem, at once, on one’s own, it is not a good idea to do any bad things to the bullies on my own中it作形式主語以及“比較級and比較級”。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。【點睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。9．（浙江中考模擬）假如你是李華，是某英文電臺“ Say it”欄目的兼職編輯。最近你收到一名叫王平的中學(xué)生發(fā)來的電子郵件，向你們欄目組求助。請你根據(jù)電子郵件內(nèi)容給她回復(fù)一封電子郵件，幫助她解答困惑。Dear Li Hua,I39。 m a middle school student. Recently I argued with my parents over using Wechat. You know Wechat has bee a part of our everyday life, but my parents don’t allow me to use it. What 39。s worse, they have changed my password（密碼） so that I can’t use it. There has been a cold war between us for over a week. What should I do?Yours,Wang Ping要求：1．語言表達(dá)要準(zhǔn)確，語意要通順、連貫；2．詞數(shù)80100左右，電子郵件的格式、開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：欺騙tick；許可permissionDear Wang Ping,I39。m sorry to hear that you are having problems with your parents because of using I believe things will get better, Yours Li Hua【答案】Dear Wang PingI‘m sorry to hear that you are having problems with your parents because of using Wechat. In fact, your problem is very mon . Cheer up and let’s find a good way to solve it.You may be tricked or get into trouble when you use Wechat. Also, using it for a long time is bad for your health, especially for your eyes. Maybe your parents worry about these things. In my opinion, munication is very important. Why not have a good talk with your parents about how to use Wechat properly? Try telling them you won’t use it for too long and won’t use it when you are studying. What more. tell them you’ll never add strangers without their permission.I believe things will get better.YoursLi Hu【解析】【詳解】這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作，寫一封回信。本題給出了主要寫作要點，動筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點，確定寫作內(nèi)容，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)和將來時態(tài)，寫作中注意標(biāo)點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫?！军c睛】這是一篇比較不錯的作文。作者根據(jù)題目要求,層次非常的清晰。短文中需要作者自己補(bǔ)充的內(nèi)容完成得也不錯這些內(nèi)容都比較貼合文章的需要，意思也很連貫。文章中還用了一些比較好的句型Maybe your parents worry about these things. In my opinion, munication is very important.；Why not have a good talk with your parents about how to use Wechat properly?10．（安徽中考模擬）書面表達(dá)共享單車為我們的生活帶來了極大的便利。假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)九年級學(xué)生李華，你的美國朋友Jim在給你的郵件中提到他對中國最新出現(xiàn)的一種共享單車“mobike”很感興趣，并請你做個簡要介紹。請你給Jim回信，內(nèi)容包括：1. 這種單車的使用方法（如：APP查看車輛、掃碼開鎖等）；2. 這種單車的優(yōu)勢；3. 你對這種單車的看法。注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2. 開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：智能手機(jī)smartphone；掃碼scan the QR code；交通工具a means of transportation。Dear Jim,I’m siting to tell you more about the new form of sharing bikemobike mentioned in your latest letter. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hope to ride a mobike with you in China.Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jim,I’m writing to tell you more about the new form of sharing bikemobike mentioned in your latest letter.It’s very convenient to use if you have a smartphone. What you do is to find a nearest mobike through the APP, scan the QR code on the bike, and enjoy your trip.Compared to other forms of sharing bike, the greatest advantage of mobike is that you can easily find one and never worry about where to park it. It is being a new trend as a means of transportation, which relieves the traffic pressure and does good to the environment as well.Hope to ride a mobike with you in China. Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】這是一篇要求介紹關(guān)于共享單車的一些事情。動筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點，圍繞要點組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。11．（江蘇中考模擬）假定你是David，來自美國，你的好友Li Ming想要在今年的暑假去做志愿者，他來信向你了解有關(guān)這方面的情況。請認(rèn)真閱讀下面的郵件，并根據(jù)信中的內(nèi)容和實際用英語回復(fù)，可以有適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。To: davidwoodlandschool@From: limingsunshineschool@Subject: VolunteeringDear David， I’m writing to ask you for advice. I know you often do volunteer work in your free time. I’m interested in it very much. I’m going to do some this summer vacation. But I know little about it. Could you help me answer the following questions? ●Why do you want to be a volunteer? ●What kind of vo1unteer work is suitable for us students? ●Do you have any problems with volunteering? ●If my parents don’t allow me to do so, what should I do? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. Best wishes， Li Ming注意：?；貜?fù)信的開頭和結(jié)尾己經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。、校名等相關(guān)信息。Dear Li Ming,Thanks for your letter. I39。m glad you would like to be a volunteer. Now let me answer your questions._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________