【正文】 e親近大自然；volunteer to do something自愿做某事；help sb to do sth幫助某人做某事；take part in sth參加活動。用了一些銜接詞besides等，句子過度自然。用了because引導的原因狀語從句，增加了文章的亮點?？键c：考查提綱作文。9． 朋友是我們生活的組成部分，他們總是在我們最需要幫助的時候陪伴我們。你最好的朋友是誰？你是怎么看待你們的友誼的？請以“My Best Friend ”為題，根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇英語短文。1. 簡要介紹你最好的朋友的外貌和性格。2. 介紹和你朋友之間發(fā)生的一件令人難忘的事；3. 你是怎樣看待你們之間的友誼的要求：1. 語句連貫通順，文章銜接緊密2. 詞數(shù)801003. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實校名及姓名Friends are very important in our life. They always help us when we are in need.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My best friendFriends are very important in our life. They always help us when we are in need. Everyone needs friends to talk with and get confidence from.My best friend is Jenny. She is a quiet girl. She is always friendly and helpful. She is a tall girl with long hair. She does well in all the subjects and gets on well with others at school.I was weak in maths. One day, I failed in maths exam. I was so sad that I couldn’t help crying. Jenny encouraged me a lot. From then on, she helped me with my maths, With her help, I got an A in the next maths exam. I was really thankful to her.I think friendship is a necessary part of our lives. I want to keep our friendship forever.【解析】【詳解】試題分析：這是一個提綱作文。題目給出了標題及寫作要點。根據(jù)題目要求可知，人稱以第三人稱為主。時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時。我們要做的就是用正確的英語句子來組織這些材料，在描寫外貌和性格時，會用到系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意主謂一致關(guān)系。介紹發(fā)生的一件難忘的事情，要用到一般過去時態(tài)。另外在寫作時可以適當使用一些連詞，使之上下連貫，合乎邏輯?！军c睛】人物介紹是記敘文中常見的一種寫作類型。內(nèi)容可以是介紹自己也可以介紹他人，包括姓名、年齡、外貌特征、興趣愛好，有時也可以包括日?；顒?。時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。在介紹長相時用“be+形容詞”來描述人物的身高、體重、身材等；用“have/has + （straight/curly） hair / （big/small） eyes/nose/mouth”來描述頭發(fā)或五官。用“wear + 某種衣服”來介紹某人的穿戴。用be good at doing ，用like sth./doing “My/His/her favorite + 名詞+ is …”來介紹某人的最愛。當主語是第三人稱單數(shù)時，注意主謂一致關(guān)系。10．現(xiàn)在智能手機（smartphone）越來越普及，很多中學生都有智能手機。請你根據(jù)下面的提示，寫一篇不少于80詞的英語短文，談一談你對智能手機的看法，可適當發(fā)揮。提示：在生活中你用智能手機做什么？智能手機對你的生活產(chǎn)生了怎樣的影響？你對中學生使用智能手機有什么看法？______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：The smartphone is being more and more popular nowadays .I also have a smartphone .I usually use it to send text messages, play games,watch videos, listen to music and learn English .It is very useful and convenient. In fact,the smartphone makes my life colorful. However ,every coin has two I spend too much time playing games on the smartphone and get bad results in exams. So I think we students should use our smartphones properly and don’t use them too much .We should pay more attention to our studies.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文，要求根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示，寫一篇英語短文，談一談你對智能手機的看法。文章時態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱主要用第一、第三人稱。首先認真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作。在寫作時，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性，要層次清楚，要點分明，中心突出。同時要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤。