【正文】 的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。3. 文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個(gè)人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。Dear Sir/Madam,I would like to express my thanks to you. During my twomonth stay in Nanjing, I feel really grateful for what you have done for us.【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,I would like to express my thanks to you. During my twomonth stay in Nanjing. I enjoyed myself very much.I took the rich and colourful courses. I have learned Chinse Kungfu from a . is really amazing! I also know something about Chinese papercutting in Art I can’t speak have little difficult talking with the teachers and students here,theyare always ready to help me.I felt excited when I spent a weekend with a family. In their family,they taught me how to make also visited Confucins had a good time together. I feel really grateful for what you have done for us.【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇書(shū)信作文。根據(jù)以下提示，以 Neil的名義，用英語(yǔ)給 Sunshine Middle School 校長(zhǎng)寫(xiě)一封感謝信。文章時(shí)態(tài)用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，人稱主要為第一人稱。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，考生要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫(xiě)太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫(xiě)的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤?！军c(diǎn)睛】點(diǎn)睛：首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作，在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。7．馬上就要畢業(yè)了,班里的同學(xué)都在討論應(yīng)該如何慶祝初中畢業(yè)。以下是你的三位朋友的想法和理由。請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)簡(jiǎn)要介紹他們的打算，并談?wù)勛约邯?dú)特的想法。為父母煮一餐飯。感謝他們的付出Tom做義工。證明自己長(zhǎng)大了，有能力幫助他人Cathy舉行聚會(huì)。放松心情、開(kāi)心一下Jane…….?！璝ou注意：1．詞數(shù)在80左右。（短文的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）2．短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。行文連貫，表達(dá)清楚，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范。3．不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個(gè)人信息，否則不予評(píng)分。提示詞：義工volunteer(n.)These days, students in our class are discussing how to celebrate our ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】These days, students in our class are discussing how to celebrate our graduation. Here are some ideas from my friends.Jane plans to hold a big party with her friends to relax and have fun. Tom will cook a big meal for his parents. He wants to thank them for what they have done for him. Cathy is going to be a volunteer. She wants to show others that she has grown up and is able to help those in need.As for me, I will go traveling around with my friends. Traveling can not only enrich my knowledge but also leave me a good memory with my friends.【解析】試題分析：這是一篇話題作文。本文給出了一些要點(diǎn)。仔細(xì)審閱題意，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái)。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用一般將來(lái)時(shí)來(lái)寫(xiě)。寫(xiě)作中要適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系?！緦?xiě)作亮點(diǎn)】這篇短文語(yǔ)句通順，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確。特別一些固定句型和短語(yǔ)的運(yùn)用，使文章增色，例如，plan to，not only …but also…等，上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。8． 人類(lèi)只有一個(gè)地球。根據(jù)提示，以“Saving the Earth”為題，寫(xiě)一篇80詞左右的短文。提示: ；，損害健康；，亂排廢水；，使我們的家園更加美麗。 【答案】Saving the EarthThe earth is our home. We should take care of it. But some things we have done are bad for the earth. We have polluted the earth and made it sick. We cut down too many trees and change rich land into desert. Many factories pour waste water into rivers and lakes. Pollution has caused some serious problems. For example, much of the land is poor, some rivers and lakes are dirty. Even the temperature of the earth is rising. The earth is crying for help.What shall we do to save it? My suggestions are that we should plant more trees, put the rubbish into dustbins and stop factories from pouring waste water directly into rivers. After all, we have only one earth. We should do everything we can to protect it, or we’ll be punished and lose our home.【解析】試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文,動(dòng)筆前首先要認(rèn)真審題,弄清題意。然后根據(jù)主題組織材料，確定寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容。寫(xiě)作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述。語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系?！玖咙c(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文包含了所有要點(diǎn)，能?chē)@內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，內(nèi)容具體、豐富。應(yīng)用了較豐富的語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯，用詞準(zhǔn)確、句子通順、行文連貫、表達(dá)清楚，具有較強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力。層次清晰，語(yǔ)言地道，主題鮮明，內(nèi)容翔實(shí)，格式正確，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。使用了一些比較好的字句。比如：one of the biggest problems in the world；such as比如；not only……but also……；We must try our best to……等。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用, 讓文章更出彩。考點(diǎn)：考查提綱類(lèi)作文9． 閱讀可以使人開(kāi)闊視野，閱讀可使人心曠神怡，不管是參加中國(guó)漢字聽(tīng)寫(xiě)大會(huì)，還是中國(guó)詩(shī)詞大會(huì)，都需要有良好的閱讀基礎(chǔ)。下面請(qǐng)大家談?wù)勯喿x的好處并在生活中養(yǎng)成良好的閱讀習(xí)慣。注意：作文字?jǐn)?shù)，不低于60字.參考詞匯：increase our knowledge open up our eyes improve writing skills learn the world affairs without going out make the life colorfulReading is very important in the whole life for people. There are many benefits of reading________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Therefore, start reading, no matter how old you are and what you are doing. Then, you may find the great charm and benefits of reading.【答案】Reading is very important in the whole life for people. There are many benefits of reading.Firstly, reading increases our knowledge. It teaches us skills about getting a good job, cooking and so on. Secondly, reading is a good way to improve writing skills. Before you learn to write, you must know how others write. Thirdly, reading can open up our eyes and we can learn the world affairs without going out. we can know how things happened in the history and how to avoid bad things from happening. Finally, reading all kinds of books can make our life colorful. Therefore, start reading, no matter how old you are and what you are doing. Then, you may find the great charm and benefits of reading【解析】此篇書(shū)面表達(dá)是根據(jù)提示介紹讀書(shū)的好處及養(yǎng)成良好的閱讀習(xí)慣。文章的時(shí)態(tài)以寫(xiě)作時(shí)為主。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意firstly，secondly，thirdly，F(xiàn)inally的使用。開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題，分析讀書(shū)的好處。最后發(fā)出呼吁讓人們讀書(shū)。