【正文】 lpful to others. When we are on the bus, we can give our seats to the old and the disabled, especially the women with babies in their arms. And we should obey the traffic rules. Remember to stop when the traffic light is red and walk when the traffic light is green. Don39。t forget to protect our environment. Though we are young, we can still do something to help. I’m sure our city will bee more and more beautiful and cleaner as long as we all try our best to do something for it!【解析】【詳解】本文就具體的話題給出一定的范圍。所以用得特別多的句式是we should| ought to do sth ……。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示，至少包括五個(gè)點(diǎn)：we should respect our parents at home。While we are travelling, we should pay attention to our own behavior。We should never spit or litter everywhere。we ought to be honest, never tell lies or say bad words。及we should be polite and helpful to others等。Don39。t forget to protect our environment補(bǔ)充作者個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)。最后用I’m sure our city will bee more and more beautiful and cleaner as long as we all try our best to do something for it!總結(jié)全文，表達(dá)每個(gè)人都出一份力，我們的城市會(huì)越來(lái)越美。文中針對(duì)現(xiàn)象提出想法，時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，且用第一人稱陳述。【點(diǎn)睛】8．緊張而又忙碌的初中生活即將結(jié)束，在裝載你收獲的行囊成長(zhǎng)記錄袋中還應(yīng)增添一份你自己滿意的答案。根據(jù)上述提示，請(qǐng)以“My Unforgettable Junior High School Life”為題寫(xiě)一篇文章，記錄你難忘的校園生活。首句已給出。注意：. ，句子連貫，條理清楚，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；2. 短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名或能夠透露你個(gè)人身份的相關(guān)信息。，信件的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。My Unforgettable Junior High School LifeHow time flies! 【答案】How time flies! My colorful junior high school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think of about myself.In the past, I was busy learning my subjects and worked hard at them. I got on well with my classmates. I was good at English. I liked playing basketball / football / volleyball. But now I am interested in history, because it is very interesting. I have many interests such as reading books, playing sports and so on. In this way, I’ve got more knowledge and improved my life.In the future, I’ll try my best to do better. I’ll learn to enjoy my school life. I’ll make it more and more beautiful. Believing myself is the key to success.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文要求我們以My Unforgettable Junior High School Life為題，回想一下自己即將過(guò)去的初中，講述難忘的初中生活。題目中用思維導(dǎo)圖，列出了一些文章中會(huì)用到的關(guān)鍵詞，供學(xué)生們參考使用。審題可知，這篇短文應(yīng)以一般過(guò)去時(shí)、第一人稱為主來(lái)敘述。題目中并沒(méi)有給出具體的寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容，學(xué)生們應(yīng)發(fā)揮自己的想象力，可以從自己的學(xué)習(xí)、愛(ài)好、與同學(xué)的交往、與老師的相處以及自己的感受等方面進(jìn)行詳細(xì)闡述。寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意：首先要展開(kāi)合理想象，補(bǔ)充文章細(xì)節(jié)內(nèi)容，注意各部分內(nèi)容之間的層次，內(nèi)容要完整、充實(shí)，結(jié)構(gòu)要清晰。其次應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯。句子的結(jié)構(gòu)要完整，可以簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主，如主謂賓或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)。為提升作文檔次，應(yīng)穿插使用并列句、復(fù)合句及其他復(fù)雜句式。語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫、自然?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，回憶了自己的初中生活，并描述了自己的感受。短文有以下幾個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn)：首先文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)、完整，符合題目要求。短文中作者從自己的學(xué)習(xí)情況、與同學(xué)的交往、愛(ài)好、特長(zhǎng)等方面進(jìn)行了總結(jié)，在最后提出了對(duì)未來(lái)的希望。層次清晰，結(jié)構(gòu)合理。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，文章第一段引出主題，使用了一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；第二段回憶過(guò)去的生活，主要使用了一般過(guò)去時(shí)；最后對(duì)未來(lái)提出希望，用到了一般將來(lái)時(shí)。語(yǔ)法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確，注意了名詞、動(dòng)詞、形容詞等的正確形式。句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，也使用了并列句、賓語(yǔ)從句、狀語(yǔ)從句等復(fù)合句句型，調(diào)整了文章節(jié)奏，提升了作文檔次。短文中較好的句型有：In the past, I was busy learning my subjects and worked hard at them、But now I am interested in history, because it is very interesting、In this way, I’ve got more knowledge and improved my life.、I’ll make it more and more beautiful. Believing myself is the key to success等等。9．書(shū)面表達(dá)某英文報(bào)社組織了題為“我喜歡的英語(yǔ)諺語(yǔ)”征文活動(dòng)，你有意參加。請(qǐng)從下面兩句諺語(yǔ)中任選一句作為標(biāo)題寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)作文，內(nèi)容須包括：1. 該諺語(yǔ)的含義；2. 體現(xiàn)該諺語(yǔ)含義的個(gè)人經(jīng)歷。a) A friend in need is a friend indeed.b) Where there’s a will, there’s a way.參考詞匯：諺語(yǔ) proverb____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】A Friend in Need is a Friend IndeedA life without friends is a life without sunshine! Friends try their best to help you without thinking of what they can get from it.Once I doubted the usefulness of study, losing my interests and direction, even confidence. Finally, I decided to stop studying. After knowing the news, my friend encouraged me patiently. She insisted on persuading me until I promised to give up this thought.Later, I made up my mind to study hard so as to enter my dream university.Many people will be in and out of your life, but only true friends will leave footprints in your hear. True friends always e to you when you need help.【解析】【分析】這是命題作文。二選一，第一個(gè)是“患難見(jiàn)真情”，第二個(gè)是“有志者事競(jìng)成”?！驹斀狻繕?biāo)題都是以諺語(yǔ)的形式出現(xiàn)，所以考生第一步做的是理解這兩個(gè)言語(yǔ)的意思，選擇自己較有把握的。在選擇標(biāo)題之后，根據(jù)所給內(nèi)容提示，進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作。寫(xiě)作時(shí)，先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，這樣才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體