【正文】 write what we are going to do on the paper, mark the deadline of each thing clearly and put the paper up somewhere we can see it easily. /It can help us to remember what we have to do ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。【點(diǎn)睛】書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。12．B解析：We all know it is being more and more important to protect our environment well. But some people don’t care about it .They throw litter into the river and even worse factories also put waste into the river, the river is full of rubbish. The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days. Factories that burn coal also pollute the air with a lot of black smoke. We hardly ever see blue skies anymore.I think everyone in our hometown should play a part in cleaning it up. We should write to the government ,they should close down the factories. Trees are very helpful and important for the environment .We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more healthy .Now, Our hometown has started to face the problem, I believe we can make our country a better place if we keep trying.【解析】【詳解】環(huán)保話題是人們最關(guān)心的話題之一，請(qǐng)以Change for a better China為主題，結(jié)合自己家鄉(xiāng)的變化寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文。要求中已經(jīng)給出了部分提示，動(dòng)筆先應(yīng)先認(rèn)真閱讀提示，確定寫作內(nèi)容。寫作中注意表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)時(shí)的常用句式，注意在表達(dá)不同觀點(diǎn)時(shí)，連詞的使用。內(nèi)容上應(yīng)注意描述的全面性；語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文緊扣要求對(duì)家鄉(xiāng)做了簡(jiǎn)單介紹，內(nèi)容完整，用了表格中的信息。2.句式豐富。表述靈活。銜接自然，順暢。文中用到了一些好的句型：The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days.；We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more 。13．B解析：The person who inspired meMany people around gave me deep impressions. They helped me, encouraged me and inspired me. But the person who inspired me most, I think, is my friend Wang Peng. Wang Peng is a small thin boy with two big black eyes. He doesn39。t talk too much, but always keeps a smile on his face. He is warmhearted and ready to help others. If I need any help for my math exercises, he is always the one that can help me out. As a good student, he studies very hard. In the early morning, you can see him stand near a tree and read English intensively. Few students can arrive at school as early as he is. He also does well in many sports, such as badminton and pingpang. He got the first prize in last year39。s pingpang petition.You can see the good personality and the spirit of persistence in this small body. He is my idol and I wish I could be a student as good as he is.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以The person who inspired me為題，介紹一個(gè)曾經(jīng)激勵(lì)過(guò)你的人。題目中用問(wèn)題的形式給予了提示，審題可知，短文應(yīng)包括兩個(gè)部分的內(nèi)容：首先介紹這個(gè)激勵(lì)過(guò)你的人是誰(shuí)，他是怎樣的一個(gè)人；然后介紹他是如何激勵(lì)你的。學(xué)生們可以這兩個(gè)問(wèn)題為提綱，發(fā)揮想象力，充實(shí)細(xì)節(jié)信息，組織語(yǔ)言，連貫成文。短文應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主來(lái)敘述，人稱是第三人稱和第一人稱，注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式的變化。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意：首先要符合題目要求，包括題目中要求的所有信息，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意上下文的銜接。其次應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)的不同，不要按照漢語(yǔ)思維逐詞翻譯。應(yīng)該從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)入手，寫完整的句子?？梢院?jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主，輔以并列句、復(fù)合句。為提升文章檔次，應(yīng)使用高級(jí)詞匯以及復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)。同時(shí)語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分使文意連貫、自然?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，介紹了一個(gè)曾經(jīng)激勵(lì)過(guò)自己的人。短文有以下幾個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn)：首先文章內(nèi)容完整，層次清晰，短文分三段，第一段先介紹了這個(gè)人是誰(shuí)，第二段描寫了這個(gè)人身上的品質(zhì)以及對(duì)自己的應(yīng)選；最后一段結(jié)尾。各部分內(nèi)容安排合理，主次分明。其次短文中使用了正確的人稱和時(shí)態(tài)，文章以第三人稱和第一人稱為主來(lái)敘述，主要使用了一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)，動(dòng)詞形式變化準(zhǔn)確，注意了第三人稱單數(shù)形式以及過(guò)去式形式的變化，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范。用詞準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)言得體，句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。短文中使用了一些較好的句型和短語(yǔ)，如But the person who inspired me most, I think, is my friend Wang Peng.、Wang Peng is a small thin boy with two big black eyes.、He doesn39。t talk too much, but always keeps a smile on his face.、If I need any help for my math exercises, he is always the one that can help me out.、He also does well in many sports, such as badminton and pingpang.、He is my idol and I wish I could be a student as good as he 。14．B解析：We are going to graduate from our middle schools, and we will make a choice to enter a boarding school or a day school. Both kinds of school have their advantages and disadvantages.If we choose a boarding school, we will save time to study. However, we may have less time to stay with our family. If we choose a day school, parents can know more about our studies. At the same time puter games and TV plays may make a bad influence on us. As for me, I prefer a boarding school. We should pay attention to our studies to get good grades in the high school.【解析】【分析】整體分析：這是一篇給材料作文?？梢苑秩螌?。第一段要寫總體交代你即將升入高中，面臨寄宿（a boarding school）和走讀（a day school）兩類學(xué)校的選擇。第二段要寫詳細(xì)敘述讀寄宿學(xué)校的利弊；讀走讀學(xué)校的利弊。第三段要表述作者自己的選擇和理由?！驹斀狻浚纯从心男┮?？哪些時(shí)態(tài)？人稱？，記敘文？說(shuō)明文？議論文？看圖？還是應(yīng)用文？，單一還是混合。、短語(yǔ)、句型。，并運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)木湫秃瓦^(guò)渡詞銜接。寫完后反復(fù)閱讀修改推敲潤(rùn)色，人稱、時(shí)態(tài)、單復(fù)數(shù)一致等。運(yùn)用自然過(guò)渡法和自然銜接法來(lái)是文章更為地道、通順、純正。用的短語(yǔ)、句型：both kinds of、If we choose a boarding school、At the same time、As for me, I prefer a boarding school、pay attention to、來(lái)增加了文章的亮點(diǎn)?！军c(diǎn)睛】這類作文的寫作方法要注意認(rèn)真審題，注意過(guò)渡性語(yǔ)言的使用。做到：要點(diǎn)要全，表達(dá)要清晰明確，使用短語(yǔ)，句型要準(zhǔn)確，注意避免拼寫和語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。15．A解析：Since creating the civilized city and countryside, all the people in Zibo have made joint efforts（共同努力）. Their good behavior can be seen everywhere.As junior students, we have also made some contributions to the civilized Zibo. Forexample, to protect our environment, we plant flowers and trees. Also, for our own and others’ safety, we obey the traffic rules and never run red light. In addition（此外）, we no longer talk or laugh loudly in 39。s more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need.Besides, we have formed a good habit of throwing rubbish into a dustbin, never littering anywhere. Furthermore（而且）, we are accustomed to （習(xí)慣于）queuing up （排隊(duì)） for a ticket or something else. All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more civilized【解析】亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)，例如make joint efforts，as junior students，for example，obey the traffic rules，run red light，in addition，no longer，in public，and so on，what39。s more，on a bus，in need，be accustomed to，queue up，all in all等。而to protect our environment, we plant flowers and trees./ What39。s more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need./ All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使語(yǔ)言表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。點(diǎn)睛：書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定