【正文】 學(xué)生們都參加到“雙創(chuàng)”活動(dòng)中來(lái)。題目中并沒(méi)有規(guī)定具體的寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容，而是用圖表的形式，列出了寫(xiě)作的提綱。通過(guò)審題可知，這篇短文我們應(yīng)從兩個(gè)方面來(lái)敘述：即應(yīng)該做什么；不應(yīng)該做什么。根據(jù)這個(gè)內(nèi)容，寫(xiě)作時(shí)，把短文分成兩個(gè)層次，這樣可以使文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰、條理。整篇短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，第一人稱we來(lái)敘述。寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意：首先英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯，寫(xiě)漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)，而應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)考慮，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯、短語(yǔ)和句型，以常見(jiàn)的主謂賓或者主系表構(gòu)成的簡(jiǎn)單句為主，穿插使用并列句或者復(fù)合句，改變文章節(jié)奏，提升文章檔次。語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫、流暢?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，向中學(xué)生們發(fā)出號(hào)召，共同參與到城市“雙創(chuàng)”活動(dòng)中來(lái)。首先短文的內(nèi)容完整，文章根據(jù)題目中列出的圖表，補(bǔ)充了具體的寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容，從應(yīng)該做的和不應(yīng)該做的兩個(gè)方面，對(duì)中學(xué)生的日常行為提出了要求。文章條理清晰，有層次。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范，語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)句通順，符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。短文中句子結(jié)構(gòu)以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，也使用了并列句和復(fù)合句以及一些較復(fù)雜的高級(jí)句式，語(yǔ)句之間也使用了較好的連接成分，如We should be polite to others and try to behave well. 、It’s kind of you to help people in need. 、Meanwhile, We can help clean up our city in order to make it clearer and tidier.、We can’t spit anywhere and we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere. At the same time, we shouldn’t break traffic 。9．D解析：I39。m a Dream Teenager Good morning， dear teachers and friends， I am Zhang Ming． It39。s great honor for me to make a speech here． As a fifteenyearold boy， my dream is to be a good teacher． To make my dream e true， I study hard at school and I am good at all my subjects． Also， I am an outgoing and healthy boy who likes football very much， and I really enjoy sports． At school， I always follow the school rules， so I am popular with my classmates and teachers． On weekends， I39。d like to help people． For example， I volunteer to visit sick children in the hospital and cheer them up．In a word， I believe that the man who holds his dream will be able to achieve his dream one day． That39。s all． Thank you!【解析】【詳解】這是一篇圖表作文。學(xué)校開(kāi)展“夢(mèng)想少年”的主題演講活動(dòng)，假如你是張明，要求根據(jù)圖表提示內(nèi)容，以“I39。m a Dream Teenager”為題，寫(xiě)一篇短文，向大家推介自己。根據(jù)所給出的材料提示可知文章時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱主要為第一、第三人稱。首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作。在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中，要將圖表內(nèi)提示信息用英語(yǔ)正確的表達(dá)出來(lái)，要涵蓋圖表中提到的所有要點(diǎn)，注意理順要點(diǎn)，防止漏寫(xiě)。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫(xiě)太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫(xiě)的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤。10．B解析：例文Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. Teaching is my dream job because I would like to share my knowledge with my students and help them solve problems. I am outgoing and helpful. I get on well with children. Besides, the school39。s environment appeals to me and staying with students helps to keep me young and alive. To realize my dream, I have to make full use of spare time to acquire the essential knowledge and enter a good university. What efforts are you making for your dream?Tell me about your ideal job!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本題通過(guò)描寫(xiě)夢(mèng)想中的職業(yè)，讓學(xué)生對(duì)未來(lái)有憧憬，給一部分提示詞，讓學(xué)生有話可說(shuō)。【詳解】首先回答職業(yè)是教師。然后解釋為什么喜歡該工作，因?yàn)榭梢园炎约旱闹R(shí)分享給孩子們，并且喜歡學(xué)校的環(huán)境。為了實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的夢(mèng)想，正在為此作出努力。最后向Bill提出問(wèn)題，結(jié)束全文?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文首先開(kāi)篇功能句Thank you for your ，運(yùn)用多種連接詞，比如because，Besides，To realize my dream, 等使文章連貫性強(qiáng)，長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合，讀起來(lái)朗朗上口，不失為一篇佳作。11．C解析：iPads, ing into the classroomsCan you use an iPad in the classroom? The answer is yes! Recently, students and parents are arguing about the new teaching method.The students don’t think they have to carry heavy bags any more. It’s cool to have lessons over iPads. It’s very interesting to study like that. They believe that they will learn more and better.However,parents think using ipads for too long will influence children’s eyesight. And some poor families can’t afford to buy iPads.I think in some ways iPads are good for us. We can search for information on the Internet at any time. It’s easy for us to chat with our classmates and teachers about our lessons.【解析】根據(jù)題目要求，需要書(shū)寫(xiě)一篇議論文，探討iPad進(jìn)課堂這一現(xiàn)象，以及人們對(duì)此的不同觀點(diǎn)和態(tài)度。文章需要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，第三人稱。結(jié)合觀點(diǎn)式議論文的段落格式，首先在第一段提出問(wèn)題現(xiàn)象，第二段表達(dá)支持這種行為做法的原因和好處，第三段描述反對(duì)人的觀點(diǎn)及原因，最后一段表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)。注意多使用固定短語(yǔ)，固定句型，使文章增色。點(diǎn)睛：對(duì)立觀點(diǎn)式第一段：提出現(xiàn)象。第二段：SomepeopleareinfavoroftheideaofdoingX.Theypointoutthefactthat_______________________支持X的第一個(gè)原因。Theyalsoarguethat_____________________________支持X的另一個(gè)原因。第三段：However,otherpeoplestandonadifferentground.TheyconsideritharmfultodoX.Theyfirmlypointoutthat________________________反對(duì)X的第一個(gè)理由。Anexamplecangivethedetailsofthisargument:________________一個(gè)例子。第四段：Thereissometruthinbotharguments.ButIthinktheadvantagesofXoverweighthedisadvantages.Inadditiontotheabovementionednegativeeffectsitmightbringabout,XalsomayX的有一個(gè)壞處。12．H解析：Mobile phones have been used widely in our daily life today. With the development of economy, mobile phones are more and more widely used in our daily life. However, some parents and teachers have different ideas about whether the students should use mobile phones at school. Some students are for it. They think that it is convenient to contact with parents. Mobile phones will make them more interested in learning so that they can learn more quickly and easily. Some teachers are against it．They think that some students can39。t control themselves and often play games. What39。s worse, some students cheat in exams by using mobile phones. Besides, using mobile phones too much does great harm to students39。 eyes. In my opinion, I think it is helpful for students to use mobile phones in a right way. Firstly，students can learn more knowledge using mobile phones. At the same time, parents and teachers should do something to help students. Only in this way can mobile phones be of help to their studies.【解析】【詳解】本篇寫(xiě)作需注意要求中所提供的要點(diǎn)，不可遺漏。需在平時(shí)積累相關(guān)的詞匯，寫(xiě)作中注意語(yǔ)義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系，上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。如but, so, then等。可以適當(dāng)使用高分句型?！军c(diǎn)睛】高分句型：I think it is helpful for students to use mobile phones in a right way．我認(rèn)為正確的方式使用手機(jī)對(duì)學(xué)生是有幫助的。I think+賓語(yǔ)從句。It is+形容詞 for sb to do sth做某事對(duì)某人來(lái)說(shuō)是…的。13．D解析：Dear Danny,I’m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization（文明） of China, I would like to share something with you.Chinese civili