【正文】 【答案】Shared bikes are being more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since they appeared.Shared bikes have brought us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that it39。s easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What39。s more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford it.But there are some problems too. Some people can39。t return shared bikes in time. Sometimes shared bikes take up too much of the road, so they are in our way.I think we should encourage more people to use shared bikes properly. After all, it39。s a way of living a green life.【解析】這篇作文要求我們給《21世紀英文報》投稿，談一談自己對共享單車的看法。題目中利用表格的形式給我們列舉了短文的主要內容，包括：共享單車的優(yōu)勢；存在的問題以及你自己對這件事情的看法。前兩個內容我們需要根據(jù)表格的提示用正確的英語表達，而自己的觀點則需要學生們自己發(fā)揮想象力，組織語言，并表達出來，要求至少兩點。通過審題可知，這篇短文應主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，第三人稱來敘述，短文可以分成兩段或者三段，一個內容一段或前兩個內容合到一段。寫作時，應注意英語表達習慣和漢語的不同，不能逐詞翻譯，而應從句子的整體考慮，簡單句、并列句和復合句交叉使用，改變文章句式節(jié)奏，使用不同的句式，避免單調。語句之間注意使用恰當?shù)倪B接成分，使整篇文章意思連貫、表達流暢。點睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內容完整，包含了題目要求的所有信息。短文分成了四段，第一段引出話題共享單車；第二段講述了共享單車的一些優(yōu)點；第三段介紹了一些問題；最后一段作者提出了自己的看法。分段敘述使文章的結構清晰，主題明確，有層次性。其次短文中使用了恰當?shù)臅r態(tài)和人稱，文章以第三人稱、一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)為主，語法規(guī)范，用詞準確，句式富于變化。例如They can be seen everywhere so that it39。s easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What39。s more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford ；另外文章中還使用了恰當?shù)倪B接成分，如Also, What’s more, But, sometimes, After all等等。正確文章行文連貫、語句通順、表達流暢。10．書面表達“Life is like a box of of never know what you are going to get next.”Forrest Gump 中文譯名：《阿甘正傳》“Hope is a good thing. Maybe the best of things and no good thing ever dies.”The Shawshank Kedemption 中文譯名：《肖申克的救贖》“We are all running very hard. We are all dream chasers（追夢人）.”President Xi Jingping以上材料告訴我們：生活是豐富多彩的，有快樂幸福也有傷心失落。但既然選擇了遠方，便只顧風雨兼程。所以在學習和生活中，我們要滿懷希望、努力奔跑、追逐夢想。請以Dream Chaser為題，談談你自己的觀點。要點提示：，并努力讓它成為現(xiàn)實；，使自己不斷強大；，積極參加社會活動；。寫作要求：，可適當發(fā)揮使行文連貫； ，字跡工整，詞數(shù)不少于80；，不計入總詞數(shù)；。Dream ChaserAs we know, life is not always smooth. Sometimes we may feel satisfied and sometimes we may feel ______________________________________________________________________________【答案】As we know, life is not always smooth. Sometimes we may feel satisfied and sometimes we may feel upset. In order to make our dream e true, firstly we should set a practical goal. But just having a goal is not enough. More importantly, we need to study hard to make ourselves stronger. Besides, as teenagers, it is necessary for us to take part in more social activities. We can learn a lot from each other by joining in those social activities. However, there will be many difficulties in both our daily life and study, so please keep patient and be brave to face these challenges. Finally, all our efforts are meaningful and one day our dream will be achieved.【解析】【詳解】：這是一篇材料作文。主要說明要有自己的目標，努力實現(xiàn)目標應做到勤奮學習，使自己不斷強大；正確面對困難，積極參加社會活動。：例文用第一人稱來敘述主要內容；時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時為主，主要講述如何實現(xiàn)自己的目標（Firstly,…More importantly,…Besides,…Finally,…）。承接文章開頭，句意完整，避免漢語式英語，敘述條理清晰。：高分短語：feel satisfied；feel upset；e true；set a practical goal；both…and…；keep patient。高分句型：It is +adj. + for sb. +to do sth.；there be句型；祈使句；need to do sth.。