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織材料,然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達出來,在此基礎上亦可適當發(fā)揮,注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應用第一人稱,一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài),注意標點符號及大小寫等問題,不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關系,語意連貫。8.書面表達在本周班會課上,同學們對“初中生什么時候放學比較合適?”這一問題進行了熱烈的討論。大部分同學認為初中生應該在5點左右放學,下表所列里大家的發(fā)言記錄。請你寫一篇短文介紹大家的想法并闡述你的觀點。Time to leave schoolActivities to do after schoolat 5 o’clockat 4:45at 5 o’clock...exercise to keep healthy and read booksdo what we want, such as listening to musictake a parttime job...注意:(1)短文必須包括表格中所有要點,并適當發(fā)揮;(2)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和校名;(3)詞數(shù):80100;(4)短文開頭僅供參考,不計入總詞數(shù)。短文開頭:“What time should junior high school students leave school?” This week we have held a class meeting to talk about it. Here is the result of the discussion.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】“What time should junior high school students leave school?”This week we have held a class meeting to talk about it. Here is the result of the discussion.Most students think that students should leave school at about 5 o 39。clock. They can exercise to keep healthy and read more interesting books after school.Some think that students should leave school at 4:45, because they can have more time to do what they want to do, such as listening to music.A few think 5 o 39。clock is the best time to finish school. After school, they can do parttime jobs, such as collecting discarded plastic bottles to sell for money.I am in favor of leaving school at five o39。clock. Besides having time to play tennis, I can also draw some pictures I like.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語,為文章增色不少,如hold a class meeting,talk about,the result of,keep healthy,after school,have more time to do,want to do,such as,listen to music,in favor of,clean the room,play tennis等。而復雜并列結(jié)構(gòu)They can exercise to keep healthy and read more interesting books after students think that students should leave school at about 5 o 39。clock./ Some think that students should leave school at 4:45, because they can have more time to do what they want to do, such as listening to ,豐富了短文內(nèi)容,使表達多樣化;同時Most students think…/ Some think…/ A few think…使敘述條理,層次分明,是本文的亮點。在學習中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章表達更有邏輯性,也更富有條理?!军c睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維,考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以,考生不能遺漏要點,要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式,盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分數(shù)。9.書面表達中考后暑假即將開始,你和一些同學準備結(jié)伴出國旅行。旅行社提供了兩個國家供你選擇游玩。請根據(jù)旅行社提供的信息,將你的選擇用英文向同學們介紹。BritainAustraliaTimeJuly 1 July 14TimeAugust 15 August 24Activitiesvisit the Buckingham Palace (白金漢宮) visit the British Museum (大英博物館)watch football matches…Activitiesvisit the Sydney Opera Housetravel around the Gold Coast (黃金海岸)have fun with kangaroos and koalas…Attentionchangeable weatherAttentionwinterCost20,000 yuanCost16,000 yuan要求:1. 所寫內(nèi)容必須包括某一國家的所有信息及選擇的理由; 2. 結(jié)合游玩國家的情況,自擬希望可以安排的活動,并提出12點出游的注意事項;3. 文章不少于90詞,開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù);4. 語義通順、意思連貫、條理清楚、書寫規(guī)范;5. 不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名等相關信息。The summer holiday is ing. I think it’s a good idea to travel abroad. I hope I will have a good time there!【答案】The summer holiday is ing. I think it’s a good idea to travel abroad. I have read information about two countries——Britain and Australia. I like britain. So I think we can go to time is july 1 to july 14. Its activities include visiting the buckingham palace,visiting the british museum, and watching football first, I want us to visit the Buckingham Palace and the british museum, I think it is very helpful for us to understand the history and culture of Britain. Next I hope to watch football matches. I like football very much. It will be exciting.However, the weather in Britain is changeable, which will make our trip inconvenient. And it39。s expensive to travel to the UK, which costs 20000 yuan, But I still want to travel to England.I hope I will have a good time there!【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文。中考后暑假即將開始,你和一些同學準備結(jié)伴出國旅行。旅行社提供了兩個國家供你選擇游玩。要求根據(jù)旅行社提供的信息將你的選擇用英文向同學們介紹。首先認真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點;然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達;然后緊扣要點,動筆寫作。在寫作時,注意連句成篇,保持文章的連貫性,要層次清楚,要點分明,中心突出。同時要注意語言的表述應該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應該符合英語的表達習慣;盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,最好不要寫太長的復合句;盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞,確保正確率;詞匯、句式要豐富多樣,可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細心復核檢查,確保正確無誤。