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簡(jiǎn)單句為主,穿插并列句或復(fù)合句。其次要注意英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)是不同的,不能按照漢語(yǔ)思維,逐詞翻譯。短文應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)為主,注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式。題目中用問題的形式給出了提示,審題可知,文章應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容:首先敘述你生活中遇到的一件困難的事;然后介紹你是如何克服了這個(gè)困難,最后取得成功的;最后說(shuō)一下你自己的感受。t be afraid of the difficulties in my life and I39。(3)詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右(開頭和結(jié)尾已給出, 不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。提示:(1)What was the event?(2)How did you make it?(3)What’s your feeling?要求:(1)發(fā)言稿中須包括所有提示內(nèi)容, 可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。短文中較好的句型有:The results showed that % of Chinese children often talk to their parents, far fewer than the Americans.、I think we should not only talk often but open our heart.、I also shared my secrets and worries with them. A good relationship requires efforts from both parents and children、We should find a proper way to create a healthy parentchild 。句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整,以簡(jiǎn)單句為主,也使用了賓語(yǔ)從句、狀語(yǔ)從句、并列句、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞等復(fù)雜句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。這是文章的主體部分,敘述非常詳細(xì),內(nèi)容也很充實(shí),所占篇幅也最大;最后一段作者重申主題,點(diǎn)明了良好親子關(guān)系的重要性。短文有以下幾個(gè)特點(diǎn):首先文章內(nèi)容完整,符合題目要求。同時(shí)注意語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分,使行文連貫、自然。其次應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)的不同,不能根據(jù)漢語(yǔ)式思維逐詞翻譯,應(yīng)從句式的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā),使用適當(dāng)?shù)膯卧~、短語(yǔ)和句型表達(dá)。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意:內(nèi)容應(yīng)密切結(jié)合表格中所給的數(shù)據(jù)以及自己的實(shí)際經(jīng)歷,有敘述,有議論。然后結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際情況,對(duì)如何與父母良好相處,發(fā)表自己的看法。【答案】How to get along well with parentsMore and more people begin to focus on the parentchild relationship. Here’s my understanding of how to get along well with our parents.CYCRC did a survey in the United States and China. The results showed that % of Chinese children often talk to their parents, far fewer than the Americans. More understanding lies in American parentchild relationship. I think we should not only talk often but open our heart. For example, when I got low marks in exams, I always talked to my parents. They helped me find the reason and encouraged me. I also shared my secrets and worries with them. A good relationship requires efforts from both parents and children. As children, getting well with parents is of great importance to us. We should find a proper way to create a healthy parentchild relationship.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以How to get along well with parents為題,就中國(guó)青少年研究中心(CYCRC)近日對(duì)中美兩國(guó)親子關(guān)系問卷調(diào)查的結(jié)果進(jìn)行介紹,并結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際經(jīng)歷,發(fā)表自己的感謝。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表選取并整合你認(rèn)為有用的信息,結(jié)合你的實(shí)際經(jīng)歷以How to get along well with parents為題寫一篇感想。假設(shè)你是張華,你正在以“如何與父母更好地相處” 為題進(jìn)行英語(yǔ)自主課程研究。以及狀語(yǔ)從句等;然后緊扣要點(diǎn),動(dòng)筆寫作,在寫作過程中,要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡,必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞,使文章過渡平穩(wěn),自然流暢;最后,要仔細(xì)檢查有無(wú)單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等,還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理,有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言,大小寫是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。句型:When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins;Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference。例文點(diǎn)評(píng):例文采用的是三段式;用第一人稱來(lái)敘述為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么;時(shí)態(tài)采用的是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),描述建議時(shí),描寫具體,條理清晰。假如你是李華,請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文投稿,談?wù)勎覀兠媾R的主要環(huán)境問題是什么,為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么,以及你的期望。 learning from 4. was about to 5. end up being 二、英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)專項(xiàng)訓(xùn)練2.環(huán)境保護(hù)人人有責(zé), 如果我們每一個(gè)人都能珍愛美麗地球 保護(hù)自然資源,相信我們的家園會(huì)越來(lái)越美好。 the more 2. pale as chalk3. The other half。s jokes may______ ______ ______ not very funny. 許多在愚人節(jié)開的玩笑最后并不是那么有趣。4. I______ ______ ______ go up when I decided to get a coffee ,這時(shí)我決定先去買杯咖啡。2. His face was always ______ ______ ______.他總是面色蒼白。 15 . I will remember this lesson forever( )1. A. bags B. books C. money D. information( )2. A. another B. others C. the other D . the others( )3. A. shop B. school C. hotel D. bank( )4. A. nobody B. somebody C. everybody D. anybody( )5. A. give out B. give away C. give back D. give up( )6. A. talk B. quarrel C. walk D. trade( )7. A. send B. sell C. buy D. give( )8. A. danger B. need C. time D. trouble( )9. A. joy B. surprise C. fear D. horror( )10. A. how B. when C. where D. what( )11. A. take B. give C. pay D. send( )12. A. worried B. happy C. excited D. sorry( )13. A. telling B. answering C. asking D. watching( )14. A. easily B. proudly C. sadly D. hardly( )15. A. joke B. pity C. advice D. decision1—5 CCDAD 6—10 ABBBD 11—15 ADCAB二、重點(diǎn)句型展現(xiàn)1.______ ______I got to know Julie, ______ ______I39。t know 10 to say next. Then he replied, Either you buy sunglasses or you 11 back the money. I don39。 An old woman had a cat. The cat was very old to run quickly, and nor was she able to bite it, One day the old cat saw a mouse in the kitchen. she jumped and caught it. But the mouse got out of her mouth and ran away, so the cat could not bite it。請(qǐng)?jiān)阱e(cuò)誤的地方作出記號(hào),增加,刪除或修改某個(gè)單詞。Our voice gives away a lot of information about ourselves. It can tell us our gender(性別)and age. And now, scientists say that it can also tell us our height. Scientists at Washington University, Indiana University and University of California found that listeners could accurately tell the height of speakers, just by their voices. And