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In China. the host or hostess doesn’t eat every dish first until the guests and elders begin. You can’t tap bowls with the chopsticks. You shouldn’t reach across the table or in front of someone to get something to eat. You can eat until everyone is at the table. Besides, you should toast longevity, good health or success of the host or hostess.Wele to China!Yours,Han Mei【解析】【詳解】本文是書信寫作,注意書信寫作格式,開頭與結(jié)尾。把自己當做韓梅,切不可在文中出現(xiàn)自己的真實名字等信息。要求根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點來寫作。學生首先要認真閱讀材料中給出的短語及相關信息,認真審題,確定文章的中心。在寫作的文章具有一定的連貫性,還應注意使用一些連接詞,使文章的表達更有邏輯性和條理性。寫作時還要注意:;,使內(nèi)容充實,行文連貫;,有無拼寫錯誤等。高分句型:In 。the host or hostess doesn’t eat every dish first until the guests and elders ,主人不會先把每道菜都吃完。You shouldn’t reach across the table or in front of someone to get something to 。Besides, you should toast longevity, good health or success of the host or ,你應該為主人的長壽、健康或成功干杯。【點睛】注意寫作過程中,將要點展開并表達清楚,注意使用英語的經(jīng)典句型,避免出現(xiàn)漢語表達。8. 為響應我市全面創(chuàng)建國家文明城市的號召,麗水市中小學開展“文明城市,健康生活”為主題的英語征文活動。請你以“The Civilized City, the Healthy Life”為題,根據(jù)表格中的圖片及文字提示,簡要描述并適當發(fā)表自己的觀點,寫一篇英語短文。Subject The Civilized City, the Healthy LifeWays of doing ride bikes, reduce air pollution, throw rubbish into the bins, keep the city clean, plant more trees,…Your opinion……(至少2條)注意:(1)詞數(shù)80100左右,短文開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù);(2)文中不得提及考生所在學校及自己的姓名。The Civilized City, the Healthy LifeAs a citizen of Lishui, it’s our duty to____________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】The Civilized City, the Healthy LifeAs a citizen of Lishui, it’s our duty to help build a civilized city so that we can live a healthy life. We can reduce air pollution by riding bicycles. It’s better for us to put rubbish into the rubbish bin. In this way, we can keep our city clean. And we’d better plant more trees to protect the natural environment.In my opinion, I’ll try my best to make our city cleaner and more beautiful. Firstly, I can save water by taking shorter showers. Secondly, I can save energy by turning off the lights when I leave the room. In a word, everyone can do something to make a difference.【解析】試題分析:這是一篇話題作文。話題是“The Civilized City, the Healthy Life”;并給了一些提示和注意事項:(1)詞數(shù)80100左右,短文開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù);(2)文中不得提及考生所在學校及自己的姓名。動筆前要認真閱讀材料,不可遺漏要點,要用上提示詞,并適當發(fā)揮,要添加些內(nèi)容,使文章看起來更充實,最后寫出你的觀點。注意主謂一致問題。寫作中適當使用連詞,注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關系。注意單詞拼寫,不要犯單詞拼寫錯誤,字數(shù)要符合要求?!玖咙c說明】這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的作文,本文很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務。覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點;要點全面,結(jié)構(gòu)連貫;語言規(guī)范,敘事清楚,詞匯及時態(tài)運用正確,能夠把提示的內(nèi)容敘述清楚,語句通順,意思連貫,沒有單詞拼寫錯誤,字數(shù)符合題目要求。9.“書山有路勤為徑, 學海無涯苦作舟”, 成功不會從天而降, 美好的未來需要靠不斷努力來創(chuàng)造?某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“天道酬勤” 為主題的征文活動?假如你是李華, 請用英文寫一篇短文投稿, 講述你通過勤奮, 取得進步甚至成功的經(jīng)歷, 并談談你的感受?提示詞語: diligence (勤奮), make progress, effort, proud提示問題: ? What did you achieve by working hard?? What did you do to make it?? How did you feel about it?【答案】Diligence is a must for us to reach our goals. I never realized it until I tried every effort to win the English speech petition last year. It was quite a big challenge for me because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in public. To give a better performance, I made full use of my spare time to prepare for it. I recorded my lines and asked my foreign teacher to correct my pronunciation. Then I kept practising day and night. Besides, I seized every chance to speak in front of my family or friends. The more I practised, the more confident I became. In the end, I won the petition and got a prize. It was so great that all my efforts paid off. I felt so proud of myself.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話題作文,根據(jù)材料中的相關信息介紹一下你通過勤奮, 取得進步甚至成功的經(jīng)歷。所提供的材料中列舉了“書山有路勤為徑, 學海無涯苦作舟”, 成功不會從天而降, 美好的未來需要靠不斷努力來創(chuàng)造。主要從:你努力工作取得了什么成績??你是怎么做到的??你覺得怎么樣?這幾個方面去介紹。時態(tài)為一般過去時,人稱為第一人稱。注意作文中必須包含材料和提示詞的所有信息,并適當發(fā)揮。寫作時,避免使用漢語式的英語,盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要正確,表達要符合英語習慣,注意時態(tài)、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當使用連詞,注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關系,表達具有條理性。【高分句型一】It was quite a big challenge for me because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in public. 這對我來說是一個很大的挑戰(zhàn),因為我對自己的英語口語沒有那么自信,在公共場合說話也很害羞。句子because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in ?!靖叻志湫投縏he more I practised, the more confident I became. 我練習得越多,就越自信。這句話用到了“the+比較級,the+比較級”結(jié)構(gòu)。表示“越……,就越……”的意思。