【正文】 to achieve success. As the English saying goes, Failure is the mother of success.I was asked to play in a table tennis match last term. Before the match, I was cinfident that I would win. However, I failed . How sad I was! luckily, my helped me out. He told me not to lose heart. He also helped me with my skills. With his help , my confidence returned and I came up with several new ideas. The next day, though I had to play against anther more skilled boy , I beat him! So don’t be afraid of failure. If we can deal with it well. failure can be the mother of success!【解析】【詳解】1. 題干解讀：這是一篇提綱式的給材料作文。要求介紹介紹失敗的經歷，及從中的收獲和感想。描述經歷用過去時態(tài)。2. 例文點評：這篇短文條理通暢，能將要點表達完整。句式豐富，能運用連詞使文章更有邏輯同時運用了大量的短語。3. 高分亮點：短語和連詞的使用：be full of ，ups and downs，too…to…，help out，before，if，lay against，deal with等。句型：(1) Life is full of ups and downs and it is never too easy to achieve success（2）Failure is the mother of success.（3）I was asked to play in a table tennis match last term.（4）The next day, though I had to play against anther more skilled boy , I beat him! (5) If we can deal with it well. failure can be the mother of success!8．書面表達校園安全問題越來越受到重視，為了確保學生的安全，學校制訂了一些規(guī)章制度。請根據(jù)提示內容，以“School safety”為題寫一篇100詞左右的英語短文。提示：1. 遵守校規(guī)，按時到校、離校；2. 不接受陌生人的物品；3. 結伴同行，天黑前到家；4. 遇到麻煩及時告知家長和老師。School safety_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】School safetyMore and more people pay special attention to the school safety nowadays. Here are some rules to keep us safe.First, as students, we should follow the school rules, such as not being late for school and leaving school early. Second, we shouldn’t go with strangers and we shouldn’t accept things from strangers. Third, it’s better for us to have partners on the way home and to school and we must get home before dark. Fourth, if we are in trouble, don’t forget to tell our parents or teachers as soon as possible.I think these rules are good for us. We must obey them.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話題作文，根據(jù)材料中的相關信息介紹一下校園安全。所提供的材料中列舉了為了確保學生的安全，學校制訂了一些規(guī)章制度。主要從1. 遵守校規(guī)，按時到校、離校；2. 不接受陌生人的物品；3. 結伴同行，天黑前到家；4. 遇到麻煩及時告知家長和老師。這四個方面去介紹。時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為第一人稱。本文是提建議，因此用shouldn’t或should來寫。注意作文中必須包含材料上的所有信息，并適當發(fā)揮。寫作時，避免使用漢語式的英語，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要正確，表達要符合英語習慣，注意時態(tài)、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關系，表達具有條理性?！靖叻志湫鸵弧縎econd, we shouldn’t go with strangers and we shouldn’t accept things from strangers. 第二，我們不應該和陌生人一起去，也不應該接受陌生人的東西。本句話是由and連接的并列句?！靖叻志湫投縄 think these rules are good for us. 我認為這些規(guī)則對我們有好處。句子these rules are good for 。9．書面表達近日，你校迎來一批來自英國的交流生，學校組織學生向他們介紹中國的傳統(tǒng)文化。請你根據(jù)表格信息寫一篇題為Chinese Tea的英語短文，向英國交流生介紹中國的茶文化。歷史歷史悠久，享譽世界。種類種類多樣，各具特色。習俗以茶會友，饋贈親朋。功效有益健康，提神醒腦。影響……(自擬兩點)。注意:，適當發(fā)揮。開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。、校名、地名等相關信息。Chinese TeaTea is an important part of Chinese culture. 【答案】Tea is an important part of Chinese culture. It has a long history and it is famous all over the world. There’re many kinds of tea in China. Each of them has its own characteristics. Most Chinese like drinking often treat friends with often buy tea for their friends and relatives as a tea is good for people’s cup of tea can make relaxed and energetic.Tea not only helps foreigners know about China but also builds a bridge between the East and the West.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話題作文，題目是Chinese Tea。本文人稱主要是第三人稱，時態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時。認為閱讀材料，認真審題，確定主題，表格信息提示就是本文的提綱要點，根據(jù)要點適當發(fā)揮，列出提綱。短文必須包含提示內容，條理清楚，字數(shù)90詞左右。要運用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有連貫性。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無單詞拼寫、標點、語法錯誤（時態(tài)、主謂一致等）。本文提綱：茶是中國文化的重要組成部分。它歷史悠久，享譽世界。中國有很多種茶。它們中的每一個都有自己的特點。大多數(shù)中國人喜歡喝茶。人們經常用茶來招待朋友。他們經常給朋友和親戚買茶作為禮物。喝茶有益于人們的健康。一杯茶可以使人放松和精力充沛。茶不僅有助于外國人了解中國，而且能在東西方之間架起一座橋梁?！军c睛】書面表達要求將所規(guī)定的材料內容經整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力?？忌荒苓z漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結構以便得到較高的分數(shù)。語言要規(guī)范，時態(tài)運用要正確，敘述清楚條里，學習中注意總結，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理。注意書寫的規(guī)范：大小寫、標點符號等的正確運用。注意檢查：單詞拼寫、語法、動詞時態(tài)、語序、主謂一致等。寫作六步法：：文體，時態(tài)，人稱。：要點是否齊全，適當補充。：通過增加狀語，定語，連詞，使句子意思飽滿充實。，合理使用連詞。：拼寫是否錯誤，語法時態(tài)是否正確，連詞是否恰當?shù)?。：注意書寫工整美觀整潔。