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__________________________Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Nick,How’s everything going?Our school is holding an English reading festival this June. I’m very interested in it. There are many different activation in the festival such as reading good English books. sharing good stories and so on. It’s a good chance for us to learn more about western cultures. However, I have some problems. First, I don’t have enough books. For example, I want to get some books about western history. Next, I’m not so good at English, I have trouble in reading. Would you please share some good books with me and give me some advice on reading?I expect to hear from you soon.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】這是一篇書信作文。假如你是李華,你校正舉辦英語讀書節(jié)活動(dòng),你在參與活動(dòng)的過程中遇到一些困難。請給你的英國朋友Nick寫一封向他求助。首先要注意書信的書寫格式,文章時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),人稱主要為第一人稱。在寫作時(shí),要注意理順要點(diǎn),防止漏寫;注意緊扣主題,連句成篇,要層次清楚,要點(diǎn)分明,中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣;盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句;盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞,確保正確率;詞匯、句式要豐富多樣,可以為文章增色添彩。最后,要仔細(xì)檢查有無單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等,還要檢查字?jǐn)?shù)是否符合要求。參考要點(diǎn):(時(shí)間、內(nèi)容……)。(如:缺少相關(guān)書籍、英語閱讀困難……);。8.加入你是英國交流學(xué)生 Neil,你在南京 Sunshine Middle School 兩個(gè)月的學(xué)習(xí)生活即將結(jié)束。請你根據(jù)以下提示,以 Neil的名義,用英語給 Sunshine Middle School 校長寫一封感謝信。216。 what you39。ve learned about Chinese culture216。 how the teachers and students help you216。 what your homestay family do for you注意:1. 對所有要點(diǎn)逐一陳述,適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2. 詞數(shù) 80 左右,感謝信的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。3. 文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個(gè)人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。Dear Sir/Madam,I would like to express my thanks to you. During my twomonth stay in Nanjing, I feel really grateful for what you have done for us.【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,I would like to express my thanks to you. During my twomonth stay in Nanjing. I enjoyed myself very much.I took the rich and colourful courses. I have learned Chinse Kungfu from a . is really amazing! I also know something about Chinese papercutting in Art I can’t speak have little difficult talking with the teachers and students here,theyare always ready to help me.I felt excited when I spent a weekend with a family. In their family,they taught me how to make also visited Confucins had a good time together. I feel really grateful for what you have done for us.【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇書信作文。根據(jù)以下提示,以 Neil的名義,用英語給 Sunshine Middle School 校長寫一封感謝信。文章時(shí)態(tài)用一般過去時(shí),人稱主要為第一人稱。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì),考生要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料,不可遺漏要點(diǎn),并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。在寫作時(shí),注意緊扣主題,連句成篇,要層次清楚,要點(diǎn)分明,中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣;盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句;盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞,確保正確率;詞匯、句式要豐富多樣,可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查,確保正確無誤。【點(diǎn)睛】點(diǎn)睛:首先認(rèn)真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn);然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá);然后緊扣要點(diǎn),動(dòng)筆寫作,在寫作過程中,要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡,必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞,使文章過渡平穩(wěn),自然流暢;最后,要仔細(xì)檢查有無單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等,還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理,有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言,大小寫是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。9.“苔花如米小,也學(xué)牡丹開?!蔽覀兇蠖鄶?shù)人雖微不足道,但也能有所作為。請以“One Thing I Felt Very Proud Of”為題用英語寫一篇短文,描述你曾做過的引以自豪的一件事情。要求: 1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱;2. 詞數(shù)80左右。One Thing I Felt Very Proud Of________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】I will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother.To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday. I tried many times but failed before she came back. Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t control the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned. However, I didn’t give up, and finally I succeeded. Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears.I felt proud of cooking on my own.【解析】【分析】本文是一篇話題作文?!驹斀狻扛鶕?jù)題干““苔花如米小,也學(xué)牡丹開。”我們大多數(shù)人雖微不足道,但也能有所作為。請以“One Thing I Felt Very Proud Of”為題用英語寫一篇短文,描述你曾做過的引以自豪的一件事情?!币罂芍?,本文用一般過去時(shí),人稱用第一人稱。英語作文一般分為三個(gè)部分:第一部分:開篇點(diǎn)題——我將介紹曾做過的引以自豪的一件事情。第二部分:文章主體——具體介紹這件事情的始末。根據(jù)事情發(fā)展順序,從先到后交代事情的經(jīng)過,我做了什么,為什么引以為傲。這些內(nèi)容用一般過去時(shí),注意動(dòng)詞的過去式變形。第三部分:總結(jié)全文——我為自己感到驕傲。