【正文】 ng it up. We should write to the government ,they should close down the factories. Trees are very helpful and important for the environment .We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more healthy .Now, Our hometown has started to face the problem, I believe we can make our country a better place if we keep trying.【解析】【詳解】環(huán)保話題是人們最關心的話題之一，請以Change for a better China為主題，結合自己家鄉(xiāng)的變化寫一篇英語短文。要求中已經(jīng)給出了部分提示，動筆先應先認真閱讀提示，確定寫作內容。寫作中注意表達觀點時的常用句式，注意在表達不同觀點時，連詞的使用。內容上應注意描述的全面性；語言的表述應該符合語法的結構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣?！军c睛】本文緊扣要求對家鄉(xiāng)做了簡單介紹，內容完整，用了表格中的信息。2.句式豐富。表述靈活。銜接自然，順暢。文中用到了一些好的句型：The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days.；We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more 。11．D解析：Dear DavidI39。m writing to tell you something about our discussion today.The students have their own plans about how to spend a meaningful summer vacation. Half of the students plan to travel at home and abroad. They want to relax and enjoy the beautiful scenery. Thirty percent of students plan to read more books. They believe that reading can increase knowledge. Reading books can make people smart and develop interests. 20% of them plan to take part in social practice activities. They want to exercise themselves and make new friends. I39。m going to take part in social practice activities, too. I want to learn something new and get good experience from these activities.Best wishes!YoursLi Hua【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如how to do，spend a meaningful summer vacation，half of，plan to do，travel at home and abroad，enjoy the beautiful scenery，take part in，social practice activities，make new friends 等。而非謂語動詞結構The students have their own plans about how to spend a meaningful summer vacation./ Reading books can make people smart and develop believe that reading can increase ，豐富了短文內容，使表達多樣化，是本文的亮點。在學習中注意總結牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章表達更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結構以便得到較高的分數(shù)。12．E解析：Every Spring Festival I receive a lot of lucky money from my parents and relatives. Now I even get it through WeChat or Alipay. I usually buy some of my favorite books, school things and some fancy clothes. Sometimes I also buy some gifts for my parents.In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video games. Second, it is a good idea to buy something useful for our parents or teachers so that we can show our love to them. What is more, why not donate our lucky money to the poor kids in need? Helping others makes us happy.All in all, let us manage our lucky money properly. We should use our money in a meaningful way.【解析】【詳解】每年春節(jié)，每個孩子都能收到來自長輩的壓歲錢（luckymoney）。隨著生活水平的提高，大部分孩子得到越來越多的壓歲錢，有些甚至通過微信（WeChat）或支付寶（Alipay）收壓歲錢。同學們該如何管理自己的錢，讓自己的錢用得更有意義？這是一篇給材料作文，本題所給材料比較詳細，寫作中注意將所給內容表達出來，不能逐字翻譯。通過閱讀材料可知這篇短文主要使用的人稱就是第一人稱，時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，注意謂語動詞的變化。動筆前可以按照材料內容列出簡單提綱，寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關系。上下文之間可以適當使用連接詞?！军c睛】文章使用了很好的短語和句子：In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video 。13．B解析：Students in our school have one thing in mon an interest in sports. But different students have different reasons for taking part in sports.Many students have sports when they feel tired after study. They just want to relax themselves and have fun. Most boys love sports. They take part in all kinds of sports in order to bee stronger. They join in the sports that interest them most, such as soccer, basketball and volleyball. As for girls, they want to lose weight. They want to keep slim, so they also like taking exercise.In my opinion, no matter what reasons we have, we all can get a lot from sports.【解析】【詳解】本篇寫作主要是談論自己對運動的觀點和看法，應該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，寫作要點要包括：。（多數(shù)學生的觀點、男生的觀點、女生的觀點）。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)，主謂一致，在文中使用了時間狀語從句，定語從句，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如have fun，in order to，as for，in my opinion等。增強邏輯關系，增加上下文意思連貫，句子通順，行文連貫。14．H解析：Mobile phones have been used widely in our daily life today. With the development of economy, mobile phones are more and more widely used in our daily life. However, some parents and teachers have different ideas about whether the students should use mobile phones at school. Some students are for it. They think that it is convenient to contact with parents. Mobile phones will make them more interested in learning so that they can learn more quickly and easily. Some teachers are against it．They think that some students can39。t control themselves and often play games. What39。s worse, some students cheat in exams by using mobile phones. Besides, using mobile phones too much does great harm to students39。 eyes. In my opinion, I think it is helpful for students to use mobile phones in a right way. Firstly，students can learn more knowledge using mobile phones. At the same time, parents and teachers should do something to help students. Only in this way can mobile phones be of help to their studies.【解析】【詳解】本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點，不可遺漏。需在平時積累相關的詞匯，寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關系，上下文之間可以適當使用連接詞。如but, so, then等。可以適當使用高分句型。【點睛】高分句型：I think it is helpful for students to use mobile phones in a right way．我認為正確的方式使用手機對學生是有幫助的。I think+賓語從句。It is+形容詞 for sb to do sth做某事對某人來說是…的。15．D解析：Dear classmates,Summer holiday is ing, and here is my plan for it.First, I39。d like to choose several good books and read them carefully. This can help me open my mind and learn more about the world. I also think it39。s necessary for me to learn at least one skill. I39。m interested in cooking, so I will learn to cook some delicious dishes during the holiday.Second, health is the most important. So I will eat healthily and exercise more. I plan to eat more fruit and vegetables and keep running every day.Third, it39。s a good idea to