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rs and try to behave well. 、It’s kind of you to help people in need. 、Meanwhile, We can help clean up our city in order to make it clearer and tidier.、We can’t spit anywhere and we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere. At the same time, we shouldn’t break traffic 。11.E解析:My English StudyHow time flies! My threeyear middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my English study.First, listen more. Listening to the radio is a good way to learn English. We can relax ourselves by listening to English songs. Second, say more. Use spoken English when municating with classmates. Speaking English can enhance the ability and confidence to learn English well. Third, read more English books. Reading can broaden our horizon and help us understand English culture. In addition, learn some grammar rules to better understand and use English. Finally, we can write about our daily life.In a word, only when we develop interest in studying English can we learn it well.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語,為文章增色不少,如look back,listen to the radio,a good way to learn English,relax ourselves,municate with,help sb. do,do more reading,in addition,in a word等。而感嘆句How time flies!,倒裝句only when we develop interest in studying English can we learn it spoken English when municating with ,豐富了短文內(nèi)容,使表達(dá)多樣化,是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性,也更富有條理?!军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維,考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以,考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn),要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式,盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。12.C解析: The Changes in ClassThanks for giving us students a chance to express ourselves about how we study in class. I like the class like think it is very interesting and lively. We can tell stories, play games and listen to music.I think it is open and free. We can study and think by ourselves .We can discuss in groups and show ourselves. We can get more knowledge in this class. The changes in Class are good for us.【解析】【詳解】假如你是李華,你們學(xué)校正在進(jìn)行課堂教學(xué)改革,經(jīng)過一段時(shí)間的適應(yīng),同學(xué)們發(fā)現(xiàn)現(xiàn)在的課堂跟以前比較發(fā)生了一些變化,請(qǐng)你根據(jù)所給提示以“The Changes in Class”為題目,用英語寫一篇100詞左右的文章,談?wù)勀愕母惺芎拖敕?,開頭和結(jié)尾已給出(不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。 結(jié)合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),人稱為單數(shù)第一人稱,注意主謂一致問題,句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu),注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用,寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞,注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系?!军c(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語言簡練文中運(yùn)用了一些好的句型:We can study and think by ourselves .We can discuss in groups and show ourselves. We can get more knowledge in this 。13.C解析:Nowadays many teenagers show great interest in making friends online. Some people think students should make friends on line? Some people say yes. The internet helps make many friends. Chatting on line, students can more freely express their feelings and opinions, and even get help with their foreign language studies. But others think students should not. They say making friends on line is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students get cheated on line.It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us.【解析】【分析】整體分析:這是一篇提綱話題作文。是一篇議論文,第一段要寫贊同學(xué)生網(wǎng)上交友的人的觀點(diǎn),第二段要寫反對(duì)學(xué)生網(wǎng)上交友的觀點(diǎn),第三段要表述作者自己的觀點(diǎn)?!驹斀狻勘酒魑囊笞髡呔蜕暇W(wǎng)交友發(fā)表意見,寫作之前要認(rèn)真閱讀所給提示,確定文章中心。注意文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。文章要有層次、流暢??梢赃m當(dāng)發(fā)揮,寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞,注意上下文的緊密聯(lián)系,要符合邏輯關(guān)系?!军c(diǎn)睛】這類作文的寫作方法要注意認(rèn)真審題,可以分三段寫:贊成;反對(duì);你的看法。注意過渡性語言的使用。做到:要點(diǎn)要全,表達(dá)要清晰明確,使用短語,句型要準(zhǔn)確,注意避免拼寫和語法錯(cuò)誤。14.D解析:Dear Liz Payne,I’m Li Hua, a middle school student learning in Grade 3 in China. I’m writing to tell you that our city will have a Winter Camp during this winter vacation. I hope to have a chance to visit London Canal Museum. From , I know you will have a report “An Update on the Cotswold Canals”February 6th, which will happen during the same period of our Winter Camp. And I also hope to listen to your talk so that I can know more about the Stroudwater Canal, the Thames and Severn Canal. What’s more, I hope to learn more about London Canal Museum and even more about the UK.I’m looking forward to your reply!Yours,Li Hua【解析】這篇作文要求我們以中學(xué)生李華的身份,給Liz Payne寫一個(gè)留言。文章內(nèi)容主要包括三個(gè)部分:首先是介紹自己的身份;然后寫留言的目的,包括冬令營的時(shí)間、想要去參觀London Canal Museum以及聽Liz Payne的講座;最后簡單介紹一下你的預(yù)期的收獲。寫作時(shí),應(yīng)根據(jù)題目的這些要求,組織語言,串聯(lián)成一篇短文。通過分析可知,這篇短文應(yīng)使用第一人稱I來敘述,時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)以一般將來時(shí)態(tài)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。注意英語句子的表達(dá)和漢語習(xí)慣是不同的,不能逐詞翻譯,而應(yīng)從句子的整體考慮,使用正確的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以及適當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯、短語和句型,保證句子的準(zhǔn)確性和語言的地道。另外還應(yīng)注意語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分,使文意連貫。穿插一些高級(jí)詞匯和復(fù)雜句式,提升文章檔次和水平,使表達(dá)更加流暢。點(diǎn)睛:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整,包含了題目要求的所有信息,沒有遺漏要點(diǎn)。作者主要從三個(gè)方面敘述:首先介紹了自己的身份和寫留言的目的;接下來詳細(xì)介紹了自己參加這次冬令營的愿望;最后是一個(gè)簡單的結(jié)尾。如果分段敘述效果則會(huì)更好,那樣會(huì)使文章的層次更加清晰。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱,文章以第一人稱、一般將來時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主,謂語動(dòng)詞形式準(zhǔn)發(fā),語法規(guī)范,符合英語句子的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。短文以簡單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主,也使用了一些復(fù)合句和較高級(jí)的句型,如I’m writing to tell you that our city will have a Winter Camp during this winter ;From , I know you will have a report “An Update on the Cotswold Canals” February 6th, which will happen during the same period of our Winter ;And I also hope to listen to your talk so that I can know more about the Stroudwater Canal, the Thames and Severn 。整篇文章語句通順、意思連貫、表達(dá)流暢。15.H解析:How will you spend the ing summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions.Some parents think kids should get ready for high school in the sum?mer so it39。s important to take summer courses. They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it39。s time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go sightseeing.In my opinion we can have a talk with our parents. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. We need to relax ourselves after working so hard at school. It39。s good for us to do some sports.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文,本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點(diǎn),動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn),然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮.寫作中,應(yīng)注意描述的全面性,盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上;結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容,可知本文主要是第三人稱,一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述.語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣.適當(dāng)使用連詞,做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關(guān)系.【點(diǎn)睛】這篇短文用到了一些好的句型:They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it39。s time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go 。16.B解析:We are going to graduate from our middle schools, and we will make a choice to enter a boarding school or a d