【正文】 a show?What are you going to do on the show?What will you ask Mr. Smith to do for the show?Dear Mr. Smith, I39。m glad to tell you there39。ll be an English drama show this weekend. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ We’re looking forward to your reply.Li Hua【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,I’m glad to tell you there’ll be an English drama show this weekend . It will be held at 8:00 this Saturday morning. We are going to hold it in our music club. All of us are going to wear nice clothes and play different roles in groups. We will perform English dramas. Speeches will be made during the show.I hope you can work as a judge and give scores for each group after their performances. Then at the end of the drama show, you can give us some suggestions. If possible, you can bring your camera with you and take some photos for us. I believe this English drama show will be successful with your help.We’re looking forward to your reply.Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，邀請(qǐng)外教史密斯先生參加英語(yǔ)戲劇展示活動(dòng)。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如be going to, at the end of, give sb sth, if possible, take some photos以及with one’s help。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了，在寫作的過(guò)程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。9． 2018年11月15日泰州市召開了深化全國(guó)文明城市創(chuàng)建迎檢部署會(huì)，會(huì)上我市正式啟動(dòng)了“泰有禮”全民主題實(shí)踐活動(dòng)，形成崇德向善、文明有禮的道德風(fēng)尚和城市標(biāo)識(shí)，同時(shí)組織“泰有禮”志愿服務(wù)隊(duì)伍，圍繞“文明禮讓”“文明交通”“文明餐飲”“文明上網(wǎng)”等文明實(shí)踐活動(dòng)，承擔(dān)起對(duì)市民日常行為進(jìn)行勸導(dǎo)的責(zé)任。假如你是其中的一名志愿者，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇150字左右的英語(yǔ)短文。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。(以上背景內(nèi)容無(wú)需表達(dá)) 內(nèi)容提示： ，幫助他們做家務(wù)活；，排隊(duì)候車，不隨地吐痰、不亂扔垃圾；不在公共場(chǎng)所抽煙、喧嘩（比如在圖書館或博物館），不撒謊，不說(shuō)臟話；，幫助別人；坐車時(shí)請(qǐng)讓座給老人，殘疾人，尤其抱小孩的婦女；，做到紅燈停，綠燈行；。 要求：，字跡工整：可圍繞主題適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；、校名、地名成其他真實(shí)信息；As a member of the city, I think we should______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’m sure our city will bee more and more beautiful and cleaner as long as we all try our best to do something for it!【答案】As a member of the city, I think we should respect our parents at home, and help them with the housework. While we are travelling, we should pay attention to our own behavior, such as waiting for a bus in line. We should never spit or litter everywhere. What’s more, we can’t smoke or talk aloud in public, such as in the library or the museum. During our daily lives, we ought to be honest, never tell lies or say bad words because it’s rude to others. Also we should be polite and helpful to others. When we are on the bus, we can give our seats to the old and the disabled, especially the women with babies in their arms. And we should obey the traffic rules. Remember to stop when the traffic light is red and walk when the traffic light is green. Don39。t forget to protect our environment. Though we are young, we can still do something to help. I’m sure our city will bee more and more beautiful and cleaner as long as we all try our best to do something for it!【解析】【詳解】本文就具體的話題給出一定的范圍。所以用得特別多的句式是we should| ought to do sth ……。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示，至少包括五個(gè)點(diǎn)：we should respect our parents at home。While we are travelling, we should pay attention to our own behavior。We should never spit or litter everywhere。we ought to be honest, never tell lies or say bad words。及we should be polite and helpful to others等。Don39。t forget to protect our environment補(bǔ)充作者個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)。最后用I’m sure our city will bee more and more beautiful and cleaner as long as we all try our best to do something for it!總結(jié)全文，表達(dá)每個(gè)人都出一份力，我們的城市會(huì)越來(lái)越美。文中針對(duì)現(xiàn)象提出想法，時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，且用第一人稱陳述?！军c(diǎn)睛】