【正文】 般現(xiàn)在時為主。注意英語句子的表達和漢語習(xí)慣是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯，而應(yīng)從句子的整體考慮，使用正確的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以及適當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯、短語和句型，保證句子的準(zhǔn)確性和語言的地道。另外還應(yīng)注意語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫。穿插一些高級詞匯和復(fù)雜句式，提升文章檔次和水平，使表達更加流暢。點睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目要求的所有信息，沒有遺漏要點。作者主要從三個方面敘述：首先介紹了自己的身份和寫留言的目的；接下來詳細介紹了自己參加這次冬令營的愿望；最后是一個簡單的結(jié)尾。如果分段敘述效果則會更好，那樣會使文章的層次更加清晰。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，文章以第一人稱、一般將來時和一般現(xiàn)在時為主，謂語動詞形式準(zhǔn)發(fā)，語法規(guī)范，符合英語句子的表達習(xí)慣。短文以簡單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主，也使用了一些復(fù)合句和較高級的句型，如I’m writing to tell you that our city will have a Winter Camp during this winter ；From , I know you will have a report “An Update on the Cotswold Canals” February 6th, which will happen during the same period of our Winter ；And I also hope to listen to your talk so that I can know more about the Stroudwater Canal, the Thames and Severn 。整篇文章語句通順、意思連貫、表達流暢。8．為配合學(xué)校“誠信教育”活動，學(xué)校英語報開展了以“Try to be honest”為主題的征文活動。請你根據(jù)下面的內(nèi)容提示，寫一篇征文稿。（1）列舉你班同學(xué)存在的不誠實現(xiàn)象：抄作業(yè)，考試作弊，說謊話......。（2）簡述誠實的重要性，并用你的一次具體經(jīng)歷加以說明。注意：（1）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和學(xué)校名稱。（2）詞數(shù)100左右。（3）短文首句僅供參考，不計入總數(shù)。參考詞匯：作弊cheat（v.）說謊tell a lieTry to be honestTo be honest is one of the most treasured traditional values in _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Try to be honestTo be honest is one of the most treasured traditional values in China. The children are taught to be honest when they are very young. At schools the students are also instructed to be honest.However, with the development of society, we often hear plaints about dishonesty. Reports with the theme of dishonesty often appear in the media. For example, some people try to get rich and live a fortable life. But they do not work hard honestly, instead they cheat others. They sell something quite ordinary at a very high price. Some people’s delaying paying back the loan can serve as another example. Some people, including some college students, get loan from the bank, and promise to pay within, say, 3 years. However, they don’t do that.The dishonest people sometimes can get benefit from their behaviors. So some people assert that dishonesty can bring people benefit, while honesty only makes people suffer. Is that so? Definitely not. It is always true that honesty is the best policy. It pays to be honest. The cheater selling the treasure mentioned above will surely be disclosed and punished some day. On the contrary, if he had been honest, neither the buyer nor he himself would have suffered. The people who do not return money in time will sooner or later bee infamous, and will not get the money from others again. If he had acted differently, he would have earned respect and trust, meanwhile, the bank would not have suffered from loss.【解析】這是一篇誠信征文，英語作文要注意人稱和時態(tài)，注意提供的觀點、材料，要注意句子的完整性，謂語動詞的正確形式，句子之間的銜接和過渡。英語作文，要忠實于材料，不必擴展，注意用好連詞，多用非謂語，慎用較難的句型，一定不能寫錯句。9．書面表達校園安全問題越來越受到重視，為了確保學(xué)生的安全，學(xué)校制訂了一些規(guī)章制度。請根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，以“School safety”為題寫一篇100詞左右的英語短文。提示：1. 遵守校規(guī)，按時到校、離校；2. 不接受陌生人的物品；3. 結(jié)伴同行，天黑前到家；4. 遇到麻煩及時告知家長和老師。School safety_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】School safetyMore and more people pay special attention to the school safety nowadays. Here are some rules to keep us safe.First, as students, we should follow the school rules, such as not being late for school and leaving school early. Second, we shouldn’t go with strangers and we shouldn’t accept things from strangers. Third, it’s better for us to have partners on the way home and to school and we must get home before dark. Fourth, if we are in trouble, don’t forget to tell our parents or teachers as soon as possible.I think these rules are good for us. We must obey them.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話題作文，根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下校園安全。所提供的材料中列舉了為了確保學(xué)生的安全，學(xué)校制訂了一些規(guī)章制度。主要從1. 遵守校規(guī)，按時到校、離校；2. 不接受陌生人的物品；3. 結(jié)伴同行，天黑前到家；4. 遇到麻煩及時告知家長和老師。這四個方面去介紹。時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為第一人稱。本文是提建議，因此用shouldn’t或should來寫。注意作文中必須包含材料上的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時，避免使用漢語式的英語，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要正確，表達要符合英語習(xí)慣，注意時態(tài)、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達具有條理性?！靖叻志湫鸵弧縎econd, we shouldn’t go with strangers and we shouldn’t accept things from strangers. 第二，我們不應(yīng)該和陌生人一起去，也不應(yīng)該接受陌生人的東西。本句話是由and連接的并列句?！靖叻志湫投縄 think these rules are good for us. 我認為這些規(guī)則對我們有好處。句子these rules are good for 。